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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
you hav already updated another part n i m wishing for another 
tis awesum was ur update 
luved the portion of swayam n naina's bonding 
the unexpected dance battle was actually a surprise for me 
even though it was expected ki swayam hi jiteyga 
i luved the transition you showed in swayam 
n lookin forward how sharon is gonna confront swayam 
n ask him to be her partner 
do update soon πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
why is she getting affected?
bcoz love happens at  first sight.

nice and exciting---mystery unfolding was bariya.

way to go pratik.

love---medha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
amazing update.beautifully written specially when you describes swayam,his thoughts,his insecurities.i really loved this swayam who want to hide real swayam from the outer world.thanx for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
I can't wait for the chemistry to take place πŸ˜‰
Thanks for the pm
Awesome update as always
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
awsm...  waiting fr d next update... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
It was really nyc...eagerly waiting 4 nxt part n not 2 4get,thnx 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awesom update...πŸ‘πŸ‘
just loved it..
i am in love with this swayam..❀️
super excited for the next chapter..
pls update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
awesomeee startπŸ‘
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Amazing start.thanks for the pm bhai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
bhai the second pat was super dooperly awesom !!🀣
i knw it does nt make sense!
but u write so well !!
i mean its too cool ..
one day i would love to learn hw to write 
frm u kash di deep di n tanishk...πŸ˜ƒ
u all r jst gr8

really want to knw whts next
do continue soon