Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 64

I feel choked. I have tears I my eyes and my throat feels dry after reading the update. Hold on.. thodi emotional ho gayi hoon *sniff*

*Stares at the wall*

Arjun and his mother's relationship was just... so beautiful. It still is... Wait I am skipping ahead as usual! Still a bit emotional so won't be using much emos tonight.

You began with revealing his bittersweet past: the happy memories, his mother's love and her warmth, and his father's brutal behaviour towards her. I cannot imagine as a child what he must have gone through and my heart goes out to him. To see the person he loved most in the world being treated like a piece of furniture is worse than torture.. and she was his mother. Domestic violence.. again I was reminded of Safe Haven... it still exists... unfortunately.

As always, you have sketched a strong but such a heart-warming character. I realised from the flashback - their last conversation - that she loved him deeply, like a mother loves her child. Life was too cruel to her... I guess just when they could have had a new beginning with her only son, life snatched her away from him. And he was so young...

This line brought tears in my eyes: "He was just a little boy, left alone to pick up the pieces in a big, scary world."

I can't imagine how much it must hurt him every single day, as he thinks about the last conversation and about being angry on her. *Sigh*

And Sakshi remained the silent pillar of support by his side, comforting him and speaking only when he needed it. You wrote her inner turmoil so well... she had questions of her own to ask him, and yet, she couldn't. His pain was enough to break him down..

Listen, am I making sense in what I am saying? I don't know what I am saying but I just keep on writing.. too attached to this story I tell you. *sniff*

I loved the part where she places her palm over his heart and tells him that his mother is right there... yeah that brought tears to my eyes too. You make me cry through your words.

It touched me.

I realise I said I would start from the beginning and work my way towards the end but it all became a little haphazard anyway lol. Oh well!

And and ahh! He realised it's her! My heart was beating fast then! The end bit was so beautifully sketched *sniff*

But... beraham aurat!  Where did you stop? You left the mystery for the next chapter *sobs*

Naah, it's okay. I shall wait as always.😛

I want to say beautiful update but that is so overused LOL.😆 I want to come up with something new but I can't. So, I will just say that ...ohhh wait! What were you complaining about? What bit did you not understand?😛 My mind no khichdi pakaoing! My mind is completely untwisted, except for the last lollipop. 😛 

Ok, I need to say goodnight now and listen to Duaa (is that why you asked if I had it on my phone😆)! Kal 7.30 office.. Mummyyy :( Kal toh ASD bhi nahi hai. Mera kya hoga?😭

Yeh sab chodo... I love you for the long update. 🤗Thoda aur hota toh mera waterfall part 2 complete ho jata na😛😉

Me jokes.. u know na 😛

P.S - And I thought I wouldn't be writing much today.🤔

I is what they call hopeless people🤪