ZaYa OS: Unfinished Business

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: zubiya92
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Thanks for pm

Thanks so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva
Outstanding os!!
Loved it to bits!!!

Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: BlossomingRose
Omggg, this is just amaazingg 👏
Loved each and every bit of it! 😳

Do continue to write more!

I'm really happy you liked it. Will definitely write more soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik
Unreserved on Page 1. 😊

Read and replied! 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: hilly
Loved it, dammit ! :D
You sure this is first OS on them ?
...
this was HOT and truly SO adorable. I love how you kept their characters, their mischievous nok-johks intact thorough.
Zain's confession- sigh* So natural, uttered so oh casually with his signature name for her 'MKB'
Truly enjoyed the different phases you showed in their characters thorough out- esp. Zain Miyaan's; going from being cheeky and adorable to being intensely passionate- what characters shades.. and loved Aaliya confusion to realizing to accepting her feeling was just as amazing.
Her:
I
Love
You
... beautifully enacted.

Thank you. 100 percent sure that it's my first on this couple.

Haha, thanks. I wouldn't change Zain for the world. I love his naughtiness and will continue to love it till my last breath. It's so perfect. Exactly! I wanted to show Zain as the guy who was spontaneous and said things in the spur of the moment. Just like he usually it.

Thanks again. I really enjoyed writing this OS and I'm really happy that you enjoyed it just as much.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: unishaz
superb.. Love it.. Thanks for pm dear..

Glad you liked it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
I would honestly have preferred this over the producer and Barkat is Bobby drama that did happen in the party.
Wonderful OS

Lol. Unfortunately it is only a figment of my imagination. But I hear you, I wasn't particularly fond of that situation either. Thanks!