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Raveena Chauhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello guys.This is the new and permanent thread of AFL.I've talked to mods and finally we've decided to close my 'raveena1' accnt and now I'll shift my all stories to new threads.So there will be no confusion in future.

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Raveena Chauhan

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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter 1
scene-sharon n rey standing in rh...tanni listening their convo...standing outside the rh...

REY:haan sharon tumhare jaise...i wanted ki taani bilkul tumhari jaisi hoti...ambitious .wid some career plans.(sharon signals him not to speak this )
(here tears continuisly falling frm taani's eyes...she feels like someone hit her thousand times...she was all shaatered,heart broken)

REY:par nahi sharon...taani ko to sirf shaadi ki padi h...SHAADI SHAADI n only SHAADI...y cant she understnd tht i m tolerating her only bcoz of swayam...(rey tries to find wrds...he is also broken frm inside)...haan...main usse sirf swayam ki vajah se jhel raha hu...agar vo swayam ki behen nahi hoti na to maine kab ka usse break up kar liya hota.

(the wrd break up was echoing in taani's ears...she was now feeling like killing herself...she ran frm there...)

REy:haan sharon main usse break up karna chahta hu...i want her to stay away frm me (thn sharon comes n keeps her hand on rey's shoulder)

SHARON:rey bas...taani jaa chuki h...
(aftr listening this rey broke into tears n falls on the floor...he feels like he lost evrything..he lost his love,his life...his reason to live...he started crying badly...sharon comes n hugs him tightly.)

REY:i lost her sharon...i lost her,...now she will hate me...now she will not love me anymore...maine usse apne aap se door kar diya...

SHARON:dnt cry rey...just stop crying...u did this for her...u did this for her betterment...for her future...rey calm down ,stop crying...

(thn rey stands up n starts moving out of RH)

SHARON:where r u going rey??

REy:home...i want to stay alone for some time..

scene shifts to taani-
here taani sitting on her bed...crying badly...she was lying on her bed n was crying continisly...thn she gets up n tries to gain some courage n calls rey...here rey sitting in his room crying badly...he gets a call n see taani's name flashing on screen ..he wipes his tears n picks up d call)

REY:hllo.

TAANI:rey i want to meet u ...now.

REY:now...y...wat hapened??

TAANI:rey just come here at my place...i want to talk to u...(n hung up the call)

(now rey gains all the courage takes his car n went to taani's place...taani opens the door n take him in her room ...rey's back facing taani's cuboard n taani standing in frnt of rey ===(opp positions frm confession scene)-===

TAANI:rey do u love me???

REY(dying frm inside):yeah taani...i lov

TAANI:no rey...dnt lie here atleast...plz rey...tell me the truth...plz rey...(broke into tears...rey feels like someone hitted him hardly...tries to wipe her tears...but taani moves back...)

TAANI:rey ye vahi jagah h jaha aapne mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha...yahi hum dono ek hue the...(tries to gain strenth) aur aaj yahi main aapse apna har rishta todti hu...haan rey aaj main aapko azaad karti hu...har us promise se jo humne saath liye the...apne us pyaar se...aapko main aazad karti hu...(she fell on the floor ..broke into tears )...rey main aapse koi sawaal nahi puchungi...mjhe pata h ki aap bhi yahi chahte the..(she still waiting for rey's response)...par kyu rey...kyu aapne mujhe nahi bataya ki aap kya feel karte h...

thn stands up n wipes her tears...

TAANI:thik h rey ...agar aap is relation se khush nai h to ...aaj ke baad aap free ho...so i m breaking up wid u...(aftr saying these lines she turns her back...rey slowly moves out of her room...sits in his car n drove off)

chapter 2

now taani realises rey had left now... she's all broken into tears..😭😭.lyin on floor crying badly...

Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden
Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankho Mein Kaisi Nami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Sapno Ka Saaya Palkon Pe Aaya
Pal Mein Hansaaya Pal Mein Rulaaya
Phir Bhi Yeh Kaisi Kami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi hai Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani

(taani gets up n opens her cuboard n take rey's pic in her hand n starts crying more ...)

TAANI:kyu rey...kyu kiya aapne aisa...kya main itni buri hu ki koi mujhse pyaar nahi kar sakta...bas ek baar...bas ek baar keh dete ki taani main tumse door nahi jana chahta ..par rey aapne mujhse to kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi...kabhi nahi...aapne mujhe kyu nahi bataya ki aap mujhse door jana chahte ho...kyu nahi bataya rey...main aapki khushi ke liye aapse door bhi chali jaati...ek baar bol diya hota rey...rey main kuch bhi bardasht kar sakti hu aapki nafrat nahi...

kyu krishnaji...kyu kiya aapne mere saath aisa...jis insaan se main sabse jyada pyaar karti hu vo insaan mujhse nafrat krta h ..sirf nafrat...unhone kabhi mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi...kyu mere saath hi hota h aisa...jisse main sabse jyada trust karti hu vo mujhse door ho jata h...kyu krishna ji...

(she gets up throws all pics of rey on floor ...startes breking things...takes a wars n throws it on mirror...)

TAANI:kyu kiya aapne aisa rey...aapne ek baar bhi mere baare mein nahi socha...kya aapne mujhse kabhi bhi pyaar kiya tha ya ye sab sirf ek naatak tha...sirf ek naatak...kya mujhse pyaar karna itna muskil hai rey...kyu rey kyu...i hate u rey ...i hate u...

(n broke down into tears...hurt herself wid the broken glasses...rey's pictures shaatered on ground...taani's blood on some pics...taani crying continuisly...)

SCENe SHIFTS TO REY:(same tym):

Aadhi Aadhi Jaagi Aadhi Aadhi Soyi
Aankhen Yeh Teri To Lagta Hai Royi
Le Kar Ke Naam Hamara
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Rootha Rootha Rab Choota Choota Sab
Toota Toota Dil Tere Bina Ab
Kaise Ho Jeena Ganwara Ab
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani

(now rey is driving his car harshly on an empty road...he stops his car at an empty place...n moves down n shouts TAANI...n falls on his knees)

RAY:i lost u taani...i m sry ...i m sry for hurting u...i love u taani...i wish i could tell u how much i love u..what u meant to me...u r my life taani...my reason to exist...(broken into tears thn wipes his tears)...i promise u taani.,...i'll give u back ur hapiness...i m doing this all for u...plz taani dnt hate me for this...main tumhari nafrat bardasht nahi kar paunga...plz taani...

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Bheegi Bheegi Si Hai Raaten
Bheegi Bheegi Yaaden
Bheegi Bheegi Baaten
Bheegi Bheegi Aankho Mein Kaisi Nami Hai
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha Aa Ha
Aa Ha Ha Ha
Na Jaane Koi Kaisi Hai Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani
Na Jaane Koi...
Na Jaane Koi Hamari Adhoori Kahaani
Na Jaane Koi Yeh Zindagani...Zindagani
Kahaani Adhoori Kahaani
Na Na Na...

(now scene is --taani lying on floor ..unconcious but still her heart was crying...her room is all messed up...all pics of rey on ground...taani lying on thm...blood flowing frm taani's hand n lying on rey's pics...n there rey was all shattered lyng on ground..n cursing himself for hurting taani)

CHAPTER 3

swayam enters in house n rings the doorbell but no one opens the door,...he opens the door with key n enters...he goes his room .changes n thn come out for dinner...he was worried for taani coz she nevers sleeps before meeting his bro at ni8...swayam goes n knocks on taani's rums door but no one responded so he moves in her room n he gets the biggest shock of his lyf aftr seeing the view infrnt of him...

view: many pictures of rey lying on the ground...broken glasses n blood on floor n there lying his cute baby sis on the floor...

swayam walks inside n tears started falling frm his eyes...he cant see taani like this...but more thn his pain he was worried for taani he goes n sits besides her n tries to wake her up...but she was still unconcious...he takes her to his room n keeps her on the bed n calls doctor...n thn he calls rey but he didnt pick his call...thn swayam's phone rings...it was sharon...swayam picked the call..

SHARON:hey swayam..do u knw where rey is??? he is not picking my call.

now swayam broke into tears ...sharon worried she asks swayam wat happened thn he tells her abt taani's condition...sharon tells him tht she'll be there in a moment n asks him to calm down n to take care of taani...thn doctor arrives n swayam cuts the call n take doctor in his room where taani was...

scene shifts to sharon ...she was waiting outside rey's house n thn rey comes in his car...anyone could tell luking at his face tht how much he cried today...he was luking so down...he comes out n strted moving inside thn sharon calls his name...

SHARON:rey.

REY:sharon tum yaha...(n hugs her tightly)..sharon she broke up wid me.

SHARON:rey taani...taani is not well.

REY(shocked +worried):kya...kkya hua taani ko...??

SHARON:just come with me rey...she is unoncious n hurt.

they both sit in rey's car n leaves for taayam's place...here swayam is walking here n there outside the room...thn sharey reaches there n at the same time gang members also reached there...(sharon had told simmi abt taani n thn all come to knw one by one n now all at taayam's place)...all comes n rings the door bell...swayam opens the door n let thm inside but thn he moves angrily towards rey...

SWAYAM(angrily):kya kiya tune meri behen ke saath??
(rey was just crying n not in any condition to reply him...)

SHARON:swayam...calm down...cant u see hez also hurt...plz not now...taani's health is more imp now...

swayam moves back n started staring at the door again...thn doctor comes outside)

REY(runs to doctor ):doctor how is taani now...is she okay ???? tell me damn it...how is she??

evryone rushes to doctor n asks the same ques...

DOCTOR:yeah she is okay now...but still unconcious...

SWAYAM:y ,if she okay now thn why ddnt get concious now.

DOCTOR:bcoz of weakness...actually i guess she was passing through a very bad stage...nowdays yougsters always behaves like this...get depressed n get their lives in danger...but she is okay now...but take extra care of her...dnt let her face any bad phase n try to keep her happy n busy...

n thn doctor leaves...all goes in swayam's room n see taani lying on bed ...her eyes were swollen bcoz of crying a lot n bandage on her hand n arm...she was not concious but still anyonw could guess her situation...frm how bad phase she passed through...thn sharon asks evryone to leave coz taani is okay now...all says tht they'll come tomorrow mrning to see her n leave except sharey...sharon goes to swayam n asks him to come out wid him n to leave rey n taani alone for sometym...swayam refused n takes sharey out of the room...

