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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

Fantastic shot. 👏

So the unfinished business was the terrace scene and Arnav's confession, brilliant concept.👍🏼

Yayee no MU track.

I love naughty Arnav😉. He is so brave and bold, he came in khushi's kitchen, pinned her, kissed her, winked and make her speak her heart out.

Aisa Kyun hota hai...??????😕

I love that this time Arnav was eager to find and answer her questions. Khushi is a little crazy so she termed the reasons as Acidity but Arnavji is very smart he know its love which his Di always speak dreamily and enthusiastically. 😳

Lovely end.❤️

You shots are always a treat to read.

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Haha omg I loved that!!!! Can you please continue this?!? I would love to read more! Amazing one-shot!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 10 years ago

god not again
what to do with these two
they never can give the other the answers they want
so he was pursuing her this time
about time they talked about this
but of course he went about it his ASR way
and that she didnt like
or did she more like
gosh finally out is it
took them long enough
cheers for pm

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice. Poor Khushi is confused with Arnav's cold and warm behavior.

Thanks for the pm.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it. However the ending seemed unfinished too. I wish Arnav had finished it this time around. But then again, may be you wanted to leave that to the imagination of the readers. 😊

Thanks for the pm.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome .. just awesome. I can literally see them standing in the kitchen bickering and khushi tightly locked in arnav's embrace and he giving her an intense look 😳and when he actually says 'shh' ... I am a goner I tell you

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1chilly

@1chilly

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

You are the best at writing these dialogue only One Shots.

Loved reading it.

Their sometimes childish and sometimes adult banter is such fun to read.

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aashi12

@aashi12

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

some business is still Unfinished here. Hope to see it finishing soon ;-D

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ranogill

@ranogill

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful...need to see final result..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

I absolutely love these randomness moments from you, lol.

The dialogue only one shot was simply superb and fantastic,

Love the conversation between Arnav and Khushi it was so intriguing and interesting filled with teasing, many questions and awesome answers.

However I was so expecting a random kiss at the end, maybe there will be a second part to this.

Loved the one shot, brilliant writing and written exceptionally well.

Thanks for the PM xx

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