TH#11 ArHi SS:Love Interrupted Th#12 pg. 126 (11/12/13)

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Excellent update

Superb zee!!!

In this whole update, payal chaa hayi!! Thoka talli payal ke liye

WARNING: AGAIN VERY LONG :P
Part-A

This flashback was cute too. Loved the teasing ratna and blushing garima! They were so damn cute bas!

Aww, lol khushi heard it, and her innocent mind couldn't understand what they were talking about :P but it surely will be helpful for khushi!

Waise I just had a thought! In both flashback, last one and this too!! You very well showed that children always, whatever the situation is, they need their parents and their help. And only their taught can be helpful! Whether it is on serious and understanding thing or complete opposite, like this! Hope you get what I am trying to day :D

Shyam is very thoughtful (le lolwa tere shyamu ki taarid kardi maine :P), he was right they shouldn't interfere in there matter, like this! It could create more problems! But Anjali toh Anjali hai! But glad she didn't do anything *sigh*, lol mami and mama is awesome!!

Raizada family is great. Aww, I just their thoughtfulness! They don't want to pressurize khushi even in household chores :D, they are the best family eva!

Arrgh, they are so stuborn!! Khushi why crying, go and pacify arnav! Nahi, really khushi, I am not angry at her, but she knows she hurt him and was partially crying for It too!! Btu still she is thinking that arnav again will manofy her! She needs to do something on her own !!

Awww, poor lavanya's brownie turned into mousse :P

Loved manorama and payal convo! Manorama is so damn good here, I just want to hug her tight, loved her concern for khushi and arnav! Who says that no one can treat other kids as their own, manorama did that!

I knew it! Payal in khushi's wedding invitation card, wrote arnav's name instead of that abhi! She is awesome, bas!

Lol.. loved payal and akash this convo too! :P enjoyed reading how bewildered akash is knowing payal knows everything :P but what does he meant, that payal is experienced in this matter! Very bad, akash I don't expect this from you! But say sorry and patch up!

Loved the way you used arnav's line by payal!! About backwards rituals! Amazing!

Again khushi is waiting for bouquet of flowers, thinking arnav will say sorry! Yeh kya hai khushi!

Really, as I said, both are so damn stubborn!! Samajh mein hi nahi aata inhe

Loved the way you showed arnav restlessness!! How he wanted to pacify khushi but the "lust" kept on ringing in his ear!

He thought, she thinks his hid feelings for her is cheap and is not understanding him! But arnavji aap bhi kassht kar sakte hain na, khushi ko aur uski feelings ko samajhne ke liye!

But I loved the fact that, he tried to make move, but damn idiot stopped himself!

And now what is this! Khushi is here waiting for him, and wants to move away, I know it is because she affects him, but khushi will take in different way na, though she knows, what he feels for you, but you know her na!

Glad nani ji make him eat his food! Aww, khushi wants to make him eat, she could! Just do it khushi, I and I am sure, in future, she will do it everything, feeding him his food, that is!

Part-B

Aarrgh no! I jst don't want to see them like it, I can't bear it!! Why they are so stubborn! And is not talking to make thing right, instead, making it complicate!! Both wants each other, badly, couldn't bear this mode! But still isn't ready to patch up! Aisa kyun!

Thank god, morning was slight better! They got a chance but shoot, again arnav remembers her words! And her accusations! And backed off!

They both are yearning for each other, but just don't want to say this other! Idiots' kahi ke... at least try yaar! Try to talk!!

Arre waah, shyamu again :P.. aww, he Is so becoming dad, well anybody be, but he becoming father after 14 years!! That increase his happiness, atleast wait was fruitful!

Omg, lavanya too wrote a letter for NK!! Their 970's love story is full on move :P

I ROFL'd when she said her school didn't taught her post the letter! Whose school did baby, gosh, she is so innocent and cute!

Oh my god!! Her letter!! ROFL.. will NK be able to understand it?? LOL, one it's English, that too funky and she used short form :P :P, bechara NK samajh payega kya? :D

Glad Anjali asked payal to do it, and didn't do anything by her own!! I don't believe her ke she will make everything right!! :P as she become so excited as start being a cupid :P

Ye, payal kya cheez hai yaar! Amazing person she is! And her straight forward questions.. She rock truly: D

Lol... the way she asked.. is she still a virgin? And she very well, makes her see sense! And same goes to arnav too!! She in friendly way, make them see, what is right and what is wrong!