SWAYAM:now taani is alright so now tell me wat happened btw u ???

SHARON:swayam its not the right tym.

SWAYAM:sharon u stay out of this...the girl sleeping inside is my sis...i cant see her like this...she is all shatterd now..cant u see her situation...anything bad could have hapend wid her...n all bcoz of ths guy...tell me rey wat happened btween u ???

REY:we broke up(crying)...

SWAYAM:wat????...but why...i thought u guys love each other thn why??

SHARON:swayam plz not now...

SWAYAM:enough sharon...she is my sis n i hav all the rights to knw why she did this to herself...tell me rey dnt u guys lov each other...??

REY:it was all my fault swayam...i m sry...i never wanted to hurt her...

SWAYAM:but see rey...u hav hurted her so badly...do u evn hav any idea wat could hav hapened...i might loose her forever...

REy:no swayam...plz aisa mat bol...

SWAYAM:to kya kahu main...tune meri behen ko hurt kiya rey...(swayam turns n says) go away rey...go away frm her life.

REY:plz swayam...plz mujhe usse door mat kar main nahi jee paunga uske bina.

SWAYAM:bas rey ...ab bas bhi kar tera natak...i m just fed up wid this...u promised me ki tu kabhi taani ko hurt nahi karega...but u broke ur promise.

REY:plz swayam...mujhe ek baar taani se milne de...plz...agar kabhi bhi tune mujhe apna frnd mana h to plz bas ek baar mujhe usse milne de.

thn swayam says nothing n moves to taani's room...sharon goes behind him n tell rey to go n meet taani...rey moves in swayam's room(taani was sleeping there )

Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago

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Raveena Chauhan

@butterfly-ravee

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 4

rey enters in taani's room n saw a sleeping taani in frnt of him...he moves in n sit beside her on d bed...wind was flowing through the window n playing with taani's hairs a vry sweet n innocent smile appears on her face...may be she was not aware with the situation n lost in her own dreamland or may its the effect of rey's presence...rey always meant something else for taani...her life,her smile n her reason of existence...but now she had lost her life ...her rey...rey was totally lost in his lady love...the way she was smiling in her sleep it makes rey crazy...her smile gives him strength to fight the wrld...but how to fight with his own soul...his guilt was killing him frm inside...his heart was persing him frm inside -out...he never wanted to hurt taani...but always he end up with hurting her.n tht was his biggest guilt...he thn moves his hands twards her face n put his hair strap behind her ears...keep his hand on her cheeks n started crying...

REY:i m sry taani...i m sry for hurting u...i knw i m not a gud boyfriend..i always hurt u n this tym i crossed my limits ...but how dare u...how could u even try to kill urself...u r my life...i hate u for this...i cant live without u taani...i want u in my life...FOREVER.

scene shifts to taani's room-

swayam was sitting on floor with his baby sis pic in his hand...he was so much hurt after seeing taani's condition..he was blaming himself for all her pain ...sharon was trying to calm him but he was uncontrolable..

SWAYAM:sharon tumhe is baare mein kuch pata h kya...?? tumhe pata h ki taani n rey ke beech kya hua h...plz sharon answer me...plz.

sharon was numb...she wanted to tell swayam the truth but thn she remembers her promise to rey...so she nods in a NO.

swayam was still crying badly n 2 hrs past n it was morning now.rey was slept beside taani n was still sleeping...thn rey wakes up n realises tht he ws sleeping beside taani...he gets up n kisses her forehead n says-i m sry taani...i m sry for evrything...but i promise frm now i wnt hurt u again..love u.

n leaves...he goes directly to his home n sharon also leaves to her place...aftr some hrs taani gets up...

she opens her eyes n see swayam was sitting beside her...her hand was in swayam's hand...she smiles seeing his brother beside her...swayam sees tht taani is awake now ...

SWAYAM(help her to sit ):taani tum thik ho na.??..how r u feeling now...??? dard to nahi ho raha na.?? main doctor ko bulau kya??

TAANI(in low voice):nahi bhai..main thik hu..bilkul dard nahi ho raha h...i m perfectly fi9...(n smiles)

SWAYAM:taani tumne aisa kyu kiya (her smile vanishes)...kyu kiya tumne apne saath aisa...ek baar bhi nahi socha humare baare mein...mere baare mein ki agar tumhe kuch ho jata to main kya karta...kyu taani.

TAANI(quite for a long tym n thn utters only one wrd) : i m sry bhai...i m sry(started crying n hugs him )...

thn swayam reminds the wrd of doctor to make her happy...

SWAYAM: its okay taani...par aage kabhi aisa mat karna...for me taani (extends his hand)..promise me..promise me ki tum mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jaogi...hamesha khush rahogi...aur aisa to kabhi dobara karne ki sochogi bhi nahi.

TAANI(keeps her hand on his ):i promise bhai...i promise ki ab main hamesha khush rahoongi...apne liye ,aapke liye ,tauji ke liye aur apne frnds ke liye...i promise bhai.

SWAYAM:thts like my gud girl (kisses her forehead )...okay taani..u must be hungry na...get up n change...i'll bring food for u.

TAANI:okay bhai...main aati hu bahar...aap chalo .

thn swayam leaves n goes to kitchen...taani gets up n went to her room...the room was clean now...no mark of blood or rey's pictures...evrything was settled properly...thn taani moves to her cuboard n sees broken mirror there n a lone tear escapes frm her eyes...

TAANI:meri life bhi is toote hue glass ki jaise ho gayi h...chahe jo karle par hum isse dobara fix nahi kar sakte...its broken now...(n started crying badly)...but i hav to do this...i hav to live for u bhai...i hav to live for u...n i promise ki now i'll become a diff taani...a new taani...n i'll make u proud on me...main kabhi aapko hurt nahi karoongi bhai.

she goes to bathroom...takes bath n goes in kitchen direcly...there swayam was cooking food...taani comes n stands beside him n asks..

TAANI:bhai aaj aapko college nahi jana kya??

SWAYAM:nahi taani...aaj ka poora din main tumhare saath spend karoonga.

TAANI(started crying):its all bcoz of me na bhai...meri vajah se aap ab apna college bhi miss karoge...i promise bhai ki ab main vaise kuch dobara nahi karoongi.

SWAYAM(hugs her n pats on his back to calm her):hey hey taani...aisa kuch nai h...vo aaj maine leave li h coz main bhi bahut thak gaya hu...n vaise bhi kitna tym hogaya humne saath mein tym spend nahi kiya...i just want to cherish this tym with u n also wants to share somethng wid u.

TAANI:share?? wat??

swayam takes her to dinning table n makes her sit...goes n get food for both of thm n thn also sits beside her...

SWAYAM:vo actually taani...vo...(closes his eyes)...me n sharon r officially together now..

TAANI:wat??? (n gets up frm chair)...ye sab kab hua n kaise???

SWAYAM:arre vo kal ...kal sharon ne mujhse apna love confess kar liya...kya hua tum khsh nahi ho...

thn taani hugs him n says -no bhai i m happy for u...finally u got ur love...n i got my bhabhi...i m so happy.

TAANI(in mind):bhai ko kitne tym baad itni khushi mili h...main unhe rey ya sharon ke baare mein kuch nai bataungi ..varna unke relation pe effect hoga...)

TAANI(teasingly):finally ...ab main sharon ko bhabhi bula sakti hu...i m so happy.

SWAYAM(blushing):haan...aur ye baat maine sabse pehle tumhe batai h.

SWAYAM(in mind):i hope ab taani khush ho jaaye n uska mind divert ho jaaye is sab situation se...i want her to be happy forever.

TAANI:bhai kya soch rahe ho...oh sry correction...kiske baare mein soch rahe ho...sharon BHABHIII...

swayam starts blushing again n makes her sit n says-ab chal jadi se apna food finish kar...n thn they starts eating...lter they enjoyed a lot whole day...during this D3 team comes n meet her...they all were vry nice with her,...girls usual chit -chatting n boys pranks n masti...but no one discussed abt rey coz this could hurt taani...like this 2 days passed...now taani is recovering n then she decides to go college...during this taani was confused abt her future plans coz she wanted to achieve something big in her life..

scene-swyam's room

taani knocks on swayam's door n gets in...swayam was talking on phone thn he disconnects n comes to taani n tell her tht papa(taani's tauji ) will come after 1 week...he went to his work place for some meeting n he dnt knw abt taani's condition...coz taani asked swayam to hide this frm him.

TAANI:bhai mujhe aapko kuch batana tha..

SWAYAM:haan taani bolo na kya batana hai.

TAANI:bhai vo main kalse college jaana chahti hu...bhai plz...main ghar pe bahut bore ho jati hu...n u knw i m GS ..jyada din leave pe bhi nahi reh sakti...aur NDC ki bhi to responsibilities h na...plz bhai.

SWAYAM:par taani...tumhari health...tum abhi poore tarah se thik nahi hui ho.

tAANI:nahi bhai...dekho na main bilkul theek hu ...ab kuch nahi hua h mujhe...plz na bhai.

thn swayam thinks ki taani ko sad karna n akele ghar pe chodna thik nhai h coz doctor ne kaha tha ki usse wrk mein busy rakhna hoga...so he agrees n taani hugs him n goes to her room happily.

in taani's room ...she was happy +nervous for tomorrow tht how she will face rey...how her new life gonna wrk ...n she prmise herself to be strng in frnt of rey n evryone...she decides to forget abt rey n to strt a new life happily...n sleeps.

REY'S CONDITION-

rey was still sad + guilty + angry these days...sad for his break up...guilty for his bad decision n angry on taani bcoz she tried to kill herself bcoz oh him...in these 2 days he tried to talk to swayam but all in vain thn he decides tht he will not interafre in taayam's life frm now...

now-he is still sad...sitting on his bed with taani's picture in his hand...crying..

REY:i m sry taani..i m sry for evrything..i knw i m vry bad i hurted u so much...but plz taani dnt punish urself for this...i m the one who should be punished,...plz taani forgive me for what i did...i m sry taani...i lov u...n thn he also sleeps crying...

