1#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala: AsYa FF (Ch1-5|#2Link pg1)

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#601

hemmm this might b their. first step on a way together ...
fabulous ankie

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: kals82
Gjj

I got it clear by the post above...

If someone is bleeding we tend try there. ... she waited till they reached home. .

Asad rxn is bcoz of pity...

Got it

I like you i like you i really like you 😳 😆

Yes Factually it is TRUE. But then Asad needed to slam the door in his room in the FICTION, so let your imagination run a bit and imagine who drove the car back home. 😆

i hope you understood why he had an outburst cause as all what Zoya was showing is nothing but pity and he hates people who feed him pity. That is the reason why the symbolism of the sun as his best friend 😳

Its me who is the defused soul here. 😆 And Trust me m so glad that you read the update and liked it and wanted your confusion to be cleared, as i know you wanna enjoy the story. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. 😳 🤗

*note to self need to polish a bit more. 😳

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
blah blah blah Im only waiting for my entryyy! 😡

u have been rude with me, i shelved you off. 🥱

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#604

great update

loved the way how u portrayed their emotions

asad is angry

i hope zoya understands

do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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Srija C. Burman

@Madame_Noddy

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

I DID TOH.😲

Yes. had a terrible migraine and had to go out, after i came back WA not working
And shouldn't you be studying😡

Awwwlele meli aapiieee ko jhoot-moot ka gussa bhi samajh nai aata. kinnniii shhwweeettooo haaiii 😃
Chalo huggiieee lelo 🤗

Btw, in regards to ur reply to my previous essay, its reserved -_- by one line -_-

Abhi tak update nai padha hai maine, sirf comment reserve karne aayi thi :p

Back. To. Biology. o_o

btw migraine kaisa hai ab?? sinus headaches are horrid, I have them :( rest lo aapiee, zyaada stress se sar dard badhega.

Edited by Madame_Noddy - 11 years ago

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Rosered1

@Rosered1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#606

The narration of Sun being Asads best friend was soo unique and mindblowing..

I could imagine KaBhi in all the scenes 😭

And kisi na kisi din tho Asad ki gham bahar aana hi tha 😭

And thx for the editing in black and blue.It makes it a lot easier 😊

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

My bad i was not able to write it clearly. 😲

Zoya just shouted in horror only once in the car cause she was tending his wounds at home. 😆

Okay now the blast. I am surprised, Seriously I AM SO SURPRISED. 😆 🤣

Jokes apart, My bad once again.

Asad blasted for 3 reasons.

A. He was in pain.
B. Zoya was in pain cause of seeing his pain.
C. Zoya thought he was doing everything for her as formality.

All the bottled up anguish and frustrations came out after she said why he fought for her. 😆
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Did i write that bad? I guess i did 😆

Its me who is the defused soul here. 😆 And Trust me m so glad that you read the update and liked it and wanted your confusion to be cleared, as i know you wanna enjoy the story. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH. 😳 🤗