I really loved, how she manages to soften arnav a bit!! And then tried to make him understand!

One thing I like the most, is that, how much khushi and arnav rely and trust on arnav, that they shared their worry with her! They didn't do this with any other member!! I and I really liked that!!

Part-C

Oye hoye, payal bhav kha rahi hai!! So cute :P

Atleast, one of the brother is sensible enough to say sorry' :P I said is coz, arnav don't say if often, especially sometimes when he needed to (it's not about their present fight :P)

Fas gaya bechara akash!! Really, never promise anything before heating hear out the entire convo: D

Oh my geee!!! Lingerie shopping!! Oh I can just imagine akash's red face, standing in the shop with payal!! Especially she was asking for chose!!

And hayee... akash bola!! *dead*, sacchi!! Yeh chamatkaar kaise ho gaya :P chalo, it's good he start speaking, I mean his mind and heart is not control of him!! He is making good recovery :P

Lol lol.. payal made her chose for khushi's lingerie, omg :P :P (hope khushi wont got to know it, warna both akash and khushi will have blushing competition :P )

Very good, arnav decided to listen to payal advice and talk to khushi! Very good choice arnav :D oh and wow!! He again got bouquet for her.. cho chweet

Lol lol.. khushi was all set to seduce him, she just need to wear, sari bas!! ;)

Oh gee!! Khushi wore that saree to seduce him that too, in front of whole raizada's!! :o

Lol lol lol.. just love, how you described.. families nonchalant behavior!!! And damn, payal and akash behind one newspaper!! Ee ka karat ye dono niewzz paperwa ke peeche, hein?? tells tells zee?? :P

Hehehe.. loved arnav's monologue :P :P smart girl indeed arnav! ;)

Aww... khushi so cutely apologized for her behavior and that too infront of everyonw, not alone. Wasie khushi always these thing infront of everyone! She kissed arnav in show with Anjali and nani witnessing it and here apologized.. that's khushi, I must say!

OMG!!! Those three words!! Aaj ho kya gaya hai sab ko!! But I ROFL'd at these sentence... poor arnav thought, she was asking to confess his love there!! Lol, even I thought that! But khushi again amazed us!! jao maaf kiya' really!! LOL (I seen tis scene somewhere but I am not able to remember it :D, yaad aayega toh battaongi :P)

Hehehe.. payal gave her that gift!! And arnav heard!! Besharam kahi ki.. but loved her wink to arnav! :P :P she is (again I am saying) one smart woman :D

Aww... khushi really hugged him as soon as he entered his, no their room!! And again apologized.. love her yaar!

I must say, very cute couple!! Loved how she apologized :D

Oh shit!! They KISSED!! And khushi initiate it.. *ouch* I am shocked.. lol pleased too!! That she kissed him!! Wow!

but why did she push him??? Hmm, I am sure, there's not uhmm.. problem for them!! Maybe khushi wanted him to confess too.. or maybe she will do by herself ;)

I want arnav to take khushi to naintal once again :P

Omg.. akash planned something for payal!! Uhm.. date? He is going to confess na!!

cant wait for another update!!!

