FAN FIC:Kripa- unhappy superstar? - Page 5

Nits... continue please!!!

 

- Abhita

Ok..here's a continuation................

Angad and Kripa go inside their room as Naina is fuming downstairs and the family is trying to calm her.

Kripa is standing at the window deep in thought as Angad comes out of the washroom ruffling his wet hair.He gets a mischievious glint in his eyes...slowly goes behind her and blows into her ear making her hair fly.

KRIPA(surprised):"Angad! Tum apni harkaton se kabhi baaz mat aana.Aaj bhi tum bilkul vaise hi ho jaise hamesha se the...Angad-the naughty rockstar!"

Angad laughs, turns her around and slides his arms around her slender waist.....

ANGAD:"Accha hai na.Angad aaj bhi wahi Angad hai jisse tum itna pyaar karti thi..ab to tum bhi ek star ho..apne baare mein kya khayal hai tumhara?Aur kya kaha tumne abhi?Naughty rockstar?Lekin ab tak to maine kucch kiya hi nahiin!"

Kripa feels shy and with mock-anger pushes him away.Both of them laugh and fall back on the bed but suddenly Kripa's expression gets serious.

ANGAD(notices this):"Kripa...kya hua?Tumse itni baar kaha hai ki aise pareshaan mat hua karo...meri jaan nikal jaati hai.Kya baat hai?"

Kripa sits up and looks at Angad...

KRIPA:"Soch rahi hoon ki humne yahan aakar koi galti to nahiin ki?Kahiin phir se koi tumhe mujhse alag to nahiin kar dega?Tumne gharwaalon ka reaction nahiin dekha?"

ANGAD(taking Kripa's face in his hands):"Ye mera ghar hai..hum yaheen rahenge..jise takleef ho woh ghar chhodkar ja sakta hai and I don't give a damn.Humein alag karna to door ki baat hai...hamaare rishte ki taraf nazar uthaakar koi dekhe to sahi..uske saath Angad Khanna kya karega, iska use andaaza bhi nahiin hai."

Kripa hugs him while Karthik fumes outside the door.

KARTHIK:"Ye to waqt hi bataayega, Angad."

WHAT NEXT?

 

Awesome nits...

you write beautifully... and give graphical descriptions too.. keep up the good work!

- Abhita

Amazing Nitica!!!

Now u may continue!

Continued...........................

Naina is fuming in her room when Dilip enters looking happy since for the first time somebody has displayed the guts to oppose her.He is humming a tune "maar diya jaaye ki chhod diya jaaye".....

NAINA(glares at him):" Bahot gaane soojh rahein hain tumhe? Dikhta nahiin tumhaare laadle Angad ne kya gul khilaaya hai? Ek to ghar chhod kar....hamaara lakhon ka nuksaan kiya...aur waapis aaya bhi to us..us..us Kripa ke saath so-called shaadi karke."

DILIP(casually working on his laptop):"To kya karoon? Tumhaari tarah moonh fula kar baith jaaoon..ya behosh hone ka naatak karoon?After all, Angad tumhara hi beta hai....hai na? Itna shukr manaao ki wo waapis aa gaya hai.So what if he has married Kripa? Yeh to hona hi tha...Mishty aur Karthik ke saath milkar jo tumne dono ki life ke saath kiya, kya socha tha? Angad ke liye Kripa sab kucch hai and there's nothing u can do about it....aur ab to tumhari bahu ek superstar hai..tumhara to faayeda hi hoga."

NAINA(furious):"Faayeda?Faayeda ka main kya karoongi? Kripa aur Angad ki shaadi unke so-called pyaar ki jeet hai aur meri haar! Aur Naina Khanna kisi se haar nahiin sakti...apne khud ke bete se bhi nahiin."

DILIP(angry):"Bas..yahi..ye jo tumhaara ahankaar hai na..yahi tumhe ek accha insaan banne nahiin deta.Dekho apne aapko! Na ek acchi biwi ban saki..na ek acchi ma..yahaan tak ki tumhaara Angad bhi tumhaare khilaaf khada ho gaya hai! I beg of you, ab bas karo....varna hum sab kucch kho denge...sab kucch."

Disgusted, he walks out leaving Naina seething in rage.

AND???

bahut buri baath hain nits... curiosity level rise kar ke chod dete ho aap!

;-D

- Abhita

wow!👏👏👏 plz continue nitica!

Continued.................

The news is released in media that Angad Khanna-the rockstar is back after having married Kripa-the current pop sensation.Media ppl crowd the Khanna mansion and Karthik and Dilip are unable to handle the swarming calls from newspapers, TV channels and music companies.....

KARTHIK:"Dad.....public or media ko control karna mushkil hota ja raha hai.Angad ki waapsi aur shaadi ki khabar ne sab ko hila kar rakh diya hai....Angad aur Kripa ki ek jhalak ke liye log paagal ho rahein hain aur calls attend karte-karte main paagal ho raha hoon."

