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Leena

@LeenaRocks

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ms Chaitalee Ghosalkar!!!

Just what exactly do you think you are doing in the field of Pharma??

Gal! Writing is your forte ... if you have not realized it yet! so you must do a lot of it!! :)

This was one beautiful OS!! and coming from you esp... the maker of IMTBE and L3... a shot from a period ...is whats impressing!!

Clearly it was all from Khushi's per say! portrayed beautifully!

Arhi and their Love just seemed defined anew!!

Yet another master stroke from you Chaitu!! :) Loved it darling!

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yoga123

@yoga123

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing OS...the backdrop added a flavor...the ending was beautiful...loved Payal and Shyam...Khushi has decided to leave everything she has and spend the rest of her life with him...true love...Congratulations for completing one year...

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

congrats fr completing a year (i know i m late but i came across it now only )
about os...it reminds me of old bollywood movies and i loved them..
thank u fr writting such a wonderful os..

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

What a wonderful piece of writing..

Your story, the backdrop, the interpretation of the song 'Ang laga de' was an excellent mashup.

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Sidda

@Sidda8

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Happy Anniversary. This is one of your masterpieces. It's absolutely brilliant. I loved the fierce and brave Khushi who sacrificed her life so that she can be with her love. I loved how Arnav promised always to be loyal to her and keep her close to his heart.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful... Very beautifully written,took me to an another world...

Loved it

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

whoa... beautifully written OS...

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice...
I loved it...
Good job dear... 👏

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Senior Member

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Posted: 10 years ago

COPY CAT COPY CAT

Yes I won't stop calling you that

You know it boosts my EGO to know that you are inspired by my style of writing.😉

Well to start with the OS, you definitely transferred me to the era of raje-rajwade with the beautiful description of magnificent palaces, dresses and suitable language of the characters.

The two moments impressed me thoroughly ...1st is when Arnav ties payal around Khushi's ankle. That reminded me the same scene from show.

And second when Khushi splashed water of her damp hairs on his face. That was a marvelous example of artistic imagination

But somehow I could not imagine Sanaya in the Khushi's character. Dipika has imbibed her face in my mind for that song permanently. Chap GAya Hai 😃

And the most important thing to tell you

COPY CAT COPY CAT 😃

P.S: waiting for your unres now

Edited by praj.shrish - 10 years ago

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IPK007

@IPK007

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

I love historical dramas...and this is the best I've come across on IF.

Brilliant OS:)Edited by IPK007 - 10 years ago

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