AShlok FF - The Unusual Wedding - Part 28

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banoo2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Awesome update shlok is falling for astha update soon

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Am I allowed to say I dont like dis story?

I really have to say I love love and love it so much instead! 😉
U r an awesome writer..Do update soon and longer...Ye dil mange more! 😃

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Just read chapter.nine and ten, so varad was married, and aastha getting clues about her in-laws...interesting, liked shloks pov on how he was struggling to ignore her and then aasthas on shlock was also well written. Nice how aastha ignored him because of her feelings. cocroach part followed by their hug and then the last part when he was tying her dori was also very nice.

Edited by latha_555 - 11 years ago

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Beautiful updates!! 🤗

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ankita sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Thanks for such a lovely updt.
Loving the way shlok n astha r getting attracted to each other.
Loved d cockroach scene.
Thanks for d pm

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ptamom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Really lovely update. I am truly enjoying this relationship develop.

👏 for a beautify story. Great writing!!!

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ptamom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

As I was reading part 9..this line came to me

" I 've got you under my skin." Yeah good luck Shlok it won't be so easy...😉

Edited by aviaanya - 11 years ago

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maivelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

awww doori tieing was awww moment loved it

loved the update

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

part 9

awesome part
loved iit
varad is married...

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Dee James

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: fiza1995
Thanks for such a lovely updt.
Loving the way shlok n astha r getting attracted to each other.
Loved d cockroach scene.
Thanks for d pm

Thank you so much 😊