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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update👏Loved the way Maan taking care of her is so lovely😛❤️Maan is really so naughty now😉Loved Geet-Adi bond❤️❤️Loved she told Adi about butterflies😆Loved Adi teasing Maan its so cute..poor maan.. he was caught😛😆Loved it😳Thanks for the PM dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo maan singh khurana
yeh training hai k how to romance ur innocent lover??????????
geet me laugh her plight
adi become geet frd geet share about butterfly n rat to him
adi teasing good
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome & lovely updates loved it so much
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bechare Maan ko kitna sharminda hona pad raha hai...Geet blabbered all about chuha and butterflies to Adi...

Geet is naive so why maan is trying to touch her...

nice update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 15

Maan face torn red in shyness, he bend his head, and mummer ye geet KO bolana padega don't say anybody what is happening between us, but he know he caught by adi .he mummer geet ke babaji please save me from adi interrogation adi just laugh and and slap maan on shoulder , Mr msk don't hide from me and just hug maan and say I am so happy for you maan so happy but with serious face adi say him , maan but no butterfly with my friend ha , maan just blush and hug adi ...


Next day early morning maan coming from his gym and on the way he just peep in geet room there his lady love become sleeping beauty ,he just admitting her , he went near her and tuch her baby bump , imm get response from his pari beautiful smile come on his face his pari always react o his touch , geet and his pari just change his life they brought him from dark , when his own parent push him in that dark ...when pari give another kick , geet wake up from her sleep and mummer RAT , please let me sleep please ...maan want to protest but geet baby face , just divert his mind and he lost in this nave beauty his geet , child love ,he took long breath and say maan you have to work on your love step by step ,you have to control yourself at list for 2 year huuu...he just softly call geet geet wake , meri pari must be Hungary , wake-up geet ...



geet just frown ...and mummer , i feel sleep , please maanji go from hear , before maan say anything , geet feel another big kick , and geet moan in pain , Rat , she slowly sit on bed and say pata nahi , rat and maanji ko mere se kya dushmani hai , don't even peacefully sleep me ... babaji please help me , ye dono DD se bacavo , maan just enjoying her talk , and say to himself perfect start of day Wow



after little tom and Jerry show geet went for bath and maan also went to his room , after some time all are gather in dining room , nakul serve Bf for all , as usual geet making trouble for eating but glare from maan and dadi , she start to eat like scare kitten , adi just enjoying this maan want to shift early in simala , so he start to say , dadi , can we all shift to shimla



dadi first get surprise , but than get it it is for geet , she just nodded and say why not beta , we will but we have to discuss with geet doc , ok

just than adi ask geet , ok fried you comp-lit your 10 na ...

geet eyes turn moist with qus , image of her parent , their happy family , rano accident and , parent death ...all start to come in front of her like movie ...she say in soft voice no friend , I just study till my half year in 8 std now that is big blow for maan , adi , dadi aware of it

dadi , yes adi when geet study in 8 std rano have accident for rano , geet have to left her school


adi chocked his voice , how this little angle suffer in her life , maan eye adi for not to cry , adi control his feeling and say don't worry now you can continued your study , what say maan , maan just nodded his head , geet eys twinkles in happiness ... she ask innocently sacchi , but next second her face turn pale , she ask , but all teasing me fat girl , now trio confused with her ans


adi say geet you are not fat friend


adi friend , she pointed her finger to her baby bump and say i am fat with hear ,she make baby face , all nodded their head


Maan, geet I have solution, you can study in house itself me , adi and dadi teach you , so don't worry ...you only attend your exam that should be after pari arrival , so nobody say you fat , you are beautiful geet , maan say her taking , sit nest to her ... and geet feel so much happy , she jut kiss maan on his cheek and hug him and say thanks maanji thanks ...she have her dimple smile on her face , maan just enjoying her reaction , but when his eyes met with adi and dadi he just bend his head in embarrassment , teasing smile of their face red hu start to come in his face , that is really bliss for dadi and adi , they feel so much happy for this maan , new maan full of life ... maan want to ask for marriage also nd he want to ask it in front of geet so he know geet reaction so he ask dadi


maan , dadi i want to marry geet , i want court marriage within before he complete his sentence geet say loudly NOOO, all start to gaping her , adi give meaningful look to maan like Poor Msk reject By GEET , maan gave annoy look

Geet why should I marry you ...maanji ,do you want to marry with child girl ,i am only 16 year old and it is against law she say with such serious face


Trio in shock , how geet know about it , dadi was one who come out first from shock and ask , how you know beta


geet say with big smile ...like she win something big , OH dadi wo TV pe dekha tha .


