ZaYa OS: Unfinished Business

Okay..so lemme breath first.

You are like seriously getting better and better at this ^^

Mera Beintehaa intezaar khatm hua...the OS is here.

It was Perfection,man! 👍🏼

Loved it. ❤️

I don't know what you've done, but I can't quote the dialogues from the story.

So I guess I'll have to type my favourite lines from the story.

Double work karwa rahi ho aap. 😆

"I really loved them too" he said as he stood in front of the mirror and held the earrings to his ear. *ROFL ROFL* 🤣 🤣Trust Zain to come up with something like this. 😆

"I think they look really nice on me." Anything && Everything looks nice on you baby, but this...I'm not sure. 😆

Nervous Zain is cho chweet. My chunnu munnu. "Thodi tho sharam karo." 😆

And then the intense jealous-wala-Zain. 😳

"I hate it when people stare at what's mine."

"Yours."

Smiriking-wala-Zain. 😉 "Ab dobaraa nikaah aise hi thodi kar liya tha, Mamu Ki Bhaanji"

And naughty Zain. "Let's enjoy a private party." ☺️ Ohoo...Kya iraade hain aapke Zain Miyaan?

He said to her as his hands reached at her waist and pulled her back flush against him...he silenced her and placed his chin on her shoulder. This was so...Ahhh... ☺️*Sometimes you leave me Speechless, Raz*

"Here's your hug, and here's your husband." Mast dialogues. 👍🏼

Zain's confession && Aaliya's confusion.

And she ripped his shirt off?!?! 😲😲

Aaj kal Aaliya mein bahot taqat aa gayi hai...kabhi dhakka mar kar bed par girati hai aur kabhi shirt phaad deti hai. 😆

And Zain leaves no chance of chedofying her. "I didn't know you were so impatient to sleep with me." 😆

Aaliya's:

"I"

"Love"

"You"

One word: Beautiful.

And then the completion of the unfinished business. 😳

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Aur uske baad I fell in Love with your works all over again. 👏

AWriterAtHeart wrote an OS on my insistence! 😲 That's like a dream come true. I'm not even kidding.

And I liked your 'plotbunny' (God. How do you come up with such cute words? 😆).

You don't need to be 'nervous as hell'. Your works are meant to be appreciated. And if someone doesn't like them, he's lying.

Looking forward for more of ZaYa.

Ek Realm Of Mystery is forum per bhi banana hai aapko.

Keep writing.

You're beautiful. :)

Sorry for this longish comment.

You were not bored, I hope?

It's 3:30 AM here. 🥱

Gotta sleep.

And I have to catch up with Silk Ribbons too.

P.S.-- Itna bada review kabhi nahin likha meine. 😆 This is a record-breaker. And ThankYou for the PM. ❤️