O$- Kahi Ankahi Baate (updated page-19)

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Posted: 2014-04-06T11:53:19Z

chalo iam back...LOL

atlast wala half chod diya..i remmeber but cldnt contn it due to hectc schedule..Ouch

but here is one more.

in a compltly diffrnt scenario. 


As usual...dedicate it to my darln...

usi k liye likha hain... if not for her..i wouldn't pen down a single wordLOL

part1 : page 1

part2: page 7

part3: page 10

part4: page 15

part5: page 19



Clg graduation day...

 

The big auditorium filled with emotions.

 

And students were with heavy hearts as this would be their last day in college.

 

Everybody had different goals to finish, life has to move on.

 

Though every student was sad inside...their smile never left their lips.. Wishing each other all the best for their future, they hugged bidding bye.

 

But there were two souls aching for eachother.

 

Vikram- ram, ab toh bta de usko ki tu us se kitna pyaar krta hain. Aaj aakhri mauka hain ram. Ise chod mat.

 

Vikram was advcng his frnd who is fully decked up in a black tuxedo, with the classic black tie, looking like a perfct man.

 

Ram- mujhe nhi pata wo mujhse pyaar krti hain ya nahi. I can sacrifse my love but not at the cost of my friendship. Agar use pasnd nhi aaya toh jo friendship hain wo bhi nhi rhga...and i cant live without her.

 

Vikram- kya tu use kisi aur ke sath dekh sakta hain???

 

Ram- nahi. 

 

Vikram- ram meri baat sun jo hoga so hoga. Par atleast let her know what u feel for her. Agar usne acpt kr liya toh theek nhi toh u shld move on. Ise hi rhga toh zindagi mein aage badna mushkil hojyga ram.

 

Ram- mein baat krke dekhta hoon.

 

Other corner of the room.

 

Neha- kab batana chahti ho priya??? Askng her best friend who is gazing at the man for her life.

 

Priya gets dstrctd due to.neha.

 

Priya- kya bataun neha??? Itne ishare diye..3 saal se janta hain... Y cant he understand tht i love him.

 

Neha- tu janti kya??? Ki wo tujhse pyaar kr rha???

 

Priya-stop kidding me neha. Wo ram kapoor hain. Aur mera ram hain.. Mujhe pta hain wo mujhse dosti se jyaada kuch nhi xpct kr rha.

 

Neha-this is wat hes thnkng too. Neither he nor u want to move a step forward fearing wat wld happen to ur freindship... But by lettng out ur feelng u wld knw wer u guys stand in each others life. Jo bhi bolna hain aj hi bolde aakhri mauka hain priya. B direct.

 

Priya-dekhti hoon neha. Par uske muh se na handle nhi karpaungi. 

 

Neha- mein hoon na. Trust me...i knw he loves u.

 

One of the member announces the final dance for the evening.

 

All the students start forming couples. Ram and priya move towards each other for the dance. But ram is pulled by esha and priya by rajat for the dance.

 

Ram and priya look longingly at each other.

 

As the soft piano music starts, the lights get dim... Increasing the ambiance of the room to make it perfect for a couple dance. Lightened  candles adding extra effects to the beautiful night accompanied by the pleasant breeze.

 

And the dance starts...

 

As the couples kept changing, priya comes into rams arms.

 

Gazing intently at each other, ram tightens his grip on her waist not letting her to move on.

 

Priya gives a smile..puts her hand on his chest and moves them to his shoulder to grasp, locking other hand in his hand.

 

Ram then slides his hand on her waist who is in  backless red party gown, the frills of the gown arranged beautifully...

 

Locking themselves in each others eyes... Ram moves her to a corner of room away from the lights.

 

And slowly removes his hand from her waist.

 

Priya comes into this world with that.. And looks around.. She sees that they r in one corner and looks at ram suprised.

 

Ram takes her in his hug and whispers, priya mujhe tumse akele mein kuch zaroori baat krni hain...pls mana mat karo.

 

Priya who is still dazed with ram's action unblinkingly puts her arm around him and tightens her grip feeling the cold breeze.

 

Listng to his words...comes out in this wrld...and accepts to talk with him. Ram moves away from her...catches her hand and pulls her into the lawn nearby, giving priya a deaf ear, whoz havng a prob running with her heels..

 

 

 

She jerks her hand, as thy reach lawn..and shouts at him," kya tareeka hain ye ram???"

 

Ram kneels down putting his hand forward," priya, will u b my lady???"

 

Priya has the shock of her life wid this.

 

Shes unable to say a word.

 

Ram seeing this contn. ," priya i started to like u from.the day one, when u were in ur red and white chudidar, curled hair, some hairs kissing ur cheek. U looked like a little baby. Very fresh, very new and very diff to this world.