===nxt day taani woke up n gets ready for college n leaves for college with her brother on the other hand rey also gets ready n leaves for college...

taayam reaches college n got busy in their respective wrks...here rey also joined swayam in practise n whn thy finished thy went to canteen...taani was already there doing some wrk...rey saw her n a sudden pain goes through him but he tries to act normal n goes n sits with gang +taani...taani saw him coming ..her heart skips a beat but she controlled herself n keep herself busy in her wrk...soon they all started chit-chatting...they all were happy ...taarey also acts normal coz they dnt want their team to suffer bcoz of their bad equations...soon tym passes n swaron were worried for taarey coz they knw its vry diff for thm to face each other...swayam was still angry wid rey but taani insisted him to act normal to him coz she dsnt want her brothers frndshp wid rey to suffer just bcoz of her...soon evrything gets normal...2 more days passed...rey was waiting for taani's move towards her future n tani was still stuck wid her past n couldnt evn think abt her future...thn one eve...taayam were going their place thn sharon called swayam ...they had a date n swayam forgot abt it...she was angry wid him...taani heard their convo n she asks swayam to go n manofy sharon...

SWAYAM:but taani tum ghar kaise jaogi...u knw na its really late.

TAANi:bhai dnt wry..main chali jaungi...abhi sharon bhabhi ko manana jyada imp h.

SWAYAM:but taani..

TAANI:no ifs n buts bhai...aap bas ja rahe ho...vaise bhi mujhe walk karna pasand h...main chali jaungi n i m sure mujhe aage koi taxi mil jayegi...aap jao ab (n pushes swayam to go )

(dnt get excited guys...rey usse drop karne nahi ja raha h...heheh..LOL)

taani started walking on road...engrosed in her own thoughts...cool breeze was flowing n the weather was just so beautiful...the best situation to spend tym wid ur luv but instead of making taani happy this weather was killing her...she never felt so alone in her life...n suddenly she found tht she is not alone there...some bad eyes were staring her beauty...she notices this n gets tensed...she starts moving faster n those 3 guys followed her...she was feeling so bad..she started moving more faster but suddenly a guy came in frnt of her..

she stops n realises one of those bad guy in standing in frnt of him...luking at her frm bottom to top...she turns around n finds two more guys standing in frnt of her n staring her...

GUY1: where r u going babes??? can we hlp u?? (n tries to touch her hand)

guy 2: dnt get scared ...come with us...u wnt regret ur decision.

GUY3: aww poor girl dnt have someone wid her...dnt wry...hum hai na.

GUY 1:ya come with us. (taani gets more scared n was abt to shout on thm n suddenly a car stops there )

chapter 5

some guys followed taani ...taani gets scared n was abt to shout on thm n suddenly a car stops there..

the car stops with creating a great sound and the front door car opens and a guy wearing a black jeans and white shirt and a black cut sleevs jacket came out of the car...he slides his spectacles frm his eyes and keeps them in frnt of his shirt...his face was not shown till now..then he moves to taani and stands in frnt of her.

taani was hell scared now...but after seeing tht guy her hopes were back...she goes n stands behind tht guy.

guy 1:tu beech mein mat aa...jaa yaha se.ye ladki humari h.

guy2:chala ja nahi to maar khake jayega.

guy 3:sunai nahi deta kya...batau kya tujhe.

the guy starts folding his shirts sleeves...and starts moving forward...the bad guys were ready to fight with him...

then the GG(gud guy) came forward and thn he speaks something.

GG (to one bad guy):arre tu to us minister ka beta h na...(he takes some ministers name)..??

BG:haan,to tujhe kya...chal aa aage lad mujhse.

GG(smiling):haan main samajh gaya tumhara plan...abhi mujhse maar khaoge and phir apne dad se bolke mujhe jail bhijvaoge...tumhe kya tum to minister ke bete ho..band to meri bajegi na.

BG:(laughing):hahahaah...tu aur mujhe marega.

GG:haan yaar...mujhe pata h tujhe to kuch hoga nahi..tujhe maarne ki vajah se main to fas jaunga na..tera baap to tujhe kuch kahega nahi.

BG:oye tu mere dad ko jaanta nahi h...tere se jyada vo meri band bajayenge...bade hi strict h.

GG(keeps his hand on tht guys shoulder):arre sacchi yaar..aise h tere dad...bada dukh hua sunkar...inte zalim h.

BG(he also becomes friendly him GG):arre yaar ye to kuch nahi...daat padegi pehle to aur phir 2 mahine ki pocket money band vo alag.

during this taani was quitely watching this all n trying to find out tht whats going on in frnt of her eyes.

GG:arre sach yaar phir tu kya karega...parties,masti..in sabka kya.

BG:arre yaar yehi to problem h.

GG:arre not to wry yaar...tera bhai h na(indicating himself)..main karaunga tujhe aish...arre dono milke udayenge maze.

BG:sach yaar...tu saccha bhai h sachme.

BG2:arre haan bhai ..hum sab bhi saath karenge party.

BG3:haan yaar...hum chaaro bhai saath aish maarenge...late night parties.

GG:done yaar...vaise yaha koi accha disco visko hai ki nahi.

BG1:arre hai na...bahut h...aur vaha to tere bhai ki chalti bhi bahut h.

GG:chal phir kal chalte h vaha.

BG1:chal thik h phir kal milte h.

BG2:par is ladki ka kya kare.

GG:arre yaar apni bhabhi ko jaane de na yaar.

BG1:kya bhabhi...matlab vo teri..

gg cames n keeps his hand on taani's shoulder...

GG:haan yaar meri girl friend h.(taani's eyes popped out ..she stares him in anger...but he assures her tht she'll be fine)

BG1:arre bhabhi ji maaf karna...pehle kyu ni bola ki aap bhai ke saath ho.

BG2:bhabhi ji kaho to aapko ghar chod aaye.

GG:arre nahi yaar rehne de main chod dunga.

BG1:chal thik h bhai phir kal milte h.

GG:accha chalo bye...kal milenenge.

then he takes taani with him and makes her sit in car...and then they both leaves from there...taani was still in shock and then the guy starts laughing hardly...taani sees him in disbelief...then he looks at taani n winks.

taani:wat was that???

GG: i dnt knw... but that was too funny na.(n starts laughing more hard)

then gaani get lost somewhere and luks outside the car..she was luking so beautiful the guy get lost in her and was thinking tht wat kind of girl she is...she didnt laugh on such a funny situation..then taani luks at him .the guy came out of his trance .

guy:so where u live??? tell me i'll drop u.

taani tells him the adress and then they reaches there...taani says thanks to him and moves out of the car...the guy parks the car and follows taani.

taani:hey i'll go myself...u can leave.

guy:arre aise kaise...tumhari jaan bachayi h...coffee to pilao..i thought we'll spend some tym together.

taani:sry...aapne galat samajh liya...thanks for helping me...but actually(she was finding wrds)..

guy:so dnt wanna spend tym with me babes.

taani: what?? have u gone mad...(shouts)..mujhe tumse help leni hi nahi chahiye thi.u just get lost.

GUY:whao ho...shaant lady bheem ..shant...main mazak kar raha tha...actually i also live here...i m ur neighbour.

taani:what?? par pehle to kabhi tumhe yaha nahi dekha.

guy:vo main kal hi yaha shift hua hu.

taani:okay then gud ni8..and thanks once again.

guy:okay sweet heart ..gud ni8.

taani moves straight to her home n tht guy went to his place.

...taani goes to her room..gets fresh n then moves to kitchen to cook something for swayam n herself.then door bell rings.she opens the door n then shouts...

taani:TUM...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.

guy(smiles seeing her rxn):kuch nahi...main bore ho raha tha to socha yaha aa jau.

swayam comes out of his room..

swayam:kaun h taani...chilla kyu rahi ho...(then luks at door)...and sammie tu is wakt yaha...chal aa andar aa.

sammie comes inside nd goes n sits with swayam on sofa...taani was still shocked then she closes the door nd comes inside.

taani(to swayam):bhai aap isse jaante ho...??

swayam:haan taani ye humara neighbour h...aaj subah hi mulakat hui thi...kyu kya hua tum jaante ho ek doosre ko.

taani:nahi bhai...bas aise hi..main khana banati hu.

then swayam and sammie starts their talk...swayam was enjoying his company...then sammie asks him abt some music CD's...swayam wnts in his room to find those CD's...sammie was getting bored so he walks in the kitchen to meet taani or can say to irritate taani. LOL 😆😆😉

taani was standing in kitchen and cutting some vegetables...then sammie enters and walks to her..she get scared to see him in kitchen.

taani:tum ...tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.

sammie:kuch nahi bas tumhara bhai room mein gaya h n maine socha ki tum bore ho rahi hogi so tumhe company dene chala aaya...any problem?

taani:haan problem hai...mujhe kaam karne do tum bhai ke room mein jao.

sammie:arre tumhara bhai busy hoga apni GF se baat karne mein...tabhi to itna tym lag raha h.

taani gives him a fake smile n gets to her wrk again.

then sammie comes n sits on the table where she was wrking.and takes one tomato and starts eating it.

sammie:vaise tum hamesha hi aise rehti ho ya aaj koi khaas baat h.

taani(making irritating face):matlab??

sammie:matlab aise rehna.

taani:kaise rehna.

sammie:jaise tum rehti ho...tumhe hasna nahi aata kya.hamsha muh fulaye ghoomti rehti ho...sabse aise hi baat karti ho ya main kuch jyada hi spcl hu.

taani:ab tum bataoge ki mujhe kaise rehna h.

sammie:haan,vaise lyf ko na khulke jeena chahiye...ye lyf bahut precious hoti h...tumhe koi help chahiye ho to bol dena.

taani:get out.

sammie:kya .mere kaam kharab ho gaye h...tum thnk u bol rahi ho and mujhe get out sunai de raha h.

taani:maine get out hi bola h.

sammie:aisa kyu...maine kya kiya h..tumhara padosi hu yaar.

taani:padosi ho na to padosi ki tarah behave karo.

sammie:okay...(rings bell in air).tring tring...ek cup doodh milega.

taani:kya???

sammie:arre doodh maangne aaya hu...padosi yehi to karte h...so doodh milega.

taani gets irritated and turns her face and strts wrking again.till thn swayam comes in kitchen.

swayam:arre sammie tu yaha kya kar raha h.

sammie:arre kuch nahi yaar...vo dekhne aaya tha ki dinner ban gaya ya nahi.

