O$- Kahi Ankahi Baate (updated page-19) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Thank you so much for the pm
sorry for late reply
wainting for next part 

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
hey chill... kya chotu sa update tha... ekdm Ittuuu sa...😡 Superb update,,,,
ufff raya k beech ye kabab mein haddi
fir se tapak gaye... knhi toh akela choado unko 😉 haaaye beach pe gaye dono... continue soon...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
nice os
continue soon...
waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pls continue na we r waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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 continue soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry guys... 
this is tooo late i knw... but was seriously bsy...cldnt help myslf from being late...
srrryyy again... 

moving into the story..
lil bit of recap for you guys...

recap :

Ram directs her to a place. 
And asks her to open her eyes. 

Priya opens her eyes looks at ram "kya hian????" 

Ram points in a direction. And priya looked there and is shocked 

Priya,"ye sab???? When did u do this?????" 
Ram,"surprise" 
Priya has tears in her eyes. 



story goes on... :


she gets suprised and teary eyed seeing the people around. it was her family, her father giving her assured look that evrything gonna be fine. she was confused. she dint know how much did he know.

priya then turned to look at ram only to be astonished again to see his family approaching preceded by neha and vikram having naughty grins and krishna ji having the same smile that's of her  fathers.


she was more confused now thinking what was happening. she wanted to take ram away and find what he was up to but alas that was the last thing thing she could do now. The feeling she has towards ram was a secret kept away from her father who otherwise knew every detail of his daughter's move. Though he tried getting this topic priya never answered him fearing his after reactions.


she looked at ram and met her eyes with ram, which revealed his excitment and there he could see the fear in her eyes. He smiled and knelt to the ground and pulled out a ring and contn," will u marry me priya?? promise to b ur side till death sets us apart"


she looked at everybody around her, they still had those smiles, enough to give her cue that it was all pre planned. she smiled with her happy tears and moved her hand forward. ram smile broadened and he slipped the ring into her finger and pecked her finger.

he got up on his feet and moved his hand forward asking her to slip a ring into his finger.

she was astonished. She dint plan anything such, she looked around to see evryone smiling at her discomfort,she so wanted to kick ram for making her embarrssed, and then karthik came for her rescue by giving her a ring.

she looked at the ring and was surprised again as it was the ring of her taste. though her family knew her taste, they could no be so perfect, then she remembered her time with ram and in  an instant knew it was by ram. ram had brought it fr her for this occasion' she felt sorry for thinking  of kicking him and blushed a lil. thinkng of neha's tease of calling them soul mates in their college' which seemed so true.

ram who understood whats going in her mind laughed and indicted his finger.

she smiled and slipped the ring in his finger and hugged him' she could now dare to hug him in public. eyes clouded with tears for the people witnessing the scenes... the sharams...for their daughter had found someone who loved her truly and the kapoors as his son was loved by a someone who loved him as person.


the hug seemed normal to all but only raya knew how much that hug meant how many emotions it carried.They had to break their hug when neha started her usual banter of teasing them.

she came forward and hugged them both. and whispered," baki ka hisab kitab privacy mein cmplt kr lena..." priya blushed to her comment.

and then neha was followed by all other juniors who wished and teased them.

priya then went to meet her father. she cldnot hold her tears, " sorry papa. mujhe nhi pta kab kaise hgya"

sudhir," arey beta isme rone wali kya baat????mujeh toh phel se hi pta tha, meine kha tha na...ram se acha nhi milne wala, ram is a  gem person. take care of him well."

priya nodded through her tears.

krishnaji came their with her son who was now her man. she blushed seeing ram when krishnaji contn," beta dekho mujhe nhi pta tujhe is se pyaar kaise hgya, ye toh ek no. ka golu hain,looking at ram,and ram making faces of irritation... par aaj dekha toh lag rha..tumhare pyar ka kamaal hain jo mera golu beta bhi romantic ban gya, mujhe vihswas hgya ki tumse achi ladki nhi mil skti mere ram k liye, uska ache se khyal rakhna." and blessed her.

