that was beautiful ! You write so so so good ! 👏 ( arey hmare cc p ajao na yar 😳 😆 )
It was amazing you know ... one of the best OS es i have read on arshi ..
frankly i avoid the stories that don t have an ipk-ish arshi in it as i fail to picture the scenes in my mind .. but I really loved this one .. 😳 it was so beutiful and i could actually see a warior arnav and a kumari khushi :) you really write awesome ! ⭐️
and now to the story it was so different and new for me .. warrior weds rajkumari sounds so exciting ! ⭐️ and must say this khushi was brave han .. also i liked how you symbolized the situations of story with weather conditions ( ee i duck at explaining ..i kno :P ) i mean i liked it when the cold breeze & arnav s word simultaneously shivered khushi .. when the lantern and her heart flickered .. when there was half darkness and half light .. loved it all ! so brilliant han 😳
one more thing i really liked that scene where khushi gave chain award to arnav ! 😃 best hai ..
and ya .. the name kumari .. i never liked it in show .. but liked it here 😳
shayam and payal .. thank you to both :* .. when i was reading the OS i was thinking k i ll write in comment that khushi was very rude to payal and should nt have said that .. it was bothering alot yu kno .. :P
and han ... wo line .. ''But she had to build new bridges and burning old ones was an eventuality '' was epic ! 👏 that was also symbolic na 😳 .. see i m so smart 😆
what else .. ermm .. banners both of them were superb !
P.S dee_j thank yu very very much for suggesting me this OS ⭐️ muah
P.P.S sorry for a late unres 😳
P.P.P.S congratulations for the award ! 👏 well deserved ..and ya congo for completing an year 😃
Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 9 years ago
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