Three of them want bang their head on wall , oh this girl


maan just say , Tv ka connection nikalna padega , she reject me in front of this adi and dadi now they tease me like hell


just dadi change subject , she know this sub before geet , not working at all so dadi just wink to adi and say it is party time na , maaneet looking them like what party


dadi say one for geet study and another for maan ...geet ask second for , dadi say with naughty smirk second for maan NEW study , what say maan, maan face turn more red with dadi teasing , he just hug dadi


But on voice weep all happiness from maan face , he just lost color of his face , dadi also get fear for maan reaction , maan just want to not face two person in his whole life they are front of him , all image of his suffering start to come in front him , he feel so suffocated , like he cant breath properly



Yes there his so called parent come ther , Party , Yes pushing us in hell it is time for party to you both granny and grandson , say maan father with smirk maan just closed his finger to control his feeling , hated , just than her so called ma said Yes , they are busy hear with party , with this charity person , maan mother give mean look to adi , maan blood start to boil with each and every word of his so call parent he just turn his back to them and say to dadi in angry tone , why this man and women is hear dadima , don't want any stranger near us ... so tell them leave from hear before , my servant push them out ...



maan parent get shock of their life with reaction maan , they don't even their dream think that , their broken son , lost of confidence son , can talk with them ,with this attitude ...before maan mother say anything her eyes went to geet , who is standing near dadi with fearful eyes ... she don't like this stranger don't know why but she don't like them


maan mother have witch smile on her face and say , OH lady who always talk about principal , trues , ritual , she allowed this in her house wow that is braking new , she say all this with point to geet baby bump ...before dadi replay anything Maan roared like angry hurt lion , Mrs. Khurana , it is not your business , so stay away from it , you get it

just than his father reply , yes we know our business , because of your grandparent we have to come hear , he turn to dadi and say why , you block our a/c , now maan smirk , and say oh oh so Mr khurana come hear for so called MONEY ,


dadi say with attitude oh , but talk to me mr. khurana , i stop to doing charity so now onwards you don't get money ...you get it



mr and mrs khurana get furious with dadi ans , they say , charity to ye adi he or ye , pata nahi kis ghar ki servant hai they pointed to geet , geet eyes start to pour tear none stop , she just sobbing ,maan cant look her pain , he just called his servant to through that them out , but maan mother , Pata nahi Kis S*** ke na jane kitne loga ke sath soi hai iske liye apne parent ka insult kar raha hai , umer main to choti hai but she is only behind name kuhrana and money . geet just closed her mouth to stop sob ,...servant just show them outside way ,but their talk gave deep impact on geet , she just faint in dadi arm , maan just called loudly geet , adi just called doc , doc come there imm and check her and say its ok she just faint , but i already tell you all stay away her from tension , its danger for her and child ..


maan just blame himself and went to his room and lock himself in his room he just throw all thing on floor , he make mess in his room , with braking sound all come near maan door all scared for him geet also with them ,maan just out of control , he just making mess in his room ,all things shutter in room , he is full of range he just grown it loud voice why me why me . Why they come hear why, why they always want to destroy my life , ku nasur bana rahe hai mere life ko why why ... mere injury ko bharne ku nahi deat, why they always make my life big mess why why mix poison in my life , i must died when i attempt that suicide yes , he say with holding broken piece of mirror in his hand dadi , adi just pleading him to open door and Geet standing their with shock , this is so much for her she is verge of braking down , she cant saw maan like this

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14
awesome dear...
lovely...
shes so cute and innocent...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet is so cute and innocent.maan parents are devil 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
did they have to come back
those money minded little urggg
this is so bad
just when he was happy
making another life for himself
with his geet and their ari
and of course with adi and dadi
that these greedy people had to come
and what didnt they say about geet
poor thing fainted
and this made him mad
oh boy this is scary
hope he doesnt go in his shell
awww he was admiring geet
and her rat puran sure didnt finish
she didnt finish her studies
well now she can
hmmm she rejected maan well she is right
only 16 still illegal to marry
and she only knew cause of TV
but then those people came and ruined everything
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago



koi parents apne bachche ke liye itne cruel ho sakte hain kya...I don't believe...

nice update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updt
maan get tease from daadi and adi
geet reject maan
why the hell maan parents are so mean
both maaneet are in pain
cont soon
thnx fr pm

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