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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bluemoon255
Did you just kill them😲 how could you do this to me😭
beautifully written, baisa. It was sad to read about their final moments but so glad that you wrote the next part too. It reminded me of the beautiful last scene from the movie gladiator. so glad u gave them their happily ever after even if it is in another world. awesome job baisa.

LOL i was worried about how readers would take this death, especially of our beloved parud, but glad you enjoyed it overall.*hugs*

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

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Posted: 9 years ago

This OS reminds me a heart touching poem...

So I thought I'd share with you..

guzishta mosamon ka ist'aaraah ban k rehti hay

shabaan-e-hijar man roshan sitarah ban k rehti hay

mandairon par charaghon ki lo'yen jab thartharati hain

nagar main na umeedi ki hawayen sansanati hain

gali main jab koi aahat koi saya nahi rehta

dukhay dil k liye jab koi bhi dhoka nahi rehta

ghamon k bojh say jab tootnay lagtay han shaanay tu

yeh un pay haath rakhti hay...kisi hamdard ki surat

guzar jatay hain saaray qaafilay jab dil ki basti say

fizaa man tairti hay dair tak...yeh gard ki surat

mohabbat dard ki surat

Poet Amjad Islam Amjad

Beautiful OS..

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jisa

@jisa

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Posted: 9 years ago

i have no words to tell how awesome...n heart touching it was..
loved it...every bit... :)

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mona

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Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

thanks for pm coz i am not eally active these days so i would have missed it.
this is amazing i got goosebumps reading this the way u descibed his anger .loved it.( okey this was for first os ) i am pretty late i know

now coming to the second os . did u just killed them man but anyway it was amazing i loved it too.
u guys are brillant.Edited by automaticstart - 9 years ago

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