Akdha SS:Pyaar ki yeh daastan Chap 3 updated on Pg 20 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

It was Awesom, Thank god. Jodha doesn't Ghrina Jalal here. And the way he kept on blabbering about Abdul to Jodha was very Cute specially Jalal's "Ohh tere ki!!"

 
I hope Jalal and Jodha talk and have some cute moments
 
Thanks for PM and continue it Super soon

i also like ohh teri vry muchπŸ˜†πŸ˜†will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
...wowww!!! such a lovely update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
...a very new angle for a new story...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
amazing hai yaar...loved it soo soo much...❀️

...and pairing Moti n Abdul together...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
...waiting for next part...Jodha and Jallu alone in a khema...in candle light atmosphere...
...romance ka keeda to jag gaya mera...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
...plz do pm me when u update...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

hmm...I'll try dearπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£

try nAhi...Update plzzπŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

sofia why don't yopu start writing a story..?then I can also spam the post with "Update pls"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†


Bass yehi Baat..mujhe likhne se rOkk rahi haiπŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: rose11691

...wowww!!! such a lovely update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

...a very new angle for a new story...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
amazing hai yaar...loved it soo soo much...❀️

...and pairing Moti n Abdul together...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
...waiting for next part...Jodha and Jallu alone in a khema...in candle light atmosphere...
...romance ka keeda to jag gaya mera...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
...plz do pm me when u update...!!

aww..thanks alot sweetie for the lovely comments...will continue soonπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Sofia13


Bass yehi Baat..mujhe likhne se rOkk rahi haiπŸ˜†

arey yaar sofia likho naπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†then hum bhi keh sakthe hai "UPDATE PLS"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks alot dear😳
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Thank you all for the support..here' s chapter twoπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Chapter 2

