FAN FIC:Kripa- unhappy superstar? - Page 2

Aw...........welcome aboard, once again.Gaayab mat hona.Already reeling under Chilly, Sugar Bun,Lata, JOTS, Asd's sudden disappearance....gumshuda..koi hua!😆

cant gaurantee that .... will be regular for about month more . then colleeege will start . so shayad roz roz aana possible nahi hoga maybe weekly 2ice or 3ice only will be possible ........ lekin agar dusri tarah se dekha jaaye toh i could try to be regular for 3 months more actually .. i mean mumbai mein colleges kahan regular hote hai most of the time we hv our holidays!!!!! bas mom should get angry with me being online always & the bill should be in limitEdited by anjali_angel - 18 years ago

i m continuein

the next day prithvi tries to find angad he contacts all of angads close friends all the ppl he had met the last

he still cannot trace angad he is damm tensed bn does not no wat 2 do he want 2 somehow find angad n reunite a-k 2gether

he is on the internet n is tryin 2 find some info n he finds a topic where it is ritten that there is an ex singer he visits a school sangeet(how uall like the name of the school)n helps the teaches there 2 teach the students the school is in nenital

prithvi is sure that the ex singer is angad n uska shak aur bhi pakka hota hai when he comes 2 no that the school is in nenital

prithvi does not tell kripa abt this he takes her 2 nenital sayin that she needs 2 go on  holiday n he is also commin with her kripa agrees

they reach 2 nenital n kripa n prithvi go 2 kripas house her parents r happy 2 c her n prithvi . later at nite kripas mom comes 2 her room n asks kripa is anything goin on btw u n prithvi cause he came alone allthe way from mumbai alone with u

kripa makes it clear 2 her mom that they r just friends

next mornin prithvi gets up early n goes to the school without tellin any1 cause he wanted 2 make sure if it was angad only cause he did not want 2 hurt kripa anymore

he goes 2 the school n is abt 2 enter a class n he sees angad eterin the school he is very happy but hids cause angad may again run away

prithvi somehow manages 2 leave the school without angad noticin him he come back home n is very happy kripa asks him where he had gone prithvi wants to surprise her n lies 2 her that he had gone 4 a walk

after lunch kripa goes 2 her room removes angads photo from under the pillow n starts 2 cry prithvi wants 2 tell her abt angad n so he goes 2 her room he sees kripa cryin n asks her wat happend

kripa:prithvi kal angad ka birth day hai

prithvi:i understand kripa,aur kal main tumhe zindagi ka sabse bada surprise dunga

kripa :wat surprise?

prithvi :agar bata diya to vo surprise thodi naa rahega

kripa is very excited n cannot wait 4 tommorow.atnite 12 o clock kripa tells to herself happy b-day angad i love u n she remembers all the sweet memories of them 2gether n then goes 2 sleep

next mornin kripa is ready n prithvi takes her to the school

kripa:prithvi is school ko to maine dekha hai dont u remember i used 2 live here

prithvi i no but surprise iske andar hai come on in

prithvi takes her in he sees angad from far angad is walkin in the passage

prithvi:kripa vo raha tumhara surprise(n he points 2wards angad)

kripa at once recognises angad n runs 2 wards him angad is also shocked 2 see kripa kripa runs 2wards him n hugs him tightly even angad cannot control his emotions n hugs her tightly they both start cryin n 4 abt 10 mins they hug then

kripa:i m sorry maine tumhara yakeen nahi kiya

angad:its not ur fault kripa

kripa:angad i love u very much aur main tumhare bina nahi reh sakti plez mere sath vapas mumbai chalo

angad:par kripa

kripa:main kuch nahi sunna chati tum mujhse pyar karte ho ki nahi

angad:of cause i love u very very much

kripa:to bas tum aarahe ho

kripa takes angad home on the way prithvi explains everything 2 them kripa thanx prithvi 4 everything he had done

 

 

 

hey thats all plez tell how it was n if uall liked it i will continue

Touchwood on that!It's nice n comforting to have old friends around.Missing Kariya as well.

Hey , that's cool Prits.Go ahead...put in some more spice and romance nad don't let Angad agree to go to Mumbai so easily...he hates his family..and more A-K moments and heart-to-heart conversation between Prithvi and Angad as well! Way to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok chill i will follow ur advise n thanx 4 ur suggestion

hey i wated 4 a long time but no1 gave anymore comments i guess no 1 liked my story i m feelin like cryin now😭😭😭

Guys I hope u won't mind if I continue... If u do mind then tell me and I'll delete it!

Angad sees Prithvi standing there.

Angad: Prithvi, tum aur yahan?

Kripa: Angad, aaj ye sab sirf Prithvi ki wajahh se hua hai. Agar Prithvi nahi hota to phir tumhara aur mera milna to namumkin hota.

Prithvi says shyly: Nahi, Kripa. Tum dono ki kismat mein milna to tha hi. Main to bas tumhare raaste me ek saathi tha - jisne apna saath nibhaya.

