Pride (20/4) | OS Series: Peccatum | UPDATED- Page 19 | COMPLETE - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was a awesome update! I must say you have a way if writing that really grabs the readers attention.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is precisely the (cosmic) difference between a wish-fulfillment "mature" piece, and one, that impresses with it's emotional spectrum. These dynamics between the Pati, Patni and "woh" (to put it in a very shallow manner) often suffer due to this one common traitor: communication. The other, is expectation.
The feelings, the tenderness, the hope and the need... was woven through the sheer magic of words. You ARE talented, you know. Never stop writing. And I love you! And I'm really, really sorry for not being able to write more, but just open a dictionary and choose all your favourite words for yourself. You deserve them, and more!
Edited by Exprimere - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Fantastic update 
Envy is even worst than jealousy. It eats up one soul and totally destroyed his/her true self. 
Thank goodness Parvati met Laila just in time and her honest advice and confession vanished her insecurities. 
Truly Parvati and Rudra are especial and Rudra during their intimate time made her feel so. 
Waiting for the next update 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Wow! U write so well! Really looking forward to the next one. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
I love how quick you update! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Very well written parts !!
Loved a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
i loved this .
out of all i love sloth n envy shows how insecure ppl can be , u portray the characters so well especially laila .  
Edited by bebo2050 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chotidesi
just caught up on all the shorts. to say you write awesomely well would be an understatement. 

Loved reading them all, can't wait for the remainder of sins to unfold!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Envy is beautiful story ðŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow that was amazing

So Paro envied Laila but she put everything in prospectus for her

Loved the update