1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

awhh dii i should be the one crying. 😭 😆 but then no problem you have the 5th chapter ahead. And Ups and Downs are bound to happen, Even Virat Kohli gets out on a Duck 😆 toh main kya cheez hoon 😳
Its me who is the defused soul here. 😆 And Trust me m so glad that you read the update and liked it and wanted your confusion to be cleared, as i know you wanna enjoy the story. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. 😳 🤗

Ankie.. pareshani ki koi baat nahin hain.. Seriously.. You have written it beautifully.. Honestly the last paragraph got many of the readers confusing because of the shift in scene from car to home... She was fussing over his wound and he shouted back telling that she could have been hurt..Understood his pain and concern at that point and his shock for her question .. A small line if you had added that their journey till home or something on those lines would have not got any sort of confusion...😊😊

So Ankie dear.. please cheer up.. I will be upset whole day if you are sad now because of this... I seriously love to see a smile on your face always.. 😊

Good day and please keep the smile intact.. 🤗

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#622

Nice update
Have to reread though I am totally confused
One time she hated him for marrying her and she will never love him
She want a dissolution then she turns nice and they talk now
And he gets smiles and now they r going out together
Loved the romantic moments and the funny antics
And Asad seductive whisper then he beats a man for almost harming her
Then is is going ballistic tht he is hurt and then he blasted her
Ok totally confused
U said past is black present is blue so am I just reading past where is present
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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#623

that was an awesome update

i eagerly waiting for the next update

tfs 😃

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#624

nice one.. but i felt little bit fast in moving from one emotion to the other..

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Manchalateriore

@Manchalateriore

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Loved it and scared as in I felt sad readin the.present. I hope thisis a happy story

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: sadafchoudhury
Loved it and scared as in I felt sad readin the.present. I hope thisis a happy story

Sad? Its a perfect Happy Story with a sugary sweet ending. 😆 Do not worry hence 😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: sweetnandu
nice one.. but i felt little bit fast in moving from one emotion to the other..

frankly yes it is, cause as a viewer i feel we should not at all drag anything 😆 it ruins taste 😆 thank you 😳

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: TaiLung
that was an awesome update
i eagerly waiting for the next update
tfs 😃

Seriously? THANK YOU so much 😳 hope it didnt disappoint you 😳

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TaiLung

@TaiLung

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Seriously? THANK YOU so much 😳 hope it didnt disappoint you 😳

yup seriously 😉. The awesome part is asad let out all his emotions at the end. So i am eager to know who will console who?

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#630

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
Have to reread though I am totally confused
One time she hated him for marrying her and she will never love him
She want a dissolution then she turns nice and they talk now
And he gets smiles and now they r going out together
Loved the romantic moments and the funny antics
And Asad seductive whisper then he beats a man for almost harming her
Then is is going ballistic tht he is hurt and then he blasted her
Ok totally confused
U said past is black present is blue so am I just reading past where is present
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I am glad you found it IRRATIONAL 👏

THANK YOU 😆

Asad was totally happy and full of hope that Zoya started to like him!

But when she said it was unnecessary, he reasoned that she was his wife and he can do anything for her. That's when he realized that all the care she was showing was just nothing but pity or rather took it as a formality as THEY R NOT MAN AND WIFE.

He was already in pain hence the dam of patience broke when he understood that ALL HIS EFFORTS WENT TO SEA AS SHE STILL DOESN'T CARE ABOUT THEIR RELATIONSHIP EVEN AFTER SO MUCH OF TRYING. That is why Zoya 'felt' guilty! 😳

Am glad you pointed it out to be irrational cause Humans are Irrational. 😆 They do not think rationally when in pain anger and hunger 😆 and that is why Asad vented his feelings out. 😳

i hope you got the whole hold of it. 😳