Jalal looks at Jodha and says.
"Haan toh kahiye..aapko kya jaan na hai humare bare mein?.Jodha stares at him.
"Humein kuch nahi jaan na hai,un donon ko akele rehne ka mauka mile isliye humne aisa kaha"
"Nahi nahi...chahath toh huyi hogi aapko humse...nahi?Jalal smirks and asks.
"Chaahath?...humein??aur woh bhi aapko dekhke?Dimaag kharaab nahi hai humari"
"Iss jahan ki saari ladkiyan hum pe fida hai.."He exclaimed
"Sivaayi hum...".She added
"Toh aapko bhi usme shaamil kar hee loonga.."He was indeed a flirty prince..
They both sits there.Jodha was smiling, Jalal asks
"Aap muskura kyun rahi ho?
"Kuch nahi..prem mein padna kitni achhi baat haina?Zindagi bhar keliye kisika saath milna, usse milne keliye din raat tadapna, useeke khyaalon mein khoke rehna yeh sab karne main kitni maza hoga..."
"Humein nahi lagtha...yeh sabkuch bakwaas hotha hai..Mohabbath sirf ek insaan ki zindagi barbaad kartha hai aur kuch nahi..".Jalal tells
"yeh sathya nahi hai..pyaar karna bahut achhi baat hai..aap yeh nahi samjhenge ".Jodha replied
"Aap ne teek kaha rajkumari..humare paas dil hi nahi hai toh mohabbath kaise karenge?Mohabbath dard ke alaawa aur kuch nahi detha"
Jodha looks at his face.She holds his hands and she places his hands on his chest and asks
"Kuch sunayee detha hai aapko?
"Haan... humari dhadkanein...Jalal replies.Jodha smiles and says
"Dhadkan sirf wahan hothe hai jahan hruday hotha hai,Hruday sirf wahan hothi hai jahan dhadkanein hothi hai".She intensely looks at him,Jalal was already lost in her eyes and talks.She continues.
"Yeh baat aap ab nahi samjhoge,jab aapko bhi prem hojayega na tab aapko samajh aayega...aap dekhna ek baar mohabbath mein pad jaaye uske baad usse chutkaara nahi miltha,din raat aap bass itna hi sochoge ki kab aapki mohabbath aapke paas honge ,useeke khwabon aur khyaalon mein khokke rahenge,usse door jaane ka khyaal bhi aapko pareshaan karega,jab woh khush hai toh aisa lagega ki poora sansaar khush hai aur jab woh dukhi hojaye toh yeh lagega ki yeh duniya hi kharaab hai...aur toh aur unki aur aapki dhadkanein ek hojayenge,uske bina toh jaise aapke saanse hi ruk jaayenge...uske paas hone se dhadkanein badd jaayegi...
Jodha kept lecturing about love.He was not paying attention to her talks instead he was paying attention to her.He was in a wonderworld.He smiled at her unknowingly and then all of a sudden his smile disappeared ,he no longer heard her talks,everything became silent,he could only  hear the sound of his heartbeat which had increased rapidly.Jodha then notices that he's in a dream world she stops her lecture.She shakes him.he comes back to mind
"Aap kahan khoye ho?hum yahan baat karthe ja rahe hai karthe ja rahe hai aur aap hai ki sunn hi nahi rahe ho.."Jodha was a little angry with him.jalal smiles
"Areyy nahi nahi rajkumari hum toh bass aap hi ko dekh rahe the...waise aapki baatein sunke toh yahi lagtha hai ki aapko iss mwaamle mein bahut anubhav hai..."
"Nahi nahi hum toh bass yunhi keh rahe the"
"Achha ab tak agar aapko aisa ek anubhav nahi hua toh hum koshish karein?.Jalal smiles 
"Koi avashyakatha nahi hai...
"Jodha...tum ab tak jagi ho?.A sound comes suddenly.Jodha becomes worried
"Hey bhagvaan maasa?...And she looks at Jalal helplessley.
"Achha aapki maasa aa rahi hai?chalo unse bhi mulaaqaath karthe hai".He gets up frm the bed and Jodha pulls him back.
"Paagal hogaye ho aap?Unhone aapko dekhliya toh kya kahenge hum?unhone pooch liya ki aap kon hai aur kaise aaya hai aur humare saath humari kaksh mein kya kar raha hai toh kya uthhar denge unhe?"
"Aap sahi keh rahi..ho.. kya karein?"
They were confused.They didn't knew what to do.Mainavati opens the door of Jodha's chamber.She sees Jodha alone.Mainavati walks inside.
"Jodha...kisse baat kar rahi thi tum?
"Hum... kiseese bhi toh nahi..aapko laga hoga.."
'Hmm...achha... sojao ha... And mainavati turns back suddenly she stops and again looks at the bed.She saw someone else sleeping near Jodha and the person was fully covered with blanket.
"Yeh kaun hai?".Mainavati asked.Jodha didn't knew what to say..
"Woh...Mm,,,,Maasa woh...yeh..yeh yeh Mothi hai"
"Mothi?..woh aisi kyun so rahi hai?
"Darassal usne koi bura sapna dekha tha toh darr gayi thi na...aur usse thand bhi lag rahi thi toh humne kaha ki humare saath sojaana"
"Achha...toh ek kaam kar lena Jodha..tum usse kaske pakad ke sona..usse achha bhi lagega aur thoda garam bhi mahsoos hoga"
Jodha was shocked to hear this.It was Jalal who was besides her.Meanwhile Jalal who was under the blanket listening to conversation smiled hearing this.He thought
"Ab kya karegi Rajkumari..humein pakdegi ya nahi?"
Jodha gulped down
"Kya hum inhe kaise chhoo sakthe hai?"
"Kyun?usmein kya aappathi hai?woh Mothi hi toh haina..koi mard thodi na hai..hum yeh isliye keh rahe hai taaki Mothi ko achha lage...agar tum nahi kar sakthi toh teek hai..aaj hum bhi yaha sojayengi Mothi ke saath..."
"Nahi...Jodha screamed.
'Chilla kyun rahi ho Jodha?"
"Humara matlab hum..." she closes her eyes and she hugs him tightly.
"Humne pakad liya na ab aap jaayiye...shubh raathri..."
Mainavati smiled.
"Hmm...aise karni chahiye ek asli mithr ko..hum chalthe hai"
Mainavati leaves

That's it..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†hope you guys liked itπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰.Pls post your reviews😊😊silent readers atleast hit the like pls made with much effort.Thank you all for reading😳









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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
awesome dear...jodha hugged jalal...aww ...wat nxt...yaar its so short...i want to see his and her reactn after d hug...,,..,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Naughty Jallu...Bechari Jodha...πŸ˜† gr8...