swayam(gets confused) :haan bas ban raha h...chal hum bahar baithte h.

then the trio eats their food and thn sammie leaves for his home.after dinner taani was washing dishes thn swayam comes in kitchen.

taani:bhai aapne usse dinner pe kyu invite kiya?

swayam:arre yaar maine nahi kiya...usne khud hi ko dinner ke liye invite kar liya...to main kya karta...chal chod na sweet h kaafi...accha nature h.

taani:sweet? ahhh...kitna irritating hai.

swayam:kyu kya hua ...aisa kya kiya usne.

taani:arre bolta h ki main kabhi smile nahi karti...so stupid na.

swayam:vaise sahi to keh raha tha...aaj kal tum smile karti hi kaha ho.

thn swayam leaves a more irritated taani behind...taani fnshes her wrk and wents in her room...she sits on his bed and talks to herself.

taani:main kahi sachme to muskurana nahi bhool gayi na...nahi nahi...yaar main kitna to smile karti hu...aur vaise bhi vo kaun hota h mujhe batane wala ki kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi...ahhh..oh god...he is so irritating...MR.maddy...totally mad h vo to...kitna irritate karta h...krishna ji plz usse na mujhse door hi rakhna...plz...arre taani ab batein band kar so ja subah VP sir ke saath meeting bhi to hai na...vaise bhi main uske baare mein kyu soch rahi hu..so ja subah jaldi bhi to uthna h...chalo accha h college mein to atleast vo irritate nahi karega...thnk god.

then taani sleeps...still thinking over his wrds.

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SAMAR RAGHUVANSHI (sammie / maddy):a vry rich,hot,smart,handsome guy...girls drools over him...he really have a sweet heart ...always helps evryone...lives his life to the fullest..enjoys every moment of life..a vry gud actor,singer and dancer...best in acting and dircting...born to irritate taani hehehe...but will get back the colors in her life.taani will get a gud frnd in him.

Chapter 6

D3 gang rehersing in rehersal hall.

They all were busy in their rehersals except shareyam.rey and swayam were making mistakes again and again..they both were worried for taanithen rehearsals got finished and everyone decides to go in canteen.

All leaves except sharey

Sharon: rey kya hua??u r luking disturbed.

Rey:Sharon I m worried about taani. I dnt knw usne apne future ke baare mein kuch socha h ya nahi.main to usse baat bhi nahi kar sakta..sharon tum usse baat karo na.

Sharon: rey vo mujhse baat nahi karegimain bhi bahut confused hu rey..main yeh soch rahi hu ki usne swayam ko kuch kyu nahi bataya

Rey: tum kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho??

Sharon:taani ne swayam ko humari us din wali conversation ke baare mein nahi bataya..agar bataya hota to swayam mujhse itna normal behave nai karta.

Rey:yashayad taani bhi yahi chahti h ki tumhare aur swayam ke beech koi problems na aaye.agar swayam ko pata chalta ki tum mere break up plan ke baare mein jaanti thi to vo pata nahi kaise react karta.

here sharey were talking and Someone was standing at door and hearing their conversation.

SWAYAM:break up plan??

Sharon & rey turns around and see tht swayam was standing therethen swayam moves inside and stands in front of them.

Sharon:swayam tum yaha??

Swayam:tum log kis break up plan ke baare mein baat kar rahe the.aur Sharon tum janti thi in sab ke baare mein.

Sharon:swayam calm down..just listen to me.

Swayam:calm down?? Sharon how could u expect a calm behavior frm me.u guys are talking about my sisterI still dnt know the reason behind my sister's break upmy best friend is hiding things from me and u.sharon we were couple na..but u r also hiding things from me.

Rey:swayam..meri baat to sun.

Swayam:bol rey ..kya bolna chahta h tu.ye sab ek plan tha righttune taani se break up karne ke liye plan kiya.oh god..disgusting.

Rey:swayam meri baat to sunmaine ye sab taani ke liye kiya h.

And then he tells everything to swayamabt taani's carrier,sharey's fake conversation.

Swayam was hell shocked nowhe dnt knw how to react.

Swayam:rey tu pagal ho gaya h kya?? Tune ye sab kiya.rey tu taani ko samjha bhi to sakta tha navo samajh jati.

Rey: nahi swayam vo kabhi nai samajhti.bas yahi raasta bacha thaagar koi aur way hoti to main aisa kabhi nahi karta..

Swayam:rey tune mujhe ek baar batana tak jaroori nahi samjha..aur Sharon tum.tumne bhi nahi socha mere baare mein.

And then he leaves rehearsal hall Sharon calls his name but he didn't listen and moves out of college.

Sharon also leaves cryingrey calls her but she says tht she wanna live alone for sometime nd leaves. rey also sits on floor and starts crying.

Scene shifts to auditorium-

Taani and samar were still busy in taking auditions...then a vry hot,arrogant girl comes on stage and delivers her lines..

Taani:hey its not like tht.try again.

Priya again speaks her lines but she was really bad .

Samar: look at ur frntspeak lines with feelings.

Priya still make mistakes..taani again points out her mistakes and then tells her to try next tym and to practice more.

Priya:oh so u will teach me how to act...stupid non-talented girl.

Taani and samar were shocked from her wrds.then one other girl..priya's frnd speaks.

girl2: oh plz taani...u r nothing...miss.nobody.

girl3: u r just here at this position bcoz of ur boyfriend and brother.

Priya:u dnt knw even A of acting and now u r just teaching me how to act.huh.

And comes down the stage and leaves.evryone starts laughing on taani.taani runs out of auditorium and goes in FE.

Samar was angry and shockedangry on those bimbos wrds and shocked because taani didn't answered them back n runs out crying.he tries to find out taani and finally finds her in FE.

He opens the door and see that taani was sitting there and crying.

Samar-taani..wat was that?? Tumne unhe kuch jawab kyu nahi diya.ur acting skills are brilliant then why did u listen all tht shithow could u be like thisthey were talking rubbish about u and u didn't reacted.

Taani(crying) :u just stay out of my matter.who r u to interfare..just leave.

Samar tries to console her..

Samar:tumhe kya hua h taaniy r u like this..swayam told me that u were so carefree and happy girl but now just because of one break up u r like thisu forgot smiling.

Taani:tumhe pata bhi h ki mere saath kitna kuch hua h.just a break up hah..its not just a break uprey is my life and now he is not with me.i cant live without him..i love him but he(crying more badly)..he hates mehe never loved mebecause I m nothingyes I m miss.nobodyno one loves meI dnt have my own identity...tum imagine bhi nahi kar sakte ki sab mere baare mein kya kya ulta seedha bolte hbut tumhe kya fark padta h.ho kaun tum mere.y I m telling u all this..ur kind of guys just know how to use girls..first u flirted with me and now trying to be my friendbut let me clear one thing mr.samar raghuvanshi I m not that kind of girl.jo kal break up hua nd aaj naya ladka dhoond liyaand u were talking abt my smile.how could I smile when I just broke up with someone whom I loved more than my life.

Samar was listening all this quietly but then he also lost his senses n shouts over taani.

samar: enough taani enough..now i think they were ri8...u r a loser. and u deserves to be alone. You know what vo sab tumhare baare mein aisa kyu bolte h coz tum khud bhi apne aap ko ek looser hi samajhti ho. U knw tumhe na sirf doosro se pyaar karna aata hapne bhai se,frnds se apne boy friend se..but wat abt urself.u knw tumhe koi pyaar kyu nahi karta..coz tum khud hi apne aap se nafrat karti ho.

Then he comes to his senses and realises taani's situation and again tries to console taani(in low voice)

samar :Taani jab tak tum khudse pyaar karna nai sikhogi tab tak koi tumhe pyaar nahi karega.taani hum sab ke andar koi na koi talent chupa hota hdhoondo tum apne us talent kobut tumhe to sirf loser bane rehna h.so be a LOSER sabko hasne do tumhare uppar..but taani remember one thing..doosro ko vahi log pyaar kar sakte h jo apne aap se pyaar karte ho.aur tum to apne aap se hi pyaar nahi karti to doosro ko kaha se pyaar krogi.

And then he leaves the FE..leavng a broken taani behind..taani sits on the floor and starts crying badly

Samar's wrds were echoing in taani's ears

(u knw tumhe koi pyaar kyu nahi karta..coz tum khud hi apne aap se nafrat karti ho.)

(Taani jab tak tum khudse pyaar karna nai sikhogi tab tak koi tumhe pyaar nahi karega)

Song(description below the lyric)

scenes-Taani in FE,rey in rehersal hall,Sharon in her room and swayam on road near a bench.

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

Is Pyaar Mein Hon Kaise Kaise Imntihaan

Ye Pyaar Likhe Kaisi Kaisi Dastaan

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

Taani crying badly in FErey's wrds echoing her ears.

--taani ko to sirf shaadi ki padi h...SHAADI SHAADI n only SHAADI...y cant she understnd tht i m tolerating her only bcoz of swayam.

( Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar ) (2)

Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

rey sitting on floor of rehersal hall and crying and remembering taani's wrds..

--rey ye vahi jagah h jaha aapne mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya tha...yahi hum dono ek hue the... aur aaj yahi main aapse apna har rishta todti huI m breaking up with u reyaansh singhania.

rey crying more hardnd says--I m sorry taani.i m sry for hurting u.

Kaisa Hai Safar Wafa Ki Manjil Ka

Na Hai Koi Hal Dilon Ki Mushkil Ka

Swayam sitting on road near a bench with his cyclehis face covered with his hands.he clutches his hairs and shouts.

Dhadkan Dhadkan Bikhri Ranjishein

Saansein Saansein Tooti Bandishein

Rey hits his hands on the wall and again starts crying

Kahi To Har Lamha Honton Pe Fariyaad Hai

Kisi Ki Duniya Chaahat Mein Barbaad Hai

Sharon lying on floor of her room and crying.she takes a wars and hits it on mirror in front of her and shouts SWAYAM and sits on floor crying.

( Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar ) (2)

Sharon lying on floor and cryingswayam on road and crying and rey crying in rehersal hall.

