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Loooved the last para - the rain on the parched desert. 👏Uff, the vows he made. Love that she was preparing to come back the same evening - they can't stay away from each other. 😊 Lovely ending to a beautiful story.
Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Thank you for giving a perfect end of the story.
I thought that Rudra will device a full proof plan to win Paravti back in his life and to confess his love but he rather acted in a very different way.I like that he didn't leave a second after recognizing his love for Parvati and went to confess it to Paro.His eagerness was clearly showed in his eyes and in dishevel and typical majnoo state.The last test in love is patience and Rudra successfully cleared it too with awesome marks when Parvati ignored her in her home. She brilliantly masked her feeling for Rudra, I must say she is a smart lady and I love her character in his story.I love the innocent love confession of Rudra, it was utmost sweet and very Lovely.Parvati too missed him and her condition was same that of Rudra. Their hearts are interlinked then how could they be different from each other anymore.His pure love confession acted as a balm on her wounds and vanished all the misunderstanding and pain in her heart.I love the end and the beautiful words of Rudra for praising Parvati.This was very sweet and beautiful story.
Originally posted by: chotidesi
*sighs dreamily*
What an adorably sweet ending. It makes me want to fall in love, and I am much too young for that!Rudra was absolutely heart-stopping in this one- for once, his complete lack of thought and rash decision making was totally worth it. You describe his emotions so well- it's almost like he's melted into warm, cuddly hot fudge (that's a really awkward simile, but I'm sure you know what I mean 😆). I especially liked this line: He grinned sloppily, just like his fellow officers had accused him of doing and pushed the accelerator to the floor.I also liked the way you described Paro, how you acknowledged her hurt- but you also acknowledged the fact that she does love him too. While I'm all for redemption, I think that as humans- we tend to forgive easily. We'll make them suffer, but not indefinitely- eventually, when someone we love admits their mistakes and asks for forgiveness, we will melt and give in, because we love them. It was a very beautiful way of showing that you can be angry, and you can also forgive as well.I do hope you continue writing- I know I'm guilty of putting off certain things in favor of writing (it's a terrible habit, but once something catches hold, it's really hard to let go), but I do hope you'll write whenever you can. I love reading your work- it's such a pleasure, and it flows like a bubbling stream. Wonderful, wonderful fuzzy story, Niyoti Di!
Originally posted by: What_the
Amazed by the parts in bold...Such depth and clarity of thought, Niti..Are you sure that you are not a professional? You should definitely consider it...So excited you are writing a part 3...eagerly waiting!!I must also share with you, that i shamelessly read the update while at work today...surreptitiously alt+tabbing whenever I felt my boss standing over my shoulder...<shaking head in disbelief> I have really got it bad for Rangrasiya... God help me!
Originally posted by: shagun-rocks
yayy!!...you've updated a new chapter..and boy, that was brilliant!..👏..rudra seeking some kind of help from mami was where i went all aww...this man is indeed insanely in love...waiting to read more such romantic pieces from you...really loved your work..👍🏼
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