 

The first day u gave me a hand shake, thats wen we became frnds, due to neha and vikram. The freshers party where u were deckd up in a white saree loose hair... Each and every style of urs has carried me away from the first day.

 

Before u came into my life i was a reckless person, par pta nhi how u chnged me wid ur friendship. I haven't even realized until my dad hugged me fr scrng frst grade. I never believed in love nor i undrstd the concept of love. This has always been something tht i thght i wld never come across. U have changed all the dynamics, the perspectives. Pta nhi kab pyaar kr baitha tumse.i want my day starting with our gd mrng end wid ur gdnyt  Ab i want this forever priya. Tumhare sath jeena hain. Pls acpt this hand. I proms u i wld nvr leave by ur side, and the nxt tym i go on my knees for a grl wld b the symbol of our love. I love u priya.

 

Priya's eyes fill with tears hearing her man's talk. She never thought she would get so much love.

 

Ram but now hung his head seeing no response from her. Seeing this, priya slides her hand into his and ram immediately looks up for confirmation. Priya nods a yes through her teary eyes. Ram gets up and takes her in his tight hug. Priya lets out her cries. And hits on his chest. 

Priya ," itni der krdi propose krne mein. Idiot." and tghtens her hold.

 

Ram," i am still waiting"

 

Priya," kis liye???"

 

Ram,"to hear those 3 magical words. Pls ek baar boldo"

 

Priya comes out of his embrce. And looks into his eyes. Ram holds her face in his palms," pls ek baar. Meine alrdy bht late krdi ab nhi pls."

 

And kisses her forehead.

 

Priya smiles and starts "I"ram kisses her cheek priya shivers but contn "love" ram kisses her other cheek and as she complets her "you" ram takes her lips. Putting his hands on her bare back pulls her towards him joining their bodies. Priya snakes her hands into his hairs for the grip. Both of them lost in their first kiss forgettng the srrndngs.


to be contn... LOL



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thank you guys...Smile

love u all...


Edited by chillpc - 2014-08-18T11:42:17Z
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Posted: 2014-04-06T11:56:00Z
Lovely osHeart...
ufff
etna time kyun lagaya Angry
Pehle confess krte to colg wala love ho jataLOL
are ab yha kyun rokaAngry
grrr
kk...yha koi rokta hai kyaAngry
aage continue kro naDay Dreaming
lol
nhi krogi
madam busy haiWacko
thanku pagaluHug
Edited by Mini1991 - 2014-04-06T12:00:56Z
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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:02:31Z
Hiii  PC ...
Awww thats so lovely OS ... 
Ram & priya in total different back ground 
and so much love on each other 

and their first kiss was on icing on the cake.. Clap
Cont soon 

are you sure gnna cont this otherwise i will complaint your jaan .. LOL

p.s" Hello pc ki jaan , please tell her to cont this story .. Wink
Edited by luvsakshi - 2014-04-06T12:12:46Z
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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:06:09Z
woW
nice Update...
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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:16:12Z
Thanks for pm .. 
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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:17:37Z
Originally posted by Mini1991


Lovely osHeart...
ufff
etna time kyun lagaya Angry
Pehle confess krte to colg wala love ho jataLOL
are ab yha kyun rokaAngry
grrr
kk...yha koi rokta hai kyaAngry
aage continue kro naDay Dreaming
lol
nhi krogi
madam busy haiWacko
thanku pagaluHug

phle isko dekh ke cool hoja... LOL
kyun ki iam nt gvng u this..u have throat pain rght...  ROFL


hehehehe...college wala love hgya toh bada hjyga...isliye graduation day... LOL
mein yhi rokti... LOL
same like my darln...to whom i dedicated this ROFL

hehehehe...haan...lil bsy gng out of town... LOL
will contn aftr comin back and aftr cmpltlng assgnmnts... LOL

my pleasure drln... 
Hug
Edited by chillpc - 2014-04-06T12:21:15Z
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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:21:18Z
Originally posted by luvsakshi


Hiii  PC ...
Awww thats so lovely OS ... 
Ram & priya in total different back ground 
and so much love on each other 

and their first kiss was on icing on the cake.. Clap
Cont soon 

are you sure gnna cont this otherwise i will complaint your jaan .. LOL

p.s" Hello pc ki jaan , please tell her to cont this story .. Wink

Embarrassed tq dee... 

hope i will contn this...
par brb... as will b out of town... LOL


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Posted: 2014-04-06T12:24:09Z
Woo hoo!! Awesome!!! Do continue soon:) ill b lookin fwd to it!
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