ARSHI SS - OUTBURST !! - Page 4

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Firstly, let me thank Heckwidif.. Its through her that I'v come to know about this work.. 

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

Firstly, let me thank Heckwidif.. Its through her that I'v come to know about this work.. 

And trust me buddy, You are simply AMAZING! It is very very difficult to believe that this is your first piece of work.. You are natural, yaar.. Keep it up! Every emotion that you'v portrayed and every plot that you'v mended is simply astounding.. Its beautiful of how you'v put forth both the strengths and weaknesses of each and every character and how aptly you'v extended their actions and defenses.. A huge hug for the success of this work.. I really appreciate and congratulate you for the simple yet impacting work! 

I'm buddying ya.. Do PM me, if you are gonna do further works.. I'd love to read them.. And also, if you are okay with it, I'l post the link of this work of yours along with my next 2-3 updates.. I really think that this work deserves more readers and you do deserve more appreciation..

Once again, Congratulations and thankyou.. Do continue writing.. You'v got the talent!

-Love,

Chaverah.

 Edited by simmi-arshi - 10 years ago

hey that was a wonderful SS, quite a different take on their POV's👏
loved it!
u should seriously continue writing!😃

this was intense, too intense..
i liked it. some parts were too dramatic, but otherwise it was nice outburst.
i loved the one fact that shyam too got a second chance here. and Nani supported him for that chance to take place.
then there was Anjali's makeover which was required. but for once, i wanted Khushi to make Arnav repent a bit and not give in thus. i know for that to happen you probably have to change the storyline a bit and also have to get another update but that would have been better.
sorry for being a critics but you have many to praise you but only few who will have pointed out the the fine lines of error. You write well, you know that right?
i would like to read another of the story/os you will to write. don't stop writing...

then there is also Aakash and Payal's confrontation i wished to read. And i loved payal's reaction and Anjali's bashing to Aakash. he deserve to a man. and not a mumma's boy!

Arnav and his shame and Shayam and his confession were the highlights of the story altogether. but the chance you gave to Shayam to redeem himself was something i really loved.

looking forward to more stories form you...
Edited by celinawalter - 10 years ago

beautiful and intense story...fabulous updates...very well written...loved it...superb description of their feelings and emotions...

Originally posted by: celinawalter

this was intense, too intense..
i liked it. some parts were too dramatic, but otherwise it was nice outburst.
i loved the one fact that shyam too got a second chance here. and Nani supported him for that chance to take place.
then there was Anjali's makeover which was required. but for once, i wanted Khushi to make Arnav repent a bit and not give in thus. i know for that to happen you probably have to change the storyline a bit and also have to get another update but that would have been better.
sorry for being a critics but you have many to praise you but only few who will have pointed out the the fine lines of error. You write well, you know that right?
i would like to read another of the story/os you will to write. don't stop writing...

then there is also Aakash and Payal's confrontation i wished to read. And i loved payal's reaction and Anjali's bashing to Aakash. he deserve to a man. and not a mumma's boy!

Arnav and his shame and Shayam and his confession were the highlights of the story altogether. but the chance you gave to Shayam to redeem himself was something i really loved.

looking forward to more stories form you...

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

beautiful and intense story...fabulous updates...very well written...loved it...superb description of their feelings and emotions...

Originally posted by: ArShiDelena

Awesome SS

Loved It

Originally posted by: rulama

That was an interesting five shot!

Made Arnav repent but not excessively and was in line with the forging heart of Khushi!