OS: Smile (new--May 23rd) - Page 2

Seeta

@LadyR

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

The smile of a couple who have each other to love... each other to call their own... finally their restless sad hearts have a reason to smile.. nicely done

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Meena

@chotidesi

IF-Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Freaking hell.

You need to stop making me jealous.

This is not cool, Navin Di. Not cool at all. Your imagery has me in a puddle on the floor when I'm supposedly analyzing the true meaning of Grapes of Wrath.

Damn you.

In the best possible way.

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

That was beautifully written:) It brought a smile to my face..

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-NatureLover-

@-NatureLover-

Senior Member

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

OMG!!! That was so freaking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Her smile Just wow...the way you have described a husbands unsaid love and admiration for his wife

You are too good Navin-ji...everytime I think...this is it...the very next day you amaze me with another masterpiece..👏

Loved everything about this sweet and Romantic OS...

Love you..

Sambhavi..

Edited by tic-tac - 9 years ago

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shhaina

@shhaina

Newbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear Navi,

loved your newest bangle- smile write up. Its pure sweet magic of love and romance. It has the purity of emotion. I has that water in our mouth before tasting your favorite dish. It portrays the the best part of love that is surety of happy ending but savoring it before the actual ending.

I loved it so much that I read it twice before replying to you. It was an unexpected gift. Thank you dear.😊

Write more of such sweet OS

Love u

Shhaina

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piccola1

@piccola1

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

You have me as smitten with your tales, as the Major is smitten with his sweetheart..!

Thanks for making my weekend feel delicious ! I am gonna read and reread this, to soak in the lovely images this evoked..

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...pinky...

@...pinky...

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

This made me smile! Fantastic read! Thank you for this!

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farheen75

@farheen75

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 9 years ago

This story only didn't make the major smile but left me with a huge smile on my face as well... It was so beautifully written that I really don't know how to praise u.

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