Arshi TS - Of Blossoms and Promises...COMPLETED!

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akhi123

@akhi123

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

awesome
plz plz update soon

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I had once written something similar to this and i actually really love this concept of rags to riches. Nope, mine isn't a fan fiction but yours definitely is and is incredible.

Please update soon because the wait is torturous!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Lovely story! Loved Arnav as a renegade, rebellious teen but hard working and compassionate towards his mother. Arnav's treatment of Khushi initially and later how it changed seeing her caring side is penned beautifully.That was hilarious him asking her age for kissing her 😆

One thing that made Arnav happy in his troubled life is Khushi's friendship/love but poor soul he has no idea that Khushi can be bold enough to accept him. I wonder if there was a reason why Khushi said yes to Akkash but not to Arnav to go to prom 😕

The turn of events split them in opposite directions.. If only Arnav listened to what Khushi had to say?

But I'm sure their paths will cross once again & I cant wait 😳

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wonderful story. I have a special place for teen romance and you've brought the bitter sweet pull of passion and doubt so beautifully. Can't wait to read the rest of it.

Why have I not read more of your work. I really must :)

Cheers

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome start!!! Felt so bad for Arnav!!!!

Please update soon 😊

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suwin

@suwin

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

beautiful and emotional...
waiting for their meeting...
thank you...

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

awesome start...

loved it...😊

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chemistry101

@chemistry101

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

OMG...what an amazing story. ...felt so bad arnav. Pls continue soon..pls PM.

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fanipkknd0

@fanipkknd0

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

wow... would wait for the next part when he returns with a bang all rich and powerful

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

This is such a beautiful story. Loved reading it.

I like you developed Arnav's character and its refreshing to him something other than filthy rich business tycoon. His anger, frustration and bitterness everything is justified as life hasn't been fair to him or his mother. Amongst many battles he is fighting socially, economically and emotionally he finds, Khushi; with Khushi he finds a hope for better life. Alas! the hope and happiness are nipped in the bud and it has only increased his bitterness exponentially.

I am sure, Khushi had her reasons to refuse to go to prom with him. She is probably scared but definitely not ashamed her relationship with, Arnav.

Can't wait to read next part and see how destiny brings them face to face again.