Thanks Aquagal...this was brilliant. So thanks my darling for giving me this link.
I loved it...now I see why Saiyyu thanked you for being the inspiration to write that OS.
What a unique concept and just using dialogues ...genius...! It was hilarious,witty and so well written ...
Loved their Nok jhok and so into the banter is she so true to her character that she misses his underlined emotions and feelings unable to comprehend what he is trying to say...
The way he tells her that he can use her favourite colour in his room ( that he knows it her favourite colour ) of course in his room or their room as he hopes soon...when she has understood what he means...
Loved his possessiveness ...her favourite colour cannot be shared even by his niece or nephew and is reserved for the walls in his/ their room ...
This was so sweet and fun...the tangents they go off in from jungles to fairy lights that he wants to use...
He has her all riled up and here she is discussing room shades and colours...when he wants her to colour his life..and their future...superb...
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