arshi ff: not cut out for love #2, chapters 11 - 20 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: ARS24
awesome
thank u for pm 👍🏼

thanks so much, ars... see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Originally posted by: SirenMitra
18 calls ASR, seriously!!! And Poor Khushi...😆

hi sirenmitra,

i think he made more than that but as his writer i thought i should do some face saving and cut it down to 18. 😆 😆 thanks for reading, see you next week.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

Indi😊

Two chapters, so he has her in his arma and didn't let her go in front of La..aane do , dhekno do moment.😊

Date, Phone call, pacing, Driving around, just to be with her,thinking about her , feeling her close to him, just for him.Her visage brings smile on his face but her distress is what makes him upset miles away...you have reminded me the most sensitive moment...Shyam and Khushi engagement one...SHE was in convulsion and he was in double the amount till she settles down and today we have the same...he called her when she was in that state...and she felt his presence just like after Janmashtami...

La is picking pieces and getting close to Mr jp...hmmm ...restless or as a woman picking things up.

Indi and her Mamiji😆

Now the 360 degrees angle change...Why is he falling into her trap..aaj keh baad usey yaad nahin karoonga...His war within is the key of this whole thing...he wants her, but he denies that...He loves her but koi matlab nahin...He touches her but koi fadak nahin padta...he showers his attention and love but it's all have galat matlab...so don't try to see dreams...

He is ASR and he knows better...next plan stay away from her...😳...yeah right

She is hiding Shyam here too...

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

In di how well you bring out the yearning for each other, the wistful longing...How easily and flawlessly you give words to such unnamed, inexplicable emotions...how beautifully you connect them across miles by a simple phone call

Edited by wiwy - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi😊
Two chapters, so he has her in his arma and didn't let her go in front of La..aane do , dhekno do moment.😊

Date, Phone call, pacing, Driving around, just to be with her,thinking about her , feeling her close to him, just for him.Her visage brings smile on his face but her distress is what makes him upset miles away...you have reminded me the most sensitive moment...Shyam and Khushi engagement one...SHE was in convulsion and he was in double the amount till she settles down and today we have the same...he called her when she was in that state...and she felt his presence just like after Janmashtami...

La is picking pieces and getting close to Mr jp...hmmm ...restless or as a woman picking things up.

Indi and her Mamiji😆

Now the 360 degrees angle change...Why is he falling into her trap..aaj keh baad usey yaad nahin karoonga...His war within is the key of this whole thing...he wants her, but he denies that...He loves her but koi matlab nahin...He touches her but koi fadak nahin padta...he showers his attention and love but it's all have galat matlab...so don't try to see dreams...

He is ASR and he knows better...next plan stay away from her...😳...yeah right

She is hiding Shyam here too...

hi faiqa,

good to see you and as always enjoy your thoughts. if at different points the story brings back echoes of ipk then i am dhinka chka re.

asr and his conflict... main aour meri tanhayee... it's as together in my head as the famous first line of that poem. without that essential conflict i will not recognise him... i am so glad you feel his war within... there is always a push to simplify asr... see him as good or bad. but my feeling is, that is not true to him. he has these streaks in him, and this war.

ha ha yes, he is planning to stay away.

he has left me alone with my behena mami ji and gone... sob sob.

thanks so much, lovely to see you.

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: wiwy
In di how well you bring out the yearning for each other, the wistful longing...How easily and flawlessly you give words to such unnamed, inexplicable emotions...how beautifully you connect them across miles by a simple phone call

awww, wiwy, was it really nice... did ya feel things? i get crazy when i write... i keep wondering what does it say about a 54 year old woman, ha ha bet it says she'ds loony, but for this man and that feeling of his and that woman who deserves a place in the sun... anything. glad you enjoyed, sir. thanks so much.