Continue soon

PS: again sorry for the length :P :P

Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago
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OMG I am on 1st page that too second position?? 😲
Aaj mai upar asmaan niche..😳🥳
In reply of ur buaji sized thank you😆 plz accept welcome as much as the layers of mamiji's makeup😆
hehe yes i will comment on the update..😳 U won't be spared😉 consider urself warned its going to be superr long😳
so after arnav's parents' love story u gave us khushi's parents' one and garima was soo cute always
blushing..😃 no wonder our khushi too blushes so much..😊 but my MIL is a rockstar bas. Naughty too 😳
*Kaisi bahun hu mai? I was thinking of so many names to help khushi in pacifying arnav but not badi ma?? Shame on me *
Anjali sulked cutely not getting a chance to meddle in someone's life and try to make it better😆(and also interrupting love in the process😉) Shyam 👍🏼 *lolwa u can dance now😉*
Raizada khandan is sooo sweet...🤗
He loves me, doesn't he? he does khushi.. he truely madly deeply does..
but even if he doesn't love me, i do
The way khushi missed arnav..😃 poetic justice 😆 aur bolo that ur pati doesn't love u. ab bhugto😉
and the promotional msg must be salt on the wound😆
One more tym raizada family and la are adorable personified..they wanted to gift la something to get over her grief. aww..🤗 *Ps 1st and last tym i tried cooking was a mousse it resembled and tasted like an awesome chocolate milkshake🤪 *
when payal was explaining everything abt arshi to akash like he was a 5 yr old i was just grinning and thinking no payal touch? but thn the Payal surfaced Are we having a honeymoon first? I don't mind by the way😆
Arnav's reaction was totaalllyyy justified 👍🏼 and he was sooo cute..😳 how he each tym thought of do his regular routine of showing his love to khushi till he remembered the blusted word..but what i adored the most was his self talk..sanka devi ki sangat ka asar hai..😆
LI 1 whn khushi didn't actually try to feed him..but i wanted khushi to regret so for now LI chalta hai..will make up for it later😉
ok i didn't get my desired full on la-arnav scene yet but arnav didn't forget to eat some brownie😃
Arnav used immense sense of self-control to not turn and take her into his arms when he heard her sniff several times in a row see he is just too good 🤗
khushi had to get up from the bed tht tym? LI 2,
Arnav slept, only when he thought khushi was asleep, looking at her
Talk to me, please..touch me please khushi thought as she tried to sleep but couldn't. She was too used to sleeping in his arms😃 I might hv felt bad for khushi but it was too much fun seeing her like this realising wht arnav meant to her 😈
The rabbave moment was going soo good 😳 I totally forgot abt me wanting khushi to regret 😛 but thn LI no 3. arnav removed his hands..😒
I noticed the pic before i read the part but nah LI no 4 happened. arnav babua removed his hand away..😭
Did i miss something here? Anji and shyam were married for 14 years? 😲 this long..
How can someone be as adorable as La is??? 🤗🤗 and her letter..😆
payal is crazy😆 but khushi needed tht talk in an urgent basis😉 You have a hot guy moving around in your room and you haven't done anything yet! 😆 Payal does have a valid point😳 *Imagining akash's reactiion if he by chance had heard this line of payal🤣*
If all this is not love than what is⭐️ I absolutely loved the whole convo payal and khushi had..👏
I guess the update was for payal consoling and explaining the raizada bros like kids only.😆 Arnav actually was whinning like a kid trying to justifying his act.. Do i even need to mentioned how much i hayeeed over this cuteness of him..😳
"Did you just call me an idiot?" he asked, his nostrills flaring in rage. 😆Arnav babua u might be ASR but she is Payal.. She can call nyone nything she wants too..😃
When payal asked akash to take him for shopping i had a wicked feeling and it came true..Akash in a victoria secret outlet.. and then also choosing those?? 🤣
Just a word from you and your words will turn to reality..😲😳⭐️
i guess this is the 1st tym akash called khushi bhabi.. I always wanted something like tht but never thought the moment would come like this..😆
Aaand the red saree marks its entry..🥳
arnav retreated his extended hand, fisting it on his side seeing khushi taking a step back.. Inka kuch nehin ho sakta.. LI no 5
Arnav karein ya na kare i had totally maafed*forgave* khushi.. How sweetly she asked for his forgiveness...😃
You and khushi are one and the same⭐️
I don't have to do this but I want to do this⭐️ they kisseddd...😃
And u actually stopped at the teaser..sudherne wali nehin hai na tu? 😆
Arnav is taking khushi someplace which is GOOD. Lucknow it is then..😊 their he'll take badi ma's ashirvaad and give khushi the kangan
longgg HM k liye bali chale jana..😉
Payash is going out of the country it seems. but where? 😕
PS throughout the update i kept on getting some similarities with the movie just married. Like the kiss and make up convo between khushi and payal, khushi MUing arnav's love for lust or the way arnav thought khushi was doing all her manaofying tries to show the elders only. Was it deliberate or just a mere coincedence? 😳
Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago
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On the first page, Z this has never happened before😃
Loved the update Arnav is not angry anymore. Loved Payal the love guru😊



Edited by anu1017 - 12 years ago
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Sabse pehle a Big sorry for the super late comment, par hum theek nahi the! :( and if the comment is not good, then hum theek abhi nahi hue hain! [;(]


LI ne mujhe Rockerz banaya. And i am glad i could get on the first page! 😃- apne fir meri wish poori ki di, so Thank you!


