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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Kk update is cliffy...bt m loving it..

I cn say dis is one of my fav chappi of dis ff..

Marvellous wrk bubble. ..

The panic ..tnsn u wanted to create in readers' mind...u actually create it...

Bcz as a reader I read tbe whole update so quick. .to knw whr is zoya..though ..it ws obvio that kamini ws behind all this ..wthr asad vl reach on tym or not..

I read it so quick till end...once I knw asad reached thr. .I strted agn n read it properly...😆

So hats off to u to create that restlessness in reader mind...kool..👏

M in love wid the whole morning scene...

Asad was so restlessness...bt wen he knw that zoya was not at home since last nite...gt so angry to ayaan that rashid cm to stop him..

Yeey my tod phod khan is back...

U knw wat bubble..wenever ksg brk table ph window..mashallah kitna sexy lgta hai..☺️

Trps climbed up...🥳 ..I hope u vl get more likes..😆

Asad cursed himself..bcz he knw that some one was trying to hurt zoya..evn thn he ws not wid hr...at that tym..😔

Bechara ayaan..he was feeling guilty..fr all dis...😕

Dat f**king kamini slapped zoya...😡

Told u to kill hr in previous chappis..huh..bt u love dragging the evil character. .

N dat kamini knw abt asad contacts..that he vl reached to hr so soon..evn thn she took risk to kidnap hr...

Jaan nikal rh hai saali ki..par sapne dkna nh choregi...😆

Aww zoya bechari..nw she revived hr memories ...that hw easily asad n zoya trapped by sehrish... n ruined their 10 beautiful yrs...

M feeling sad fr hr...

Bt yeah..she was not at all interested in sehrish deal...she vl not go to US..dat kamini vl go to jail...

Bechara sameer...he did nthng..bt still he was feeling guily..bt sehrish was knwn to him...

Ye kamini trustworthy hai h nh..😡

'Stop thinking about Asad. He doesn't even care about you I just talked to him half an hour back. He is totally fine and moreover he would have never married you if it wasn't forced on him

Oh really..hw cn I frgt it..no limits of evilness fr a evil prsn..n wen a kamini like sehrish..EVIL wrd r nthng...f**king bitch...🤬

'Can I know what papers you want my wife to sign for which you have to stoop so low Sehrish ?'

Yeey asad a gya...dhinka chinka chika hey hey hey

Dis scene remind me dat akram fiasco. ..wen asad reached on tym...n said qubool nh hai...n tk his shades off...wanted to kiss ksg dat tym..😳

I really want to knw hw he reached thr...hw he came to knw abt hr whereabouts. .

Nw bubble rain of slaps to bnti hai...plzz bubble...

Such fadu update must say ammi...

Edited by shreya11mehra - 10 years ago

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-Genelia-

@-Genelia-

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Ab phr nxt page aa gya re...

Res😃😆

EDITED...

*hiding out of fear*

oye bas kar yaar tomatoes bht costly hote hn mujh p waste mat kar!!

OK!OK !!!

I accept I... am ... a...b..bit late...actually quite late *nervous smile*

well bubblu m tuje kyaaa bataaon??😔

I swear on ma life I edited d cmmnt r8 aftr reading d updt ... But... but tht bloddy bas***d good 4 nothing network betrayed ...😡

bt still I dint stop I typed it AGAAAIN ... bt in vain

trust me I tried it 3 more times ... n d consequences

d cmmnt dint post ... bt I literally memorised it...😕😆

sooo im left wid nthng bt to post my EXAACT REACTION r8 aftr d updt...

*drumroll*

tan tanaaa😆

oh only "AAAIE" (I 😆) knw to wat xtent I waited fah ths updt 😳

n vn finally iv got it IM BOWLED!!!👏

Bubblu d anger ... d frustration... d helplessness u potrayed for asad's character was much much bttr thn I xpected it to b !!! hats off!!!! (now u dare not b honoured!!! 😈🤣)

I sooo waited fah d updt ... bt it wsnt WORTH WAITING...🤢

IT WAS WORTH JHAPPEEEING!!!🤣 LOVE U MY SWEET HRT!!!

JHAPPI DE DE!!

FIERCE AHMED KHAN IS HERE...😎

oh sehrish! uv no idea of WHAT uv got urself into!!!!!! 😈

eagerly waiting fah 2morrows updt!!!😳

xtremely sorry 4 being ths late

Edited by -Genelia- - 10 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Res fr

Maha

Anki

Ashu

Soni

Mali

Aks

Ani

Edited by shreya11mehra - 10 years ago

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sonia555

@sonia555

IF-Stunnerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Hawww she was missing all night 😲

Ugghhh i thought ayaan would have met mukka ahmed khan

Awww he was blaming himself

What has sameer come to say??

So it was sehrish 😲

Awww she's feeling guilty now

she hit her 😲

Yayyy

Asad's here 😳

Can you not have a scene where asad beats sehrish up?? 🤣

And update soon 😳

Edited by sonia555 - 10 years ago

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

CHAPTER 28
i m sory for late cment di
SUPERB! Update
Wow! Wow! Asad kept hs pendanent..
Flashback was so nice di.
Muah muah muah to u 🤗 super cnfesion, and finaly he said
Realy i waitd frm many parts.
U cn be a romantic writer. It was smthng adorable.
i m ur FAN!
kidnap! Kidnap! Clify.
😉Not for me i'l read 29 up.
Super work di Edited by KaBhilove07 - 10 years ago

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Di...
U destroyd my excitment.
I thought i'l nt get clifs.
Bt this was totaly clify.
All blinds in khan vila, dint noticed her absense.
Asad, my swtu how caring pie he hd became. ❤️
Mamma.
Bloody shehrish
Kidnaped her
How could she?
My asya love each other so much
Nothing cn seperate them
I wana punch her hard, ganja kr do use.
WOIii, hurt zoya
🤣 "aao ji, bau ji, dil se dil milao ji aa gaya he dekho bodyguard.." asad 🤣
This entry was so
SUPER WORK
THANKS FOR PM
LOVE
NIYATIEdited by KaBhilove07 - 10 years ago

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Oh my god!!!

They did not realized she was kidnapped that too 10 hours before...

Ha ha ha...Shehrish was really underestimated Asad.

Stupid women...

Aww...I am just imagining how his tone ring to Zoya's ear...

I was squealing like a fan girl while reading that line.

want to thank you..because you updated it before time.

Thank you so much for this wonderful update..🤗

Edited by swapno - 10 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

awesome update CQ...

oh.. my baby is kidnapped ..no 1 knows it ..😲

asad is so tensed..sameer vl help him i think

seherish😡 she slapped zoe twice😭 2*10 =20 slaps..shes deserves this

finally the MAN in ACTION i can hear the AAK background score😉...

waiting for friday ...

Edited by Amulya9 - 10 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

Sehrish was the one... I thought so

Finally Asad has arrived

yipee

update soon

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-RM-

@-RM-

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Finally some parts of puzzle are solved :)
Waiting for Friday !

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