Ram priya looked at each other. 

ram desprtly wanted some time alone with priya and same the case with priya. she looked around to find some help, and there she looked to the shore and her mind jumped with the idea.

she turned to her dad who was engrossed in talking to kk," papa mein abhi aayi,iam going near that boat" though she spelled boat,her fingers indicated to the boulders near the sea and left a cue for ram. ram who understood what to do indicated his cell. 

priya smiled and showed a thumbs up sign and moved from there.


she reached the boulders his herself, took out her mobile phone andd called ram. 

ram who was still with his parents looked at his cell as it beeped.his lips curved to a grin, sudhir asked," kaun hain beta??? "

ram,"uncle ek urgent call hain. Ma mein abhi aaya."

kk and sudhir giggles and looked at the boulders in which priya hid herslef and smiled," haan haan call toh ane hi wala tha aur we know how imp it is. jao baat krlo"

ram was embarrassed to the core due to turn of events.he slipped from there and reached to the boulders.

the boulders created privacy from the rest of the world over the shore,very reliable for the couples. as soon as he entered priya hugged him with all her might. he returned her hug the best way possible. ram whispered,"howz my surprise darling???"

priya,"like this" and she broke the hug and before ram knew what she was about to do... she put her hands around his neck pulled him for a kiss.rams hand slid to her waist pressing her while priya curled his hair in her fist. their longing was clearly indicted in that kiss. they seprated gasping for breath when ram nuzzled her neck and roamed his hands on her back, her dress giving him all the access. priya moaned his name as pleasure rushed through her veins.

they had to abruptly stop their romance hearing the cries from a group of people.

they seperated and adjusted and moved out to see a parent crying. raya rushed to her and askd what happned she pointed to the hand feebly viisble in the night water and beeged ram to help  her son out form water. 

ram immediately jumped in to the waters to get hold of the boy drowning, where priya called all her family members to the area. neha cooled her telling ram will b fine he would soon come out with the boy. and she askd priya to lookup who was busy in praying for ram to keep him safe. she nodded a no and contnd her pray. neha then shook her shoulders to make her look up. and there was her man coming out carrying the boy. karthik immediately rushed to ram and moved to the shore,ram was still in the sea,showing priya he is all right.. when a high tidal wave hit him unguard and swept him away into it.

priya shouted,"RAAMMM..."

priya with all others turned numb with the sight in front of them. vikram and karthik rushed to the area only to find nothing. priya collapsed on the spot and neha by her side tryng to give her assurance.

evrybdy knew how high were the currents of water during nghts and there was no sign of ram karthik and vikram hung their heads down not being able to find ram in the waters.


in the split of moment evrything turned upside down. she was shring a life giving kiss with him a while ago and now...???

 she couldnt evan trace him, her life her man. htough everynerve of her was telling hez goona be fine, she couldnt cross over the sight she had seen infront of her.

could she see him ever again????

she had to tell him so many things... she wanted to plan her family with him...she had seen many dreams most of which involved him and now...???? KAHI ANKAHI BAATE...!!!!!  

she cldnt stop the flow of tears... evrybdy was drowned in sadness... 

RAM WAS MISSING... RIGHT FROM INFRONT OF THEIR EYES HE WAS SWEPT AWAY BY THE VAST OCEAN...

evrybdys prayers had only ram returning safe...

SO MANY THOUGHTS...

SO MANY MEMORIES..

JUST ONE PERSON...!!!!


updating after couple of months 

hope this isn't as boring and long...

pls do press like and post your comments... 

thank you all...!!! ðŸ˜Š


P.S.: sandy di aur mini.. no sade andey pls... only veg...!!! and good tomatoes...!!! ðŸ¤£

Edited by chillpc - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Yippe me first 
after long time 
Its awesome 


Truly Im surprised To read the way ram surprised her 
Super happy momen for Priya 
oh my I love their family bonding 
especially Sudhir and krishna ji 
Aww how sweetly he proposed and slid the ring in her finger 
awesomely written 

Oh the kiss was so romantic 
But 
But what ?? when i came to end of the update I was like 
OMG 
what has happened 
How come the feeling will be when the Person of your life ðŸ˜­ swept away infront of your eyes 
I so can understand Priya 
But but please bring him back with super save 

Please 

I want to read next update ASAP re 
Please try to post it sooon 

Edited by luvsakshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dii u r tooo fast...!!! ðŸ˜† ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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  nice  update .. 
I can only  say this nw    

elaborated comment  tommorrow.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chillpc


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