SS: Unraveled. *COMPLETE* 22/4/14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: radhikalaya

I read this yesterday soon after you posted it. I swear I thought I had commented on it, evidently IF ate it up.

This is so beautifully written and how I wish something like this actually plays out on the show. Do you have an index of all your writings?

Originally posted by: gunji

where is Part 2???...i had been dreaming of such a sequence for long...

such a sequence has to come at some point in the show too...Paro had been leaving traces of her in his life..like she has his rudraksh which i suppose she will leave behind...then yesterday she placed the rose in the book..little things that will remind of her..

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Niyo.. Uggh. Tell me when you are updating the second part?

You made my heart ache so badly. 

The thing is, Rudra is the character I feel most connected to at times. And reading this, it felt as if it was HIM. Like seriously. You have amazing hold on him. Not one bit OOC this was. 

The bold italic parts... Ufff.

Just beautifully written. 

Now gimme an update soon! Pretty please?