THE LOCKET (18) MG FF 2, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 82

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

poora update Maaneet Thud☺️😆

haiyee Avi ji .Maarhi daalogi tum hume😳😉
poor geet trying to be brave but how can she jab maan itne pass hai😳
geet called him jaan
ab geet gussa bhi nahi karsathi 😛
lovely update
eagerly waititng for next part

Thanks Valli 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
maan thud😳
maan jaan😳😳😳

haiyee mrs. khurana maan ki jaan legi aur tum meri 😃😃😃😃

i loved loved loved maneet romance...😃

waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update
I was sooo rt that these two will not come out of room easily😆😆😆😆 and see whole update and they are still in room😉😉😉
but I am not complaining at all avi infact loving it😳😳😳😳
agar ek or update bhi bahar nahin aayenge to bhi chalega🤣
bechara maan control hi nahi ho raha but still trying his best
such mein ab shadi jaldi ho jaani chaahiyee😆😆
par agar shadi jaldi ho gayee to hum maaneet romance kaise padhenge maan babu😉😉😉

love the way he asked geet not to move and did helped her to get ready and romancing.
when maan is there to help then why geet need help of aunty ji naa😆😆😆😆

thanks for pm avi

now waiting for next update
aadat se majboor hoon😉😉😆

Shaadi ke baad romance aur hota hai😉
Too bad Avi nahi likhne wali yeh...😆
Thoda tum sab imagine kar lena..😃
Thanks Jas
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gshruti

awesome update

d whole part was just in 1 room☺️
loved it
geet's attempt to divert his mind was so funny ...ladoos🤣
waiting for more :D

Thanks Shruti😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Ek din aap maar hi dalogi... Hayee... Bechara Maan Geet ka zoota zoota gussa nahi samjhata...❤️ Buddhu.. woh bhi tumhe resist nahi kar sakati tumhe isliye zoot mooth ka gussa dikhati hain..😆 Abhi tak zinda hoon pata nahi kab tak rahoongi..?😳😉😆 Maan complaining to geet's babaji abt his pitayee which he got from would be mrs khurana..🤣 Maan is going to Manali.. hope Geet bhi jaye uske sath.. yaha brij hain HP mein..Amazing part..

Thanks Teju. Glad you enjoyed it😃 Agar tum sab ko main maar rahi hu toh kam kar du?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fffanatic

Maaneet ki sagai hai...maaneet ki sagai hai
maan babu mummy ko bhi help karte the ready hone mein...not bad
maan is naughty and maan is geet ki jaan
geet is opening
maan babu has pre wedding vacation planned
lesse what geet has to say abt maan jaans planning
maan clicked her picture after getting her ready
dadima on her way ... how I wish she would have caught her naughty pota red handed dressing his bride to be for their engagement
update soon

Mumma's boy tha.. showed it in the beginning na.. I always like boys who can love their Mom so much, it means they have a capacity to love a lot.😃
Daadima would have turned a blind eye am sure.. great grandchildren jo chahiye..😆
Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

again thud prt,,,,😳

maan ki mom bhi kam nehi ,,,puri trainng di hei bachpan se ,,,,😆😆
kya liktee ho yaar saara scene ankhon ke saamne ,,,😉
auntee ki geet ko kya jarurat jab jhali ka expert mahi hei...
mnali ki tyaree hei waiting 4 roop tera ,,,,,😉
shotu sa updtt kyon,,,,??

Ab end ho raha hai toh mera dil kar raha hai ki sab ko khush kar ke end karu.. isiliye small small doses..😃 Trying to stuff as much romance as I can.
Thanks Lily😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 76
Darji is feeling emotional as geet is getting engaged but he is happy and contended too because he knows maan will take care oh his geet
loved the way maan took all respobsibility of darji

part 77
Maan is getting geet ready with his own hands and also romancing and teasing poor geet
Waiting for their engagement
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 77
awesome dear...
excellent...
haye main mar jawaan...
so lovely so romantic so adorable...
am so loving this...
Maan is way too romantic here...
u have to write about their married life dear...
dont u ever dare to skip that...
their SR and after life...
u can increase the updates but i want updates on after marriage...
cont soon dear...

🤔 was this supposed to end in December? March ho gaya..
Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Avi ye kaise kar leti ho tum...itna seedha saadha update but my heart was doing dhak-dhak while reading whole update..

Just beautiful...how can you write such simple romantic part...
Kuch karna bhi nahi padta hai inhe aur pyaar aa jaata hai inpe, she wondered. ...beautiful line ...
"Giit, two minutes.."...lol...loving maan's asking kiss in a sweet way...
Omg...how he is teasing her on ladoo...
Enagagement me jwelery pehenane me ye haal hai to SR me utarne me kya haal hoga in dono ka...
Aise laga raha tha ke engagement ke din hi ye dono ek ho gaye...
Hayeee Avi maar hi daala is update se...

This is why I wrote Dev and Tara first.
If I had started MG like this no one would have read the other parts😆
Saved the best for last.
Thanks Madhuri. Glad you liked it

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