Kripa: Aisa baatein na kaho Prithvi. Aaj, tum mere sabse ache dost ho, aur hamesha rahoge. Na kabhi koi humari dosti mein aya hai, aur nahi kabhi aayega.

Meanwhile, Angad is looking just a bit jealous!!

Kripa: Ab chalo, Prithvi, warna train chali jayegi. Chalo, Angad!

Angad: Main nahi aaoonga, Kripa.

Kripa and Prithvi are shocked.

Kripa: Nahi aoge? Tum nahi aoge? Angad, maine kitna intezaar kiya hai is pal ka, is lamhe ka, kya tum jante ho? Jab tumhe maine choda tha to isliye kyunki mujhe Mumbai ki sardi apne ghar, Nainital, ki yaad dila rahi thi. Mujhe darr lagta tha in press walon se, is duniya ki chubti nazron se ... Aur tab jab maine apna pura career luta diya, to phir Prithvi aaya. Usne mujhe himat di, isliye main Mumbai vapis aayi aur apna career phirse shuru kiya. Aaj, itne dhoondne ke baad, tum aakhir mujhe mile ho Angad, aur tum ab nahi aoge? Kyun, Angad, kyun?

Kripa starts to cry. Angad shouts suddenly.

Angad: Haan, nahi aonga main tumhare saath! Nafrat ho gayi hai mujhe apne khud ke parivaar se, apne bhai se, apni behen se, apne parents se. Main to itni saalo se jaanta tha ke meri family mein sabko mujhse nahi, balke mere career se, mere paison se pyar tha. Isiliye maine hamesha apne feelings, apne emotions ko chupa ke rakha. Ek Dadi meri mujhe samajhti thi, jaanti thi ki main perfect nahin - lekin phirbhi mujhse pyaar karti thi.

Phir tum meri zindagi me aayi, Kripa. Tumne un saari deewaron ko todh diya, jinke peeche mere saare emotions, mera saara pyaar pada tha, bas dene kiliye. Maine woh pyaar tumhe diya, Kripa. Jab tum hi mere saath nahi rahi, to main toot sa gaya. Meri dadi - meri dadi ab pata nahi kahan hai. Ek din woh thi, aur agli subha gayab. Ab tum hi batao, Kripa, main kya karta?

Isiliye main idhar aagaya. Kahin duur duniya ki nazron se. Jahan kisiko mujhse koi umeede nahi thi. Jahan mujhe har pal ye baat nahi kahi jaati, ke agar meri agli album kamyab nahi hui, to phir main barbad ho jaoonga. Lekin Kripa, tum kya samjhogi. Tumne nahi jaana hai ki mein bhi apni us zindagi se kitna tang aa gaya hoon.

Kripa looks at him, stunned. Prithvi walks forward.

Prithvi: Lekin Angad, zindagi jeene ka faida hi kya agar tum aise apni manzil ko dekhte hi use door bhag jaaoge? Jaise ki khargosh aur kachua ki kahaani mein, kachua jeeta kyunki usne manzil dekhe, aur us raaste pe chalne laga - nahi ruka, aur nahi manzil se duur bhaga. Angad, tum apne aap se jhoot bol sakte ho ke tumhari asli zindagi yahan hai. Lekin main janta hoon ke tumhari asli zindagi vahan hai - aur tum bhi jaante ho. Ab tum hi decision lo, Angad. Main aur Kripa tumhe force nahin kar sakte.

Kripa and Prithvi both look at Angad. Angad looks down, and then looks up, smiling.

Angad: To phir chalo, vahan jahan meri zindagi hai.

He brings a couple of suitcases and says: Ab pata chal raha hai ki maine kabhi unpack kyun nahi kiya - main janta nahi tha, lekin mera dil janta tha ke main is jaga ko apna ghar nahi manta tha!

And Angad, Kripa and Prithvi all go to the airport. (Of course - what did you expect - a train scene??) They buy tickets for Mumbai. They all sit in the airport coffee shop since their flight is not for another two hours. They all chat about the old times. Angad tells them that he has some new songs that he has written. Prithvi says that he is going to go and choose a snack from the cafeteria. He goes, and Angad and Kripa spend the time looking into each others' eyes. Angad reaches out to Kripa and - hands her a tissue! Kripa realises the joke and then she gives her hand to Angad and while he is looking at it, asks why he isn't handing her the sugar! Then they both laugh and then Prithvi comes back and they go to their flight.

All the passengers in the plane unfasten their seatbelts as the plane is now in the air. Kripa gets up to get some water and then as the plane turns, she falls and Angad grabs her. He looks at her as if he is saying that now he will never let go of her...

Hope you liked it...

angadkripafan, your part of the story was GR8!!👏

yeah jink u are totally suspectacular plz do continue writing 😛 Edited by lucky-moon - 18 years ago