Pride (20/4) | OS Series: Peccatum | UPDATED- Page 19 | COMPLETE - Page 13

We finally get to the Soldier's POV. I am absolutely amazed at your talented way of telling the same scene from these 3 POV's great work. I have to say, Rudra would have saved any girl on that that truck in Birpur, he is just that type of man. :) Other than that, you got him exactly right, I think. Good connections between the stories. Enjoying it as always. 😊

What more can i say? Other than a nudge on Rudy boy 😳 to go ahead and fulfill your wife's wish ☺️

It was every thing i expected rudra's perspective to be, and so much more!

Loved the way you described the little traits of paro which attracted him and eventually led to him losing his heart to her...just beautiful!

Also, the guilt gnawing at his heart for the way he treated Laila and the powerful emotions he feels for Paro.. the way he alternated between those feelings, as he watched them interact...and finally the way his perception of his wife changes and he realises her inner strength...it was perfect, the way you depicted it all...

Awesome stuff!

Im upset that we have only one more story left in this series... 😭

So u must promise to write more stories after this... Ok?

Wrath ... it was just awesome ... you write really well ...