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Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower
Ah! am not sure about that. I meant it as an OS but may just write a second part as the last part!
Plzzz do write the next part too.. will be waiting..
Originally posted by: ipkkndfollower
Ah! am not sure about that. I meant it as an OS but may just write a second part as the last part!
Really very nice OS. Thank you for the PM. Enjoyed reading your OS😊
Originally posted by: latha_555
as usual a very nice story, well described and i like aasthas reasoning as to why she fears intimacy with shlock...well described and i like shlock game to bring her back
Originally posted by: desikahani
A truly beautiful OS!!
Astha and Shlok are two very emotionally charged people and every emotion of theirs and its ripple effect on each other is a story waiting to unfold - love how you have tapped into this and come up with a very touching OS.. hats off to your imagination and writing!
superb work!👏 👏
well written...astha's fear and dilemma well conveyed...and loved shlok's mission😳 😳beautiful os dear!will there be a second part?
Originally posted by: anjipankaj
Good os.is there going to be next part of this os.thanks for pm
Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11
That was awesome... Surely that will be the beginning!!! 😉
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