ArHi OneShot |Unfinished Business|

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Fantastic shot. 👏

So the unfinished business was the terrace scene and Arnav's confession, brilliant concept.👍🏼

Yayee no MU track.

I love naughty Arnav😉. He is so brave and bold, he came in khushi's kitchen, pinned her, kissed her, winked and make her speak her heart out.

Aisa Kyun hota hai...??????😕

I love that this time Arnav was eager to find and answer her questions. Khushi is a little crazy so she termed the reasons as Acidity but Arnavji is very smart he know its love which his Di always speak dreamily and enthusiastically. 😳

Lovely end.❤️

You shots are always a treat to read.

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Haha omg I loved that!!!! Can you please continue this?!? I would love to read more! Amazing one-shot!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

god not again
what to do with these two
they never can give the other the answers they want
so he was pursuing her this time
about time they talked about this
but of course he went about it his ASR way
and that she didnt like
or did she more like
gosh finally out is it
took them long enough
cheers for pm

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Nice. Poor Khushi is confused with Arnav's cold and warm behavior.

Thanks for the pm.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Loved it. However the ending seemed unfinished too. I wish Arnav had finished it this time around. But then again, may be you wanted to leave that to the imagination of the readers. 😊

Thanks for the pm.

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome .. just awesome. I can literally see them standing in the kitchen bickering and khushi tightly locked in arnav's embrace and he giving her an intense look 😳and when he actually says 'shh' ... I am a goner I tell you