Pride (20/4) | OS Series: Peccatum | UPDATED- Page 19 | COMPLETE - Page 16

milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

I cannot find any suitable adjective to praise you ...Pride is the best one of the series. so perfectly caught mala's vanity,tejawat's twisted love and dilsher's helplessness 👏

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Exprimere

@Exprimere

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chotidesi

A special thanks to Exprimere, whose lovely sass and wonderful words are a delight- she was the one to help me pick this topic as opposed to the other idea I was playing with.

Aww! 🤗

But all the wonderful ideas were always yours. Talent ki jai ho, I am a mere bhakt of yours.

Ant yes... keep writing. Maybe fiddle with the other topic you were contemplating? But all in good time 😊

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761540

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

this whole series was written amazingly . i loved it .

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custodian75

@custodian75

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely. The complete series was an eye opener into the characters which make the serial. I don't know whether even the CVs have gone as deep as this while writing out the characters.

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Swetha

@Chaandaniya

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is a very good storytelling, very good job on it.

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mozart66

@mozart66

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely series!! Loved all the stories!!

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Okay, I have a question. WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME?????? 😲

I mean this was simply superb! I was actually stunned into silence on reading Greed and it remains my favorite in this series. 👏

You know what, you deserve a separate comment for each of the 7 sins so I'll do just that. 😉

Amazing writing, fabulous characterization, commendable job! 😎

P.S. I am your fan now 😆

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

Groupbie

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow

What an Innovative concept

Just Stunning series

Beautiful work
Im well impressed yaar!

Chak detey phattey!!!

Samina

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jisa

@jisa

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

loved it...read it in one go..!!!!

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Maya

@What_the

Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulations Choti!!!!

Extremely well-deserved...this one's an all-time classic... We can read it again n again n again...n never tire of it...

Originally posted by: Payali09

SS/FF of the Week:

Peccatum

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chotidesi

A series of interconnected yet separate One Shots based around the theme of the seven deadly sins. Pardon the pun, but it would be a sin not to read this thought provoking and insightful piece of brilliance.

Here is your Winning Siggy👏

Here's the link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/4010821

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Maya

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