1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Awsmmm
I m lvng dis more n more...
Continue soon...

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Am loving this more and more and more 😳

Finally he is getting some lighht moments and happy time with her 😛

The sub meal scene was fab !😳

And ofcourse i loved the part where she was tending his cut !!

So finally he lets out his frustration 😲but poor zoya is guilty now !!!!!!

Thanks for the PM 😛

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Amulya

@Amulya9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#613

awesome update ankie..sun wala story is sooo good... even I used 2 draw sun all d time when I'm kid coz its easy 2 draw..BT story behind sun ab pata chala... 😆 shopping n sub meal is nice.. ASYA fall n Asad keeping his hand behind his back reminded me of KSG..he let out his frustration finally 👏 ..continue soon..thanx 4 d PM

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Her eyes were chocolate and they seemed to be dancing in the rays of the sun. The eyes were too lovely and so strong that he couldn't but let himself get drowned in them. All he knew was, if ever angels had a face, they would always take after her. ^Beautiful job! Very nicely done. 😳

Aw, the date was so cute! I loved how you described the sun being Asad's best friend, that was quite a smart and intriguing idea. 😃

And how he bought her both the outfits! Oh, and the trading-of-the-sandwiches. Very Zoya-like thing to do. 😳 Good job! :D

Very, very nice! Continue soon. :)

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

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shonajain

@shonajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#615

wow
my asad is a hero
zoe baby was caring for asad...tooo cute n sweet
awsume job ankiee as always
continue soon

thank u for the pm :)

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SH7_Sunny

@SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#616

unressy my messy comment at pg 80 😆😉

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

You need a little more shower of love

This was amazing

I wuved it :)))))

You see all these chins? I'm smiling wide😆

Continune soon and Thanks for the PM

Happy Holi :)

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kalyani

@kals82

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I like you i like you i really like you 😳 😆

Yes Factually it is TRUE. But then Asad needed to slam the door in his room in the FICTION, so let your imagination run a bit and imagine who drove the car back home. 😆

i hope you understood why he had an outburst cause as all what Zoya was showing is nothing but pity and he hates people who feed him pity. That is the reason why the symbolism of the sun as his best friend 😳

Its me who is the defused soul here. 😆 And Trust me m so glad that you read the update and liked it and wanted your confusion to be cleared, as i know you wanna enjoy the story. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. 😳 🤗

*note to self need to polish a bit more. 😳

hai ankie,

thank u thank u.. thank u..

let say i have eye for detail.. and love ur writing.. i may have not commented as often as i should .. but have left a like...

ur posts about qubool hai is something i always look forward in the past.. dear..

as devika says u r an awesome writer... keep writing.. i love it

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Maryam Hassan

@mariam1368

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Awesome Update Ankie!
I totally loved it.
Asad finally lost his cool n confronted her.
The part where Zoya is abt to fally and Asad caught hold of her was so adorable...and suddenly he realised that he is holding Zoya and he left her and crossed his hand behind his back was really really cute!
Update soon n thanks for the pm