Tere Karan Arjun aayege :P
Tere Karan Arjun aa gaye
C, I read this sometime back and only today I got the chance to give a proper coherent comment (Mujhe sona hai!
I love history, especially so when it is well researched and the background is set perfectly and sprinkle ArHi magic on it and bam! It becomes a masterpiece!
This whole OS had an aura of grandeur and an old world feeling (I don't know how to express it in words
) But the whole feel of this OS was such that when I started reading it, I was in the 17th Century and when I finished I was still there. It too me several moments to come out of that world only to grumble why was I pulled out so suddenly. Suddenly because yeh dil maange more
See, anyone would get mesmerized if he would remove his tunic like that and then get wet that would make anyone wet
I liked the fact that despite of being a princess, she did approach him, to be closer to him, to talk to him. I also liked the reality aspect you added to it - she didn't know who he was because that is how it is in a huge palace with too many people around
And what a way to win over the heart of a princess - prowess on the 'battlefield' Kissi ka bhi dil aa jaaye aise mundey par
and she being all bold was just too good! But then he knows that they belong to two different worlds when he lowered his gaze and stepped back addressing her with her true title. How true!
And his comment that she should be more careful had an underlying meaning to it because he knows the repercussions of such a scenario in which the elite falls for a simple man!
And then...sigh...you used...sigh...the diwali scene...sigh...sigh...some more sigh... Hayye. And finally in that moment he too gave in. And I applaud you for keeping Arnav in character. He is a warrior, he is always aware even though he may be otherwise occupied
when he was alerted of someone's presence
Similarly, Khushi venturing out alone looking for Arnav is in perfect sync with her bold character which was seen throughout the story - be it her open affection for him or going down the dungeons on the eve of her wedding!
And finally one needs good friends and confidants in the palace and this time it came in the form of the couple Shyam and Payal - they may or may not face the consequences in aiding the escape of an 'offender' and the soon to be married princess but they showed where their loyalties lied by helping our dear couple.
Aise OSes likha kar Edited by lazyleaves - 8 years ago