Abhiya OS- Your Highness!!!

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I have read this somewhere and Thought to share with you all:-):-):-)



HER HIGHNESS


The train left the crowded
station.. Abhay unzipped his
bag to put some eatables
that were necessary in the
long train journey...it wasn't
easy to travel alone for him
as he had such a good habit
of talking to any stranger he
met...
one after another, he kept
five packs of chips in his
bag and one packet outside
to munch...there weren't
many people traveling...he
turned around to see the no
of passengers traveling then
opened the packet of
chips...
he was indeed
handsome...so handsome
that any girl would fall for
him...as he enjoyed sitting
near the window...
After few hours
