CHECKMATE...RAGNA SS Chapter 8 pg 20 updated 26/06/2014 ;) - Page 6

Fantastic writing love the build up 

Originally posted by: oaz30

Fantastic writing love the build up 

awww...thank u!!

Originally posted by: amy.r

Hahahaha...only if he goes there will the final pieces fall into place!!😛

Actually I am quite amused that even in our stories we cant bear Rags going anywhere near Pakhi!! This is called an bombastic impact!!🤣
Edited by amy.r - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: amy.r

Thanks Charu!! not to worry, I was never a Pakhi fan nor will I ever be!!😃

very well written...👍🏼

I just loved the way you have expressed the emotions...

Itz amazing... 

Originally posted by: LaughItOff

I just loved the way you have expressed the emotions...

I mean of Rags... his silent remorse, and the way he is left alone...

I loved it... I am eagerly looking forward for the next part...

 

Ohh! and as for the nupital night of Pakhi... even the thought makes me sick

Thank u...and as for the emoticon I loved it!!😆

Originally posted by: sapnapari

Itz amazing... 

just potrayed each n every emotion nicely... 😊

Tks sapna!!😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written...👍🏼

🤗thank u!! by the way, whats ur name??