Pride (20/4) | OS Series: Peccatum | UPDATED- Page 19 | COMPLETE - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice OS 👏 thanks for posting 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
To write about sex is hard
To write about sex and emotions are harder
But to write about sex, emotions and relationship dynamics is definitely the hardest.
You have managed this feat seamlessly, weaving a simple beautiful story of love in between all of this.
Fabulous work Choti!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh this is so exciting! ^_^ I love this entire series.

You have a way with words, it's as if you're weaving magic and you're enchanting me. You seriously are, my god. Paros insecurity and Laila and what the f.

SO RUDRA WANts to to eh? *suggestive wink* this is exciting me for the next instalment 😃

My response cannot fathom the ammount of love I feel for this. Neither can I describe it. I just love it okay? Can we settle for that?

I want him to make he and his wish come true *sexond suggestive wink*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res

unresd on Page 19...Link


Edited by Aish002 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AHHH amazing work dear, just amazing! Your writing style is so original, I'm just waiting to read the rest!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved it !! 
okay out of all i liked lust the best !! 
ur amazing !!!!!!! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sigh.
Res my love. Res for when I can wipe my eyes dry an give a somewhat coherent comment. 


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Posted: 10 years ago
All I was saying while reading ... Wow this girl can write! Flipping heck that was Awesome ! I love how the stories are all connected!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved all the one-shots. Be back for a detailed comment. 
RES
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Posted: 10 years ago

I just came across this series of os's and I must say WOW.

They are are so beautiful and well written. You can feel how everyone is feeling in all of the parts. From Rudra to Parvati to even Laila. Every single part is very apt for what that person was going through at that moment.