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Taani crying and her past moving in front of her eyes

Koi Na Sune Sisakati Aanhon Ko(crying badly in her room after break up and crying in basketball court )

Koi Na Dhare Tadapati Baahon Ko (rey hugging her in FE)(then she forwards her arm but rey disappears and she again starts crying more badly)

Aadhi Aadhi Puri Khwaishein(remembering her dream sequence abt their wedding )

Tooti Footi Sab Farmaaishein (then realizes that she is alone in FE exit and breaks down again)

Kahin Shak Hain(sharon crying on swayam's wrds)

Kahin Nafrat Ki Deewaar Hai (swayam remembering Sharon and rey's conv)

Kahin Jeet Mein Bhi Shamil Palpal Haar Hain

(rey crying remembering their break-up scene)

Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

(scene-swayam crying and Sharon crying )

Ho Ya Rabba De De Koi Jaan Bhi Agar

Dilbar Pe Ho Na, Dilbar Pe Ho Na Koi Asar

(scene-rey and taani crying )

Ho O O Pyaar Hai Ya Saja, Aai Mere Dil Bata

Tootata Kyon Nahi Dard Ka Silsila

(they all four crying.)'

Shouts-

Rey-I love u taani.

Shouts-

Taani-I love u rey.

scene-

rey -taani both crying and lying down on floor.

Swayam -sharon also crying and sitting on floor.

chapter ends----------------------

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so guys here is the character sketch of DS members (main) samrat

samrat sahai-sweet ,caring guy...member of DS and a very gud actor ...loves photography and brother of nupur.

nupur sahai-a very sweet ,caring and bubbly girl...beautiful.and have a pure heart. member of DS...handles the costume and prop department(head). sister of samrat .

alisha singh- sweet ,caring,beautiful ,intelligent and member of DS...handles prop and costume department with nupur. somewhere have feelings for sahil .

sahil sharma- hot,smart and have gud acting skills ..boy friend of riya and trusts her blindly. member of DS (actor and also manages accounts and budgets of DS ).

riya ahuja- hot ,beautiful,arrogant,spoilt rich kid,not an gud actor, in relation with sahil just because of his reputation and position in DS n college.

samar raghuvanshi-(sammy and maddy ) ...hot ,handsome,smart,intelligent,sweet and caring sometimes and irritating all the time. student of st.louis london and will join st.lous mumbai drama society to help them and direct their play for national championship. will become taani's friend and help her to overcome through her tough life. samar raghuvanshi

Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago

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Raveena Chauhan

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chapter 7(a)

next morning-

taani sitting near her room's window and having her morning tea...many thoughts were running through taani's mind...

taani: krishna ji plz help me...i dnt knw ki mujhe kya karna chahiye ..maddy ke wrds mujhe itna kyu affect kar rahe h...kya main sachmein apni lyf se saath galat kar rahi hu...may be he was right..main doosro ko pyaar karne ke chakkar mein apne aapse pyaar karna to bhool hi gayi...shayad bhai bhi mujhe yahi realise karana chahte h ..pehle main bhai ke saath kitni masti karti thi...pehle to chahe kitni bhi problems kyu na ho main smile karna nahi chodti thi but now i also think ki meri smile kahi kho gayi h...i m not like this...this is not real me...

then she remembers her past days...when she entered in st.louis...her masti with gang...how she used to irritate her bhai...her non-stop bakbak...and also the moments she spend with rey. a tear drop falls from her eyes but she wiped it ..

taani : no taani..not again .ab tu kamzoor nahi bn sakti...u hav to fight..not for someone else but for urself.

then she remembers maddy's wrds (i mean samar's wrds )

ur acting skills are brilliant then why did u listen all tht shithow could u be like thisthey were talking rubbish about u and u didn't reacted.

taani: does he really mean tht...may be my actng skills are not tht bad ...so i must try this...mujhe DS join karna chahiye...and vaise bhi i always love reading and watching plays...shakespiere ke to sabhi plays ki deewani hu main...

she gets up frm couch(near window) ..folds her hands and smiles.

taani: so ms.taani shekhawat now its ur tym to rule the wrld...now its tym to be myself...to be old taani...

then she remembers her wrds to samar ..

taani:oh freak maine kal gusse mein pata nahi maddy ko kya kya bol diya...vo bechara to meri help hi kar raha tha...bechaara .ahh kitna irritate karta h...par dil ka bura bhi nahi h...to kya mujhe maafi mangni chahiye...hmmm...maafi mang hi leti hu ek baar...vaise bhi ab 2 mnths tak uske saath hi deal karna h ...to taani ji chaliye ab tayaar ho jaiye college jaane ke liye...sbko jhatka bhi to dena h DS join karne ki news dekar.

then she gets ready and leaves for college.

here D3 team is present in canteen and having fun...there is still problem btwn swaron and reyaam...taani enters canteen smiling...she is lost in her own wrld ..but this tym in happy wrld...she enters with a huge smile on her face and thinking abt making carrier in acting and her coming lyf in DS...bharat notice her .

bharat: bhai log ye taani ko kya hua h...ye itna muskura kyu rahi h.

vicky: kaha??

bharat: arre vo dekho aa rahi h andar.

evryone looks over taani and get confused tht why she is smiling like this.

swayam: to prblem kya h..smile hi to kar rahi h na.

neha: but neha thinking why taani smiling.

taani looks around in canteen and then notice tht samar is sitting alone in one corner...cloud taani appears.

C taani : vo dekh maddy vaha betha...ja uske paas and sry bol de.

taani: haan par kaise bolu...aur vo phir peeche pad gaya to.bahut pakayega phir.

C taani: ab galti ki h to bhugat...darr mat jaldi ja aur bol de.

cloud taani disspears and then taani moves towards maddy's table ...D3 gang still noticing her moves.

taani stands near samar's table and then samar look over her and then again starts doing his wrk.

cloud taani appears..

C taani: khadi kya h bol dena jaldi se.

taani ( looks up ) : arre bol rahi hu na ..usse meri taraf dekhne to de.

samar also looks up and tries to find out with whom she is talking. then taani looks at him and again he ignores her.

taani : hey samar...vo mujhe aapse kuch bolna tha...vo ...sorry...vo maine kal aapse bahut hi rudely baat ki and aap par chillayi bhi...so i m sry.

samar still busy in his wrk and ignoring her...D3 gang trying to listen their talks...taani sits beside him on chair and again speaks.

taani: look i knw maine jo bhi kiya vo galat tha...and i m really feeling vry guilty...i just wanted to say sry now its upto u ki aapko mujhe maaf karna h ya nahi.

then samar looks at her and smiles.

samar: vaise meri mom kehti h ki mujhmein ek bahut acchi aadat h.

taani looks confusingly at him .

samar: arre vo main kisi se jyada der naraz nahi reh sakta aur specially beautiful ladkiyon se.

taani: ye complimnt tha.

samar: haan...thnks to bol do.

taani: watever...accha aapne mujhe maaf to kiya na.

samar:hmmm sochna padega...accha chalo maaf kiya ..so frnds.

taani thinks for while...then

taani: okay...friends.

then they shakes hands

samar: so cofffee now.

taani: hmmm okay.

then both gets up and take their coffee frm counter..

here with D3 gang-

simmi: ye ladka kaun h yaar and ye taani ke saath kya kar raha h.

swayam: arre ye humara new nieghbour hai but ye yaha kya kar raha h.

vicky: dude maine suna h ki isne kisi kaam se humara collge join kiya h.

rey: but ye taani ke saath kya kar raha h.

nil: tu itna jealous kyu ho raha h...tera aur taani ka to break up ho gya h na.

rey: main jealous nahi ho raha hu...i m jst concerned abt her...hum us ladke ko jaante bhi nahi h and taani uske saath tym spent kar rahi h.

taani and samar comes and sits again..

samar: so ms.water wrks aage ke kya plan h??

taani: water ..what???

samar: water wrks.ab itna rougi to aur kya naam rakhun.

Taani: ahhh god.why I m here with umujhe chalna chhaiye varna main pagal ho jaungi.

Samar: okay okay sryab nahi bolunga..sit now.

Then there was a silence for a min-

Samar: vaise tumhe na koi bahut yaad kar raha tha.

Taani: 1 min.sirf 1 min hi chup reh sakte ho kya tum.huhh kaun yaad kar raha tha.

Samar: arre tumhare devar(taani looks at him angrily and confusingly)arre srymatlab vo ladke jo us din raat ko mile the na.

Taani: tum sachmein unke saath party karne gaye the.

Samar: aur nahi to kya promise kiya tha apne bhaiyo se.

Taani(in mind): ye ladka sachmein pagal h and agar main iske saath rahi na thodi der aur to main bhi pagal ho jaungi.

Samar: kaha kho gayi..kiske baare mein soch rahi ho.

Taani: kuch nahi bas aise hi..anyways I hav to leave now.. important metting h VP sir ke saath.

Samar: main bhi chalta hu unhone mujhe bhi bulaya h is meeting ke liye.

Then both leaves and D3 gang stands there confused,,then rey starts moving behind them and D3 boys followed him (except swayam).now taani and samar moving through corridor and d3 boys behind them.

Samar: vaise ye rey kaun h??

Taani stands still and looks at him and again strts moving.

Samar: tumhara ex-boy frnd na.( no response frm taani)vaise tumhara break up kyu hua tha.

Taani(points her finger to him ) : listen its none of your business.so jst stay away.

samar: okay okay ..why r u shouting...main to aise hi pooch raha tha.nahi batana to mat batao.

then both again starts moving...some girls were standing there and they stars talking abt taani.

G1-ye GS hai na...ab ye kiske saath ghoom rahi h.

G2-pata nahi...pehle shivam then rey and ab ye koi new boy.

g3-arre nahi Gs wrk ki vajah se uske saath h...vo new DS member h...kal ye bhi to auditions le raha tha na.

G1- gos knows ye taani ko GS kisne bana diya.

G2- arre isse kuch aata jata h nahi bas apne BF and bro ki position ka fayda utha rahi h.

samar and taani stops and then taani starts luking at them...

g2- what ..y r u staring us.

taani- aapne kuch kaha...( taani replies in calm yet firm voice)

g1- ya we said tht rey is so hot but his Gf is not ( n all three laughs)

here rey is getting angry on those bimbos and he was abt to move to them but then taani replies...

taani-thnk god i m not a material to be kept in microwave.

girls confused and samar laughs on her statement and here D3 boys also confused.

vicky: did she really said that.

nil: ya dude...

then all laughs and rey's tubelight ligtens and he also laughs on her reply.