Coming back to the update:

I dunno but i'm jumping to say this, but Payal is So much - Like YOU! Bas! - you think of reasons why, main nahi bataungi!

And in last update i said na, Payal will be the cupid um guardian angel and so she was! Ye bandi mast hai!


She is the most sorted and straight person amngst all the young ones! She knows how to un-complicate and she along witha smart brain has acting skills too!

With Aakash, she becomes a GF, sometimes flirty, sometimes demanding, sometimes playful and sometimes angry!

With Khushi she becomes a sister, someone who guides her and helps her!

With Arnav she is a confidate, a friend and a saali too.

With Manorama and rest all elders she is a daughter!

So many shades of Payal!

Coming to Aakash, he asked for her Passport, either he is taking her to her mother to ask her hand which is unlikely as elders would do, or he is taking her to her father's place.. Where he lived but can't help but think it somehow would have her father included..bas!


Arnav and Khushi - for the first time i'm writing about both of them together, because thats what the case is! Both are together as two sides of a coin! Khushi hurts him, she is hurt as well. Arnav hurts her, he is hurt as well! Khushi is wrong but Arnav is not being Right!

Tum bhi ho wo hi,
hum bhi hain wo hi..
Baat fir ye kyun ab lagti hai nayi?
Kya hua galat aur kya sahi..
Tum jo saath ho, ab sach to hai yahi!


Both fear hurting the other, end up doing so. Both fear rejection - and so end up not Confessing. If you won't take a step ahead, how will you be able to see that the other one is willing to take a step ahead or not?


However you've planned it, i still wish their confessions come as - I love you Dammit way. Ye isstyle sabse rocking hai!

Vaise i can't help saying Khushi indeed is Garima daughter and Ratna in a way is an angel for both of them!
Ab Khushi ko samajh mein aaya ki bade jo kehte hain, bhale ke liye hi kehte hain! :)


as for Lavanya ka letter - i seriously wonder how would NK decode it? And how will he help her in hindi? - lavanya ji humei apka patr mila, jaan kar accha laga ki aap bhi humein khat ke madhyam se hi baat karna pasand karengi! Humein aapki likhawat bahut sunder aur apki tarah saaf lagi! Kya aap humein doorbhash ke madhyam se ye bataingi ki aapne likhe kya hai isse humein uttar dene mein aasani hogi! 😉 -



binded by love..
Blinded by rage..
Saying things that never they meant..
A wishful and empty day they spent.
Recalling the hurting words,
bearing the burning heart..
None too smart,
to give a start..
Comes in anklet, brings in light,
does some tricks helping their plight,
She is guilty.
He is sorry.
She askes for forgiveness..
He gives it all.
Just like that, The world seems Bright afterall!
When they kiss..
The feeling pour out.
Words are not needed,
when its the heart that talks!

In life, its not just you or me..
Together now its 'We'..
I complete yourz and you complete mine..
The words that we spoke though kisses this time! :)


Btw, ye sab kisi movie mein hua hai na, pehle? I don't remember the name, not even sure if its from one single mvie.. I'll have to think!


P.S: the poem is not what i wanted to write, but sacchi my hands have started to hurt and i can't type more :( Next time will do better!


P.P.S: Khushi is crying because she felt his love through that Kiss, because she finally knows how it feels to be kissed, i hope!

Edited by aashi12 - 12 years ago
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Bless you Payal! She is the one person who can drill sense into everybody'e heads - Arnav, Aakash and Khushi. She finally spelled out the simple truth - how can one live in the same room with that sexy man and not do anything about it? 😲 Phew! Oh, and Lavanya is cute 😊

But Arnav is the cutest! Bas!

I loved that Khushi finally took a step forward.. the whole apologizing was adorable. But now why is she crying? Please tell me she is just overwhelmed..

Also - all that you say Arnav is feeling - its true, right? They are both in love.. at least thats what I understood. This isn't that "payback" plan from his side naa? 😒

This was a lovely update, Zee!
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res ..cngrats .. anu n lazy


unresed HERE
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to be continued 😛

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 12 years ago

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