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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Hi pls continue soon na


hie...
jus back in town...will updte in a couple of daz... πŸ˜Š
thanks for waiting...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anupam_dil

wow...priya ki confession bahuth accha tha❀️..I loved it...yummy story😳😳😳...will be waiting for the story ahead


will contn soon..
thnx fr the comments.. πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

sorry pc itna late karne k liye  πŸ˜”

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raya college students...liked it πŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
note:

Thank You all for ur lovely comments... 
will contn in a couple of daz...
sorry for making u wait...
 
love u all...πŸ€— πŸ€—
Edited by chillpc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon...
Will be waiting!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice OS
Ram ne at last confess kar hi diya and thanks god Dance ke beech mein partners exchange ho gayeπŸ˜† warna pata nahi raya aur hamara kya hotaπŸ˜†
kahan rok diya PC...abb jaldi continue karo aur pehle wale ko bhi continue karo
tumhari jaan ko college wala love dekhna tha aur tumne use last day ka love dhika diyaπŸ˜†
abb wapas aa gayi ho na...dono OS ko complete karo
thanks for PM...and really sorry for late reply
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Posted: 10 years ago

sorry for being so late😭

i know this is part was not justified but pls bear with me for this time.

dint have enough time


Two souls kissing... Uncertain of surroundings but certain abt future are in their own world. 

Neha and vikram come in search of these two love birds and ares shocked to see the sight in front of them. They immediately turn to their backs and shut their eyes. 

Vikram lets out a heavy cough to gt these both into the regular world. 

Ram and priya end their kiss shocked and look around and find vik and neha. Both are embarrassed to the core. 

Ram lets out a sigh and vik and neha turn around wid hands on their eyes.

Ram mumbles "phle haddi bano phir natak karo." "Hath nikal skte ho dono".  
Priya looks at ram flushing as she heard him mumble...   

Nevik remove their hands from their eyes... Look at each other and strt laughing. 

Ram gettng irritated" kyun has rhe tum.dono??? Phle tresspass karo aur phir baadmein haso, shram nhi aati" 

Vikram,"ooo bhai ruk jaa.. Aas paas toh dekh kya hain kaun aarha.. 
Btake program banate toh sab set krdete na??? " and laughs. 

Ram," muh band kar. Aur ja yha se. Hum log aate hain." 

Vikram giggles and tells ok aur jldi aana and winks at ram.

Neha," vikram tum jao mein abhi aai." 
She goes near priya and whispers," humlogo ko turn bolne se phle chck krliya karo. " and winks at her and waves them bye. 

Priya looks at ram and is again embarressed sensing wat neha was reffrng to. 
She points to.his lips. Alrdy angry ram smirks and asks ab kya hua. 

She asks for his hanky and moves it towards his lips. Rubs them and shows him. 
Ram.bites his tounge understanding what she meant and smiles. 

They move into the party area and looks at their friends and smile while both of them wink at raya. 

The party ends

Raya and nevik move towards their cars. 

Ram-"priya tumhara car kaha hain!!?" 

Priya-"car toh driver le gya. Dad ko kaam tha and he cldnt take his as it wemt fr service. I forgot to call him as we were in there in the backyard and blushes. 

Ram-ohh kk..!!! Kaise jaogi phir??? 

Neha interrupting their talk. "mein hoon na. Mein drop krdungi sahi slamat." 

Ram-"nahi neha tumhe late hoga na. Its out of ur way. Mein drop krdunga. " 

Neha-"arey tum kyun pareshan ho rhe ho. Vikram krdega drop." 

Ram signals vikram to move away from the sight 

Vikram-" nhi neha mujhe beech raste mein kaam hain late hoga. Ram tu hi drop krde teri grlfnd ko. Mein toh ja rha hoon " 

Neha giggles and tells all the best to priya and moves towrds her car. 

Priya looks here and there with blushing. 

Ram-"chalo tumhe drop krdeta hoon."

priya-"route toh jante hain na???" 

Ram-" jab ghar jyngy tab bta dena ab toh beach ja rhe and uska route pta hain mujhe." 

Priya-"ab beach kyun???" 

Ram-"mujhe jane ka mann kr rha pls." 

While ram takes a long route to beach, priya gets confused. 

Priya-hum is raste se kyun ja rhe??? Their other way na??? 

Ram- haan par ise jane se meri grlfrnd k sath long drve bhi hoga na. 

Roads are empty and the cool brezze of night making the roads more peacful and beautiful 

Priya leans on ram and puts her head on his shoulder.  
Ram pecks her forehead and smiles. 
Priya-this is the best day of my life ram.

Ram-even mine priya. 

The peaceful silence engulfs the car while priya njys the breeze and ram drives.

They reach their destination. 

Ram-priya dekho we have reached. Chalo. 
Priya-" ram mein ek.baar dad ko call krungi ki late hone wala hain." 
Ram-"no need chalo". 

As she steps out from car. 

"Priya close ur eyes",ram 
Kyun????, priya.  
Kyunki meine kha,ram 
Kya hain ram???,priya 

Tum ise baat nhi manogi ruko And he comes near her and shuts her eyes. 
"Ab chalo"ram

Ram directs her to a place. 
And asks her to open her eyes. 

Priya opens her eyes looks at ram "kya hian????" 

Ram points in a direction. And priya looked there and is shocked 

Priya,"ye sab???? When did u do this?????" 
Ram,"surprise" 
Priya has tears in her eyes. 


to be contn...

chota hain...par cldnt help...

sry.. next wala bada hoga... 

pls do press like ...

all comments accptd... πŸ˜†

Edited by chillpc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .pia_12.

Continue soon...
Will be waiting!!!!

done updating... πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update,,,,
raya k beech ye kabab mein haddi kaha se tapak padiπŸ˜†
bechare raya ek min bhi akele nhi reh skte...
ab ek haddi ne likha hai to haddi ko laba hi thaπŸ˜‰
oye yha bhi park wala love hai kyaπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
ab ye beach wala loveπŸ˜‰
ye ram n kya kia ...
kuch to kia hai kuch kr rha hai,,,,
kk etna sa likhi😑
etne din baad update wo bhi etu sa😭
continue soon...!!!
thanks for the pmπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ha ha ha NehaVik caught Raya kissing
Ram surprise Priya so sweet of him
continue soon