G1- whatever.

and then all three leaves ...taani smiles tht first tym she answered back to someone and tht makes their mouth shut. samar still laughing and then they both leave and moves in VP's cabin. D3 boys also leave for canteen and they enters canteen laughing...all D3 girls + swayam luks confusingly at them.

swayam- kya hua guys...tum log itna has kyu rahe ho.

vicky: jo scene abhi hum dekh ke aaye h na vo agar tu dekhta na to tera bhi yahi haal hota.

swayam: aisa kya dekh liya tum dono ne.

then they nerrates the whole scene to swayam and swayam stands there shocked.

simmi: u must be joking guys.

bharat: abbe teri to gaali deti h.

amar: alle vo galli nai de lahi h...alle simmi humne satmein dekha ye tab.

aashi: taani itna badal types kaisi gayi ek raat mein.

sharon: to accha h na...+ve changes are always gud...humein to khush hona chahiye tht finally taani is moving in her lyf.

all: yeah.

here in VP's cabin taani informs him tht she is also joining DS and samar and VP bth are happy over her decision...then samar and taani comes out of VP's cabin.

CHAPTER 7(B)

Samar and taani headed to DS hall for meeting with all members.many students were attending their classes sotaani,samar,samrat,sahil,riya,nupur ,Alisha and more 4-5 students were there.

Taani- so guys humein kuch jaldi sochna hogawe cant wait anymore.

Samar-yeah..sirf 2mnths h NDC mein (national drama comp).

Samrat- ya and this should be a grand playfirst tym we r gonna represent our college at such a high level.

Taani-exactly my pointguys this comp is vry big and VP sir hav many hopes from us.

Then all starts thinking all were moving frm here and there

Samrat: socho girls socho..apne ghutno par zor daalo.

All were confused tht what he saidthen all boys laugs and nupur also gets it so she hits on samrat's head with a book in her hand.

Nupur-mazak ka tym nahi h..jaldi kuch socho.

Alisha-how abt.nahi nahi.rehne do.

Samrat: vo kaisa raheganahi nahi vo bhi nahi.

Samar-kuch socho na guys.

Taani-haan humare play mein sab kuch hona chahiye.love

Nupur-drama

sahil(luking at riya)-romance.

Riya-fight.

Alisha-frndshp

Samrat-emotions.

Samar- madness.

All looks at samar..

Taani- ya guys ab samar h to madness to honi banti h na.

Then all laughs.and again strts thinking.

Riya-what abt ROMEO-JULIET

sahil-wow riya..gr8.

Taani-nahi yaar romeo-juliet bahut baar dekh chuke h.

Nupur-aur dekhkar pak bhi chuke h.

Alisha-yeahkuch aur sochte h.

Samar-I have an idea.

All looks at samar.

Samar-what abt..TAMING OF THE SHREW.

All-yeah gr8its awsm.

Samar-ya it hav everythingfrndhp,love,sacrifise,emotions,fights

Taani-madness (and laughs)

Samar-haan madness .

Alisha-but guys uski ending is nt tht gud..i mean it brilliant but aaj ke generation will nt lyk it.

Nupur-yeah she got a point.

Taani thinks for a while..and then speaks

Taani-so no prob..we'll change its endingI knw Shakespeare ji will nt mind us doing tht.

Samrat-but play edit karega kaun.

Samar-taani aur kaun.

All loks at taaniand taani makes a scared faces.

Samar-I knw taani ur writing skills are vry gudVP sir told me tht u always score gud in literature and even other fields.so its final..taani will edit our play.

Taani-but I m nt sure guysitni badi responsibility.

Samar-nt to fear whn samar is here.i'll help u na..so chill.

Samrat-so its decidedwe'll do TAMING OF THE SHREW.

Taani-NO.TAMING OF THE SHREW-REBORN.

Samar-not badname abhi se edit kar diya.

All shouts-TAMING OF THE SHREW REBORN.

All do some wrks and then decided to move in canteen and then distribute their wrks..taani and gang(I'll call thm DS gang..okay) enters in canteenD3 team is already sitted there.DS gang goes and sits there.

D3 mems notice them

Nil:ye to vahi subah vala ladka h na taani ke saath.

Rey:taani ke saath???kaun ladka?? (his back was facing DS)

Vicky:arre vo dekh taani aayi hai and uske saath kuch aur students bhi haur vo subah wala ladka bhi jispe taani chilayi thi corridor mein.

Neha: also coffee bhi piyi thi.

Rey looks at themtaani also notices rey but she turns her face to other side and again strts talking to DS mems.

Here rey was super jealous.

DS mems-

Samrat: so guys kya plans h.

Taani: hmm humein characters ke liye audition lene honge.so samrat and nupur can u plz arrange the auditions..

Samrat-okay tum mujhe saari characters ki list and roles mail kar dena main dekh loonga.

Taani-and sahil ,riya and Alisha can u plz make arrangements with the auditorium.

sahil-okay.done.

Samar-aur main aur taani scripts pe kaam strt kar dete h and even ek demo script tayaar karte h kal ke auditions ke liye and vo play bhi to dobara padhna padega.

Taani-haan ..vaise jarrorat nahi hmujhe poora play with dialogues yaad h.

All: what.

Taani: ismein hairaan hone wali kya baat h.arre itna intresting play h ek baar padhne se hi yaad ho gaya.

Nupur: ab mujhe pata chala ye studies mein top kaise maarti harre dekho na ek baar padhte hi isse cheeze yaad ho jaati h.

Riya: yeah..so c'mon lets get back to wrk.(irritatingly)

All: okay.

Only samar and taani are sitting nowtaani was thinking something.

Samar: so kis soch mein doobi hui ho balike.

Taani: main soch rahi hu ki humare play mein aisa kya kare jo sabse alag ho.

Samar: hmmm hum already script edit kar rahe h na.

Taani: kya pata doosre log bhi vahi kar rahe ho.

Samar: hmmm so kya kare aisa.

Taani: how abt a dancing & musical play.

Samar: what.??

Taani: yaa see..dancing is so amazing thingso we'll execute our play with music and dance.so this will be a new thing.

Samar gets happy and hugs taani .rey and swayam see this and gets angry.

Samar: wow water wrksbrilliant idea.mujhe nahi pata tha tumhe rone ke alawa kuch aur bhi aata h.

Taani: but problem is ki humein dance sikhayega kaun.

Samar: arre humare college mein dance team h na..unki help lete h.

Taani: nahi yaar vo busy honge.

Samar: arre ab to unka NDC bhi nahi h.chal na baat karte hdekh vo yahi pe h.

Taani: nahi tum rehne do main baat kar loongipar kal..okay.

Samar: okaychal thik h phir main VP sir se permission lekar aata hu.

Taani: okay bye.

Samar:bye sweet heart (and gives her a flying kiss with his two fingers)( rey and swayam gets more angry )

Then taani moves to table where D3 gang is sitting..

Taani: bhai vomujhe aapko kuch batana hai.

Neha: taani u pehle sit na.

Taani sits in btwn girls.

Simmi: taani who was tht guy??(all luking at taani and rey listening very carefully)

Taani: kaun??

Aashi:vo jiske saath aap abhi baithe types the.

Neha:aur subah coffee drinking.

Taani:oh maddy.

All:maddy??(rey thinks nick name bhi de diya itna jaldi)

Taani:I mean samar.arre thts samar..samar raghuvanshi.humare college mein new h..specially humara play direct karne aaya h.

All:play??

Taani: haan bhai mujhe aapko yahi batana tha..vo actually main na humare college ki drama society join kar li h.and now humara school national drama championship mein participate karne wala h.

Swayam:oh gr8 taani.

then they all chit-chat for some tym and then moves to thier homes...while talking taani notices prob btwn swaron ..she gets tensed and thinks usse swaron ko close laana hi padega.

Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago

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chapter 8

taayam reaches their home and dirctly goes to thier rooms and then come out for dinner...taayam having dinner together.

swayam:taani achanak se DS join karne ka plan kaise bana liya.

taani: bhai achanak se nahi mujhe hamesha hi drama,plays in sab mein interest tha.

swayam: oh thts gud...(thinks- lagta h rey ne jo kiya vo sahi tha...aaj ussi ke plan ki vajah se taani dobara apne passion pe con. kar rahi h )

taani: bhai (swayam comes out of his thoughts) bhai kya soch rahe ho.

swayam:huh...kuch nahi...bas aise hi...taani tumhe kuch help chahiye ho to bata dena.

taani: haan bhai thik h. (starts thinking something)

swayam: accha chalo mera ho gaya main chalta hu(stands up with his plates and move in kitchen)

taani also follows him with his plate.and then goes in kitchen and both put their plates in sink...taani started putting some food in fridge.

swayam: arre taani rehne do kaka kar lenge.

taani: nahi bhai its okay main kar deti hu.(she starts doing her wrk and swayam strts moving to his room )

taani: bhai .vo aapse kuch baat karni thi.

swayam (stops and turns):haan taani bolo.

taani: bhai vo hum sab na national drama championship mein apna ek drama represent karne wale h...

swayam: oh thts gr8...so

taani: so bhai humne socha h ki simple drama na karke hum musical and dancing drama kare.

swayam: oh wow brilliant idea...this is really a new thing...this a crowd puller idea...so wats the problem.

taani: bhai problem ye h ki humein acche se dance nahi aata...

swayam: oh...koi nahi hum sab tumhari help kar denge...vaise bhi abhi hum free hi h.

taani:(hugs him)thnk u so much bhai...thnk u.

then both moves to their rooms...taani goes and sits on her bed..she is playing with her phone.and then thinks.

taani: hmmm not bad taani...aaj kal to tu badi hi smart ho gayi h saari problems aise hi chutkiyon mein solve kar deti h...ab to koi problem baaki nai h...ab kal jaldi se auditions lekar rehersals strt kar denge...i hope kate and pitrochio ke role ke liye koi accha student mil jaaye aur usse atleast thoda bahut dance to aata ho...thn D3 team humein help karegi dance seekhane mein aur issi bahane bhai aur sharon bhi paas aa jayenge...haan kuch na kuch karke bhai aur sharon ko paas lana hoga...ab to bas koi problem nahi baaki h.

