This took the word adorable to a whole new level! I love that Rudra is so helplessly in love with Paro but still feels the need to lie to himself, it's so in keeping with his onscreen character. I thought this ritual of the bangles was beautiful, not only because he orchestrates it but because Paro participates - they both are hungry for each other. And whilst there's this underlying passion, it's all about her smile - as you've said - and it makes this activity pure and innocent. Sanaya has a beautiful smile and I'm so glad you've worked it into an OS, I think you've really managed to do it justice.
I also loved Rudra - the BSD major who has (I'm assuming) excelled in numerous army missions, uses his training to please his wife. I thought your use of words such as "hunt" and the comparison to deer hunting in particular was apt for the situation - Paro certainly does have doe eyes, the lucky girl! I found your description of how besotted he is to be wonderful! I felt so gushy reading the bits where he can't help but try to make her smile, I think I've definitely caught Rangrasiya fever!
You're one of my favourite writers, I always bookmark and favourite your stories so whenever I feel like I need a Rangrasiya high over the weekend, I can just drown into the bliss you provide. This was a fantastic OS, well done Navin-Di :)
P.S. I don't want to sound demanding, but when do you plan on updating your Yesterday and Tomorrow series?
Tannu x
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