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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

that was beautiful confession... but will khushi agree with that


Thanks! What Khushi says that remains to be seen... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
completely hooked on ur story...read so much in one day!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandu2000

Beautiful update ...but please updates regularly or give longer updates.

Other wise no qualms with this beautiful story.


Thanks! :D

And I try to do both of what you have written about but its not always possible considering there are other things which require my attention. Also as far as the length of the chapter is under consideration, I write as much/as less as I think the chapter demands and I will not be changing that self imposed rule, so sorry about that.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Very well written confession scene.

Loved how he declared his love for her.


Thanks for the feedback! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Luckyforever

very nice
but quite short ...


Thanks! :D

And I am sorry you found the chapter short but it was what I think the chapter demanded.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wen are we getting an update?!
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Posted: 11 years ago

FP,

It was a beautiful chapter.

Their first kiss and the emotions that it evoked in them were written very well. Poetic!!

Arnav is not good with words and every time he tried using them to mend things between them he made it worst. So he did what he does best, act! And act he did that put an end to lot of apprehensions, answered lot of questions, closed many loops and above all stated what he feels for Khushi. But this changes the equation they share and with that it brings in lot of new questions.

His confession was heartfelt and I loved how honest he was. This is probably the first time he did a good job of putting his emotions in words. In just few words he expressed what he has been going through for past 8 years, how he his feelings have transformed and how wants to continue their friendship.

PS: Arnav never denied the fact that he loved Lavanya, so isn't technically Lavanya his first love?

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tasmine

Read all parts in a go.. Awesome.. Pls accept my buddy request..!!


Thanks for the feedback! :D

If you did send a buddy request, I must have accepted it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbug

Lovely chapter... Awww khushi responded n they her mind started working n she pushed him away... But she did acknowledge his feelings... Aww I almost feel she should say yes... But then I feel let him try more ... She went though so much... Let her feel that Arnav is serious abt her... N wants her for life :)


Thanks for the feedback! :D

But one question, did Arnav also not go through a rather shitty time along with Khushi?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

That was freaking Awesome update...


Thanks so much! :D

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