then her phone rings...name flashing "maddy"...

taani: ahhh problem ka naam liya nahi ki problem ka phone aa gaya.

taani takes the call-

taani: hllo problem...i mean hllo maddy.

samar:hllo water wrks..so kya kar rahi thi...let me guess mere baare mein soch rahi thi na.

taani:haan main din-raat...sote jaagte tumhare hi baare mein to sochti hu.

samar:vo to mujhe pata h .mere charm se aaj tak koi bach paaya h kya.

taani: tumne itni raat ko ye chit-chat karne ke liye call kiya h mujhe...jaldi bolo kya kaam h main tumhari tarah velli nahi hu..mujhe aur bhi kaam h.

samar: arre shant ho jao baccha itni bhi jaldi kya h...accha chalo kaam ki baat pe aata hu...so kya chal raha h script likhi ya nahi..kal auditions h kal tak thode dialogues to prepared hone chahiye na.

taani:haan tum to kuch karna mat bas order dete rehna...vaise haan maine kal ke liye dialogues prepare kar liye h..just hope ki sahil n alisha ne auditions ke preprations kar li ho.

samar: madam mein na sabse jyada kaam ka banda hu...maine pata kar liya h.auditions ki saari preprations ho gayi h...aap bas kal tym pe aa jaiyega.

taani: main hamesha tym pe hi aati hu.

samar: gud...late aana bhi nai chahiye.

taani:soo??

samar: sooo??

taani: so aur kuch kehna kehna h ya main phone rakhu.

samar: kyu tumhare boyfrnd ne mana kiya h kya kisi aur ladke se baat karne ke liye.

taani: haha ...u really think ye sab funny hai.

samar: yeps...kya pata issi bahane se tum smile to kardo.

taani:oh plzzz mujhe smile karne ke liye aise stupid jokes ki jaroorat nahi h.

samar: oh really to phir tum smile kyu nahi karti...ya phir shayad sad rehkar apne ex-boyfrnd ka attention gain karna chahti ho.

taani: what r u saying??aisa kuch nahi h...u r really mad.

samar: nthing bas mujhe laga aisa..agar aise nahi h to mujhe galat proove karo.

taani: i dnt need to proove anything okay.so just shut ur mouth.

samar: oh sidha sidha kaho na ki nahi kar sakti mujhe galat proove.

taani: okay i'll proove u wrong...now just shut up.

samar: hmmm okay madam we'll see...ab kuch aur hai kya kehne ke liye ya main phone rakhu...kitna baat karti ho tum ladkiyaan.

taani: haan hai na kehne ke liye...GO TO HELL.

samar: same 2 u baby and gud ni8. and plz dnt dream abt me.

taani: watever. (cuts the call)

samar smiles...and taani gets more irritated frm his behaviour...then she sleeps and samar also sleeps.

next morning all reaches college...all in canteen..DS mems and also D3 mems...

swayam: so guys i hope u dnt have any problem in teaching dance to DS ppl.

nil: no dude its perfectly f9.

simmi: haan vaise bhi hum free hai abhi.

neha: neha wanting to participate in this drama.

samrat: okay neha it will be our pleasure to have such talented girl in our group. (neha smiles and vicky didnt like that samrat gave her compliment)

vicky: haan neha tum bahut telented ho...tum jaroor participate karna.

neha: simmi pinch me...my babu praising me.

nil: dude tujhe kya ho gaya h ..tu neha ko bhaav kyu de raha h.

vicky: kuch nahi yaar ye samrat neha ki tareef kyu kar raha tha.

nil: oh to tu jealous ho raha h...hmm not bad.

taani witness all this boys convo...then she thinks ki agar koi ladka sharon ko praise karega to swayam bhi jealous hoga.

taani: accha guys jaldi chalo abhi auditions bhi lene h na.

then all starts taking auditions...but no one was suitable for kate's role...they decided petruchio's role will be played by samar.

samar: nxt girl.

then a girl came but she was also not gud.

then riya comes for auditions...she was doing it okay.

sahil: gud riya...u r amazing.

taani: no riya...thoda aur emotion laao...u knw u r hyper in this part so thode se gusse se bolo.

riya again speaks but still tamar (taani-samar) were nt satisfied.

taani: riya thoda jyada ho gaya...ek baar phir se acche se lines padho.

riya: oh really taani ...tumhe itna hi pata h to tum karke dikhao na.

taani: main?

samar: yaa taani jao..karke dikhao usse ek baar.

taani gets up on the stage and with full confidence she says the dialogues..

taani: she throws the things on ground and shouts "shaadi,shaadi,shaadi kitni baat kaha h mujhe shaadi nahi karni...ab jo bhi mujhe dekhne aayega uski haddiyon ka chura meri machliyon ka chara ban jayega...keh do un ghodo pe savaar gadho se ki mjhe shaadi nahi karni ,nahi karni "

(sry guys saare dialogues acche se yaad nhai the...plz kaam chala lo...i love this part so maine add kar diya..sry)

then taani stops and evryone claps for her...the girl who alwys stays calm is now shouting like mad..may be this is called acting.

samar: awsm yaar...u were superb.

samrat: hey i got an idea...taani tum kate ka role play karo na.

taani: wat??? me n kate...pagal ho gaye ho mujhse nahi hoga.

nupur: arre nahi sacchi taani u were amazing...plz taani tum humari last hope ho...plz

all: plz taani (riya is getting jealous and angry too)

then after many yes-no,yes-no...tanni finally agrees to play katherine (kate's)role...

then they all r done with auditions...there is a new entry of gunjan who will play kate's sisters role,...and mayank is gunjan's bro and he will help in costume department.(sorry guys for not focusing on their entries)

chapter 9

everything was set now...all the characters were finalised for play.

All Ds mems were sitting in canteen and chit-chatting. Then D3 group enters and they comes straight to Ds mems .

all got settled and starts eating & talking.

Swaron were quite...now swayam also realsied that somewhere sharey idea was correct coz now taani started concentrating on her carrier but still he was hurt that they didnt shared their idea with him.

on the other hand sharon was hurt bcoz of swayam's beahiviour but more she was guilty.

the things started sorting btwn reyam but still taarey and swaron were seperate.

both couples were exchanging glances but both were hurt.

taani was hurt bcoz she thinks that this break is true & permanent and rey was hurt that he cant tell the truth to taani.

hey not only these couple but there were many couples who love each other but still not talking to each other...

viha...vicky was feeling jealous of samrat and neha and now he want his kagu back in his lyf...he was regretting his break-up decision...but neha was luking at samar.

nil was busy in adoring simmi ,while simmi was busy in watching samar (yeah samar is centre of attracion for all girls)

bharat was trying to talk to rinni while amar was trying to keep him away from his rinni.

rinni was busy in watching samar.

aashi was also busy in watching samar.

mayank-nupur & gunjan -samrat were also adoring each other ..they were feeling something for each other.

sahil was watching riya and riya was watching samar and alisha was watching sahil.

this all was happening when swayam's phone broke the silence...he got a call from his dad.(yeah he is still in london)...he went away from there and sharon was sitting sad.

taani was busy in avoiding rey when she realised that swaron were still not talking to each other.

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she started luking the boys and rey was noticing her.(now everything will be silent in minds of ppl)

taani(in mind ) : hmmm bhai ko na jealous karna hoga tabhi vo bha...sharon ke saath baat karenge...D3 boys se to bhai jelous nahi honge vo to unke and sharon ke frnds hai...

luking at sahil-

cloud taani appers-

CT-nahi nahi ...vo to riya ke saath h...agar riya to pata chala to vo sahil aur tujhe dono ko maar degi.

taani- haan...bad idea.

(rey- ye taani sahil ko aise kyu ghoor rahi h)

luking at samar-

CT- nahi nahi vo mr.irritating ...vo pagal h...sharon ko bhi irritate karega nd agar sharon apne maa chandi ke roop me aa gayi to maddy aur tujhe maar degi.

Taani- haan maddy se to door hi rehna chahiye.

(rey- ab samar ko aise dekh rahi h.)

luking at samrat-

CT- nahi nahi...vo to ek no. ka flirt hai...jyada flirting ki to bhai usse maar denge.

(rey- ye taani ke dimag mein chal kya raha h...ye boys ko aise kyu dekh rahi h)

luking at mayank-

cloud taani stays quite.

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taani(loudly standing up frm chair)- mil gaya.

all luks at her

all- kya mil gaya.

taani(biting her lips) - vo vo...haan vo mayank aapne mujhe vo designer ka address poocha tha na vo mil gaya...chalo chalo jaldi chalte h...late ho jayenge varna.

(mayank was confused and abt to say something but she drags him out)

rey was also confused and he follows them.

all again started their wrk(Luk-luk wrk)

samar was busy in thinking abt taarey when he realise that all girls were staring him dreamingly. he smiles .

samar- guys ...(gaining all attension and then continues) ..hey dnt u think rey and taani ke beech kuch h.

nil: dnt u knw dude unka abhi break-up hua h.

samar: yaa i knw that...but still mujhe lagta h unke beech kuch h.

samrat: break-up ke baad anger and hate ke alawa kya ho sakta h.

samar: arre unhe dekhke strng wali feeling aati h ki unke beech kuch h...yaar tumne notice nahi kiya kya.

samrat: accha aur tujhe aisa kyu lagta h.(and starts drinking water)

samar: arre vo ek doosre ko bilkul aise dekhte h jaise tu gunjan ko dekhta h.

samrat spits the water out of mouth and everyones mouth opens in O shape and gunjan's eyes widens but then she blushes...girls looks at her and starts teasing her and then she runs away from there.

samrat: kya yaar marvayega tu kisi din.

samar: bas ab rehne de aur ja usse bol de.

samrat blushes and then runs behind gunjan (note guys bth possesive bhai's - mayank & swayam were not present at that tym)

then swayam comes after finishing call and again all starts doing their wrks but this tym real wrk..not LLHH.

scene shifts to taani and mayank -

they both were sitting on stairs and rey was hiding behind a pillar.

taani narrates the whole plan to him and insists him to make swayam jealous.he also agrees and here rey was happy that taani is doing a lot for his best frnds and he was also happy coz only bcoz of him swaron were separate and now his love taani is trying to correct his mistake.

next scene sharey in projector room-

rey and sharon standing in projector room...and sharon was trying to convience rey to reveal truth in front of taani.

