ArHi OS : When Arnav met Khushi!

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: avika_ShArMa
aww! this was such a cute os!
arnav and khushi, frenemies huh? :)

i can imagine little khushi with cute pigtails, plump pink cheeks, shrill voice and little arnav as a frown marred head, absolutely adorable. !!

we all had such couples(childhood sweethearts) in our school days no? uh, im just being nostalgic. :P

but the kiss stole the show!!
loved it Dil. 😊

Thanks..😃 I took your advice and modified one of the shorter OS's of mine...😳

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nexus_13
Loved the little Arnav and little Khushi and their cute banters...

They were meant to fall in love, isn't it!? They confessed!

But I felt that Arnav's feelings towards Khushi just before the confession could have been explored further...

IKR?. It's a big flaw of mine. I'm always in a hurry..😆

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farru786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Awww 👏 tat was sooo cuteee especially little arnav and khushi
Nice Os
Thanks for sharing 😊

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Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

aww, that's such a sweet OS!!

I really loved the little Arnav & Khushi's 1st day in their class.. They were so adorable :)

Their senior year was very interesting to read.. Now I think you can right a full-fledged SS or FF with this theme & some more masala.. It will be a fun story to read :)

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by Frida - 12 years ago

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ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

what a beautiful and romantic piece

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1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

This could easily have been a two or three shot.

Want to read more.

Very very cute story.

As someone said before me, it reminds me too of the Hum Tum cartoons.

I could imagine them fighting and pulling each others hair out as kids.

Wish you would continue this.

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Meerah14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

That was too sweet and cute...little arnav and little khushi...

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Liya123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Such a hilarious and sweet os. It was so funny when little cute Arnav and little kushi fought at the first day of school. I was laughing madly that Arnav thought kushi was like a doll but at the next instant they fought .

The end was so cute and fabulous

Thanks for the pm