New Arhi FF: Deceitful love,chp 1-7,#2 link pg 1 - Page 6

awe awesome awesome and simply awesome...very interesting story :)...khushi with sid malhotra...hmm thing going perfect...but the parcel...and her world stilled...dying to read next chap dear...pls load it on thread asap :) Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago

Congrats on your new story and update de others plss w8ing

Oho...what with the suspense? What was in that box?

Sid's reality? Is it happening? A heartbreak for Khushi?

In all this update from Khushi's POV I felt her happiness, her anticipation of a future with Sid, her excitement of being with him, her pain if being apart. But the I was hardly any emotions reflected by Sid.

Worst he didn't even put his proposal in words. Agreed it was not required but he simply just put the box in her hand didn't even open it himself for her.

May be I'm going to much negative on Sid but until I get an update from his POV or come to know what was in the courier box can't help it. So yeah Update Soon!!!

P.S. When will you update your other stories, ESPECIALLY MYM???

Okay! I'm literally dying nw to read what's tht in the box !! & You bloody had to stop thr itself haina?! -_-

Ughh! :x

I jus hope its not a heartbreak fr khushi !!
Let siddharth be dead or sumthn ! Bas!

Waiting fr my arnav's entry! <'3

Lookin forward to read sooner !!

Really really nice n intresting update...So Sid is cheating on Khushi??

Theparcel surely contains pictures of Sid with another girl or girls!

Very interesting start. So what's in the parcel?

Mysterious parcel. All is not well ! Can't wait to find out. Waiting for the next update

Awesome update

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

An interesting concept. Khushi is happily engaged to another guy.

Looking forward to chapter 2