rey: no sharon i cant risk it.

sharon: but rey tum result se itna scared kyu ho.

rey: coz i love her sharon and i knw ki vo bahut hurt hai...usne agar mana kar diya to.

sharon: bas vo mana kar degi is darr se tum usse nahi bata rahe ho.

rey: nahi sharon aur bhi reasons hai...agar maine usse bata diya to kahi vo guilty feel na kare...sharon vo swayam jaisi h ..bilkul khuddar ...agar usse pata chala ki maine uske liye ye sab kiya h...to vo isse favour samjhegi.

usse lagege ki uski vajah se main hurt hua hu.

sharon: to tum usse nahi bataoge .

rey: bataunga na.(and smiles)

sharon(luks at his smile) : rey whats the plan.

rey: sharon i'll make her fall in love with me again...main usse bahut special feel karaunga..main usse realise karaunga that i still love her...aur jab vo mujhe trust karne lagegi to main usse sab bata doonga.

sharon: rey is sab ki kya jaroorat hai...tum seedha bol do na.

rey: nahi sharon...main is guilt waali feeling se guzar chuka hu and main nahi chahta ki taani bhi vahi face kare.

sharon: rey what do u mean.??

rey(narrates whole shivam matter to her) : haan sharon taani ne mere liye us shivam to jhela tha...usne mujhe bataya nahi ...taaki mujhe guilty feel na ho...but jab hum ek doosre ko trust karne lage tab usne confess kiya...mujhe bura to laga tha but then maine uska POV samjha ...and humara relation aur strng ho gaya...sharon usne apne aapse pehle mere baare mein socha...so now its my turn.

sharon: really rey ur love is gr8...u bth r so selfless...bth loves each other a lot.

rey: vaise tum aur swayam bhi kam nahi ho...dono ek doosre ko pyaar karte ho par ladai karne ka ek bhi mauka nahi chodte...ab ladai ke bina pyaar thode hi hota h.

sharon blushes.

next scene all in auditorium-

all were busy in their wrks but mayank and sharon were sitting in corner and discussing something.

swayam was getting restless and nupur also.bth were jealous.

taani thinking that mayank was doing his job to jealous swayam.

but sharon and mayank were discussing something else...they were discussing taarey love stry.

flashback scene-

sharon was sitting in a corner and then mayank came to her to jealous swayam but then he saw she is crying silently...he sits beside her.

mayank: hey sharon wat happened.

sharon(wipes her tears):nthing vo bas aankh mein kuch chala gaya tha.

mayank: hey u can tell me...mere liye jaise gunjan hai vaise hi tum..bhai samajh kar to share kar sakti ho na.

then sharon cries a lot and tell him everythng..abt rey's plan...taarey fight..swaron fight and rey's latest plan.

and then they decide to get taarey back together.

present scene-

all finishes their wrk and then leaves for home except taarey,swaron and mayank.

gunjan came running...all looks at her.

gunjan: bhai bhai...(reaches to him)

mayank: kya hua aise bhaag kyu rahi h.

gunjan: bhai nupur ne aapko yaad dilane ko bola h ki aapko aaj kisi bhi haalat mein sabke costumes ke measurments tailor tak pahuchane h...phir 3-4 weeks tak shop owner nahi rahega yaha ...so aaj raat se pehle de aana measurments.

mayank: ye baat vo bhi to aakar bol sakti thi na.

gunjan : ye sab mujhe nahi pata...haan bas ye pata h ki vo aappar kisi baat ko lekar bahut naraz h.

(gunjan leaves)

mayank(thinks): kahi ye jealous to nahi ho rahi h...this means uske dil mein bhi mere liye feeling h.

sharon: arre kaha kho gaye mayank.

mayank: kahi nahi...vo sharon kya tum..jakar measurments de sakti ho..mujhe kuch jaroori kaam h.

sharon: par mujhe to VP sir se kuch jaroori kaam h.

mayank: swayam tum ja sakte ho.

swayam(thinks): main gaya to ye sharon ke phir close jaane ki kosish karega...sharon iske saath akele safe nahi h.

swayam: nahi mujhe bhi kuch zaroori kaam h.

taani: main chali jaati hu.

swayam: nahi tum itni raat ko akeli nahi jaogi.

then mayank and sharon thinks something.

both in unison: rey chala jayega uske saath.

swayam fumes in anger coz they bth speaks same at one tym.

taani: nahi main chali jaungi akeli.

swayam: nahi tu akeli nahi jayegi...rey jayega tere saath.

sharon: rey tum jaoge na.

rey: ya sharon y not.

taani: to phir aap akele chale jao.

rey: kyu tumhara kaam h..u r the head of this DS so tumhe hi jana chahiye...i m not ur servant.

taani: whatever...thik h bhai main chali jaungi inke saath.

swaron,mayank and rey smiles.

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scene- taarey in a shop .

taani: ji ye sab details hai...humein show se 10 din pehle ye dresses tayaar chahiye.

tailor: ji madam thik h...hum tym pe dressses trial ke liye bhej denge.

taani was talking to tailor and rey was adoring her standing on door of shop.then taani comes to him.

taani: chale.

rey: haan haan chalo .

then both reaches to rey's bike.

both sits and rey starts the bike...taani was sitting at a distance from him.

rey(thinks) : yahi sahi tym h plan start karne ka...taani ko special feel karana hoga...bas taani ab tumse aur door nahi reh sakta.

rey: taani aise distance pe bethogi na to meri byke bura maan jayegi.

taani ignores him.and then the byke stops.

rey: dekha maan gayi na bura...(taani glares him )

rey: oh shit...petrol khatam.

taani: rey aapko dekhke aana chahiye tha na...ab itki raat ko taxi bhi nahi milegi.

(checks phone) aur yaha to signal bhi nahi h.

rey: galti ho gayi na...ab GF's ki tarah daatna band karo.

taani: ab GF hu to...(stops)...i mean vo aap topic change mat karo...aapko petrol check karna chahiye tha na.

rey: sorry na baba...ab maaf bhi kar do...vaise tum gusse mein cute lagti hu par smile karte hue aur bhi acchi lagti ho..so plz smile.

taani got surprised by his reply.but she ignores him and starts moving.

rey (in mind) : lagta h naraz ho gayi...pehle to compliment sunkar smile karti thi.

taani moves but stops at a distance...she wants him to follow her.

rey understands that she is scared of going alone on the empty road ...so he follows her.

they both were moving on a empty road.

******************rey starts singing***********************************

Thoda hans ke tu dikha
Thoda thoda paas toh bula
Thodi baatein mujhse kar
Thoda thoda pyar toh jata
Thode sapne toh dikha
Mujhe thoda thoda apna toh bana..

(taani was wlking straight on road and rey followiung her and then he sings...he came in frnt of her and action in smile with his fingers...then tries to come close to her but she gets aside and again starts walking...he smiles...he jumps on all road and takes a round spin...and holds himself like hugging )

O..o.. tu chahe jo kahe
Mujhe itna hai pata
Teri khamoshi mein hai
Bas mera naam..

Tu chahe jo kahe
Mujhe itna hai pata
Teri khamoshi mein hai
Bas mera naam..

(he jumps on the sides on road and takes a round around tree...the holds a tree branch and the leaves showers on taani...she smiles and wides her hand and starts taking rounds...but then she realises that she is not tlking to him and again moves ...but he came in front of her and sits on road and wides his hands...but she moves from his side ..he ruffles his hair with his hands and again follows her)

Thoda dekh toh idar
Is deewane se nazrein toh mila..
Man ki baat keh de tu
Dil ke parde khol do zara
Teri ik hasi pe
Main sari duniya par kar gaya..

(she moves inside a park to cross it...he follows her...she comes from small wooden door but he jumps from greals and stands in front of her...she stops with a jerk and her hairs fells on her face...he moves them aside with his hand...she closes her eyes and smiles with his touch...a wide smiles appears on his face but she opens her eyes and moves away from there...he still smiling but then follows her)

O..o.. tu chahe jo kahe
Main ho gaya tera
Tere naam se hi ab
Meri khushiyan..

Tu chahe jo kahe
Main ho gaya tera
Tere naam se hi ab
Meri khushiyan..

(she moves in park he drags her to a swing and make her sit on that and starts pushing the swing...she also enjoys and laughs...he got lost in her laughter but she comes in sense and moves away from there)

Thoda yaad kar ke dekh
Udd ke tere nazdeek aaonga
Mujhse pyar kar ke dekh..
Saara jahaan qadmon mein laaunga
Tujhse vaada hai mera
Main saaton janam tujhko hi chahunga..

(taani was moving but he hides behind a tree ..she turns back and got tensed abt him...then he came singing back from tree..she gives an attitude and turns..he climbs on a little bundle on bricks and jumps from them and comes in front of her...takes her hand and then sits on his knees and actions like "Saara jahaan qadmon mein laaunga" but she moves away smiling...and then they reaches in front on taayam's house. her heart beat stops on his wrds "Tujhse vaada hai mera ...Main saaton janam tujhko hi chahunga..")

O..o.. tu chahe jo kahe
Yeh baat maan le
Rehta hai dil mera
Tere dil mein..

(she turns and he smiles but she runs to her home ...)

Tu chahe jo kahe
Yeh baat maan le
Rehta hai dil mera
Tere dil mein

(he sings these lines in low voice and then moves away from there to his home)

she comes running to her room and takes out the locket from that cardboard box and keeps it near her heart and starts crying...she was crying and smiling at same tym.)

Edited by butterfly-ravee - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Awsm

Just read all da chaps

Loved it

The emotions were portrayed so beautifully

Continue soon

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sonali

@Sona_loveVD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome read all chapters..loved it...continue soon

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Muskan Agarwal

@Muskan_TR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

ohkk di...

niw its been months u r out...
I very well know dat u r busy wid ur lyf ...
bt hamara bhi toh socho...
:'(

pehle u started such breathtaking stories n then widout completing dem u gv dem brk...

plzzz plzzz try to update ...
nt regularly to 1 story per week...
though it will make stories go slow bt at least they will b continued...

u take 1 story first...update it once in a week...finish it n then take another. ...
then also if its difficult so make it a collab...

bt plzz kuch bhi karo bt unn most amazing stories ko update karo...
hope u will read dis msg