Wow.
With each and every installment, this forum's writers just make me want to mouth that word over and over again.
Rae, this was unbelievably brilliant. And it just made me immensely in awe of you.
The scene, when his anger, his hatred is being described. I saw it all with wide eyes as I read on. It was as if the hatred was seeping out from my laptop screen, and I was puzzled for a few moments, as to how will you turn this turmoil... this rage... this unbridled anger into something called peace.
When Mala felt the hatred for herself, my heart wrenched in pain, for that was how I see her. For that was a really natural reaction of a mother who finally realizes she is the destroyer of her own off-spring. Who realizes it is too late to salvage the most precious bond know to mankind...
And then, his slow cries and Paro's soothing voice. I was reminded of the recent scene when he cries in her lap... How she soothes him as if thats what she was made for.
Aaah! Brilliant I say!
And then finally... It slowly seeps into you as it seeps into Mala... That her child is in better hands... So what if she damaged him, he has finally found someone who has repaired him... A mother, who thanks the lord that her child has found trust... found love again...
And that is what gives her peace.
Amazing piece Rae! *Hugs*
Can't wait for Zara's work tomorrow!! 😃
Edited by _SenbonZakura_ - 9 years ago