DILIP:"Hmmmm...ye to hona hi tha.After all, Angad aaj bhi ek bada star hai aur ab to Kripa bhi bahot popular ho chuki hai..in dono ki shaadi ne waakai mein media mein ek toofaan khada kar diya hai...ek kam karo.Manan ko phone karo..kaho ek press-conference organize kare aur saath mein ek lavish party bhi.Ghar mein jo bhi ho raha ho...duniya ke saame humein yahi dikhaana hai ki Khanna family is shaadi se bahot khush hai...don't forget Karthik...Angad aur Kripa ek celebrity couple hain.Is party se humein bahot faayeda hoga aur Angad ka bhi gussa utar jaayega."

Karthik doesn't seem too happy but neverthless makes the arrangements and calls Manan.Naina is still sulking in a corner of the house and her devilish mind is working rapidly.

Dilip calls Angad downstairs......

ANGAD(bored):"What is it, dad? Agar aap bhi mom ki tarah mujhe lecture maarna chaahte hain....don't bother..mujhe aur bhi bahot saare kaam hain......aur Kripa ke khilaaf main kucch nahiin sunoonga...kucch bhi nahiin.Pehle hi aap log kaafi tamaasha kar chuke hain."

Dilip smiles and places his hands on Angad's shoulders..........

DILIP(smiles):"Relax son.Agar tum Kripa ko itna chaahte ho..uske saath khush ho....to mujhe koi aitraaz nahiin hai.Ye shaadi bahot pehle ho gayi hoti...lekin tumhaari ma ke aage bolne ki kabhi kisi ki himmat nahiin hui...khair..maine tumhe sirf isliye bulaya hai ki main tumhe bata doon ki aaj raat ko Maurya Sheraton mein tumhaari aur Kripa ki shaadi ki celebration hai aur ek press conference bhi...tum dono public figures ho...apne fans ki taraf bhi tumhari kucch zimmedaari hai.."

Angad is sick n tired of his popstar life but understands his dad's point and the sincerity and pleading eyes of his dad don't let him say no.

ANGAD:"Alright, dad.Kripa aur main pahonch jaayenge."

DILIP(relieved):"Theek 8 baje."

 

In the evening, Angad and Kripa are preparing to get reday for the bash.Angad is all set looking great in a Black suit(now, he is minus his earrings, rings n chains nad sports a stubble).....but Kripa is still confused and is moving around in pink bath-gown and Angad is quietly watching her prance around the room with a lovely expression on his face.

ANGAD:"Kripa...agar tumhaara yehi haal raha na....to aaj tumhaare fans tumhe is gown mein hi dekhenge."

KRIPA(throws a cushion at him):"Shut up, Angad! Ek to meri samajh mein nahiin aa raha ki kya pehnoon aur ek tum ho...idiots ki tarah mujh par jokes crack kar rahe ho! Help me choose na!"

Angad gets up, goes near her and putting his arms around her neck pulls her close and says..........

ANGAD:"Well...mujhe to koi farak nahiin padta..tum chaahe kucch pehno ya nahiin."

Kripa laughs and breaks away from him....

KRIPA:"Get lost.... shameless rockstar! Chalo, ek kam karte hain, tum jo nikal kar doge main wahi pehen loongi.I promise."

Angad leans against her almirah, crooses his arms against his chest and tilting his head to a side says.............

ANGAD:"Soch lo, sweetheart.Angad Khanna ki choose ki hui dress pehenne ki himmat hogi tumme?Ab naturally, main tumhe koi sari ya churidaar to doonga nahiin pehnne ke liye..so, are you sure?"

Kripa goes near him and whispers into his ear.....

KRIPA(naughty thing!):"Try me!"

Angad looks at her sideways...turns to her wardrobe and after looking into it for 5 minutes...he pulls out a wine - red figure-hugging strappy dress and puts it into her face.

ANGAD(triumphant):"Kapde khareed khareed kar rakhne ke liye nahiin hote.....if you buy something, have the guts to wear it as well.Ab jaao aur ise pehenkar jaldi aao..bhartiya rockstar!"

Kripa doesn't want to wear it but she can't go back on her words and give Angad a chance to make fun of her.She looks at Angad's cute face and making a face at him, snatches the dress from him and goes to wear it.

Kripa looks beautiful in the dress and as a mesmerized Angad looks on, she walks upto him and beahves very airily....

KRIPA(flipping her hair):" Chalein, Mr.Angad Khanna.Kripa Khanna har jagah waqt par hi pahonchti hai."

Angad notices her mischief and looking dreamily into her eyes, he pushes a stray strand of hair behind her ear.....

ANGAD:"Haan...chalo.Lekin jaane se pehle main tumse kucch kehna chaahta hoon."

Kripa goes all lovey-dovey....

KRIPA(lost in his eyes):"To kaho na."

ANGAD(brattish u-turn):"Tum...is dress mein...bahot motti lag rahi ho!"

Kripa runs to hit him and they run behind each other till they reach the car.Laughing, they hug each other and drive away..................

awwwwwww.... so romantic...

ab aage kuch brawls bhi rakho jaan... press conference main...

- Abhita

Brawls abhi to nahiin ho sakte.Naina aunty ke naatk dekhna ab.She has something big planned up her sleeve!