KR TS is dard-e- dil ki sifarish(last part updated pg 6 nd 7) - Page 7

hehehe..mera choto comment chalega na..??😆😆

Originally posted by: Dewdrops.ShaKun

<font color="#0066ff">unres.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">First of all.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">Muje nahi pata tha</font>

<font color="#0066ff">ur a writer too...</font>

<font color="#0066ff">aur wo bhi itne mast waale.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">part 1 main Uh explained the POV's so well.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">their Love for and pain from eachother</font>

<font color="#0066ff">and 2nd part main to dhammal kar diya</font>

<font color="#0066ff">Kria in blindfold, dancing... hayeee</font>

<font color="#0066ff">and unka cute scene...</font>

<font color="#0066ff">Poor Kria bechari ko jhatka laga</font>

<font color="#0066ff">knowing abt his T and doosra shock</font>

<font color="#0066ff">knowing that she wasnt imaging.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">He really was there...</font>

<font color="#0066ff">their confession was sweet..</font>

<font color="#0066ff">overall i loved this TS..</font>

thanx 4 commenting sweety..nd m nt a writer...m lazy in preparing notes so ye wali writing to dur ki bat h...its a moodswing nd wese b KR ne hmse kya kya nai krwaya...anyways thanku so much

Abhi nai chalega tera chota cmnt soch le...

Amazing story!! You captured the passion,love ,anger,frustration and all the emotions really well !! And everyone loves a Happy Ending!! So good job !!Keep writing such posts !!😊

Sorry for the late comment and likes i read both chapters just now.

loved it alot!
I loved how each emotion was portrayed!
Rey and kriya in a room! Eeepss!! ^_^
I liked the concept off kriya being blindfolded instead off rey
And and the kiss at the endd Eeeps!! 😛

Well done 👏

Originally posted by: So_Naley

Amazing story!! You captured the passion,love ,anger,frustration and all the emotions really well !! And everyone loves a Happy Ending!! So good job !!Keep writing such posts !!😊

thanku so much...me 2 prefer happy ending

Originally posted by: shelly_Arsha

Sorry for the late comment and likes i read both chapters just now.

loved it alot!
I loved how each emotion was portrayed!
Rey and kriya in a room! Eeepss!! ^_^
I liked the concept off kriya being blindfolded instead off rey
And and the kiss at the endd Eeeps!! 😛

Well done 👏

its gud dat u liked it...thanks 4 d cmnt dear

Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

RES

unres

anku🤗

kya kahu mein its an awesome update

mujhe nahi pata hai ki tu itna acha likhthi hai

kaash d3 mein bhi aisa ho unlike they are showing now

kria dancing blindfolded on dil se and rey kiss kiya kria ko waah super awesome

i enjoyed their convo

their convo is so emotional

well written u explained their emotions so well

finally rey kria ko manna liya aur usse roak diya

and they kissed hayee

rey kitna chalu hai he he he

ha pls aisa os likhthi raho aur mujhe pm

karo sach mein u r very good writer

aur kya kaho the update is amazing

loved it

thanku dii...thanku sooo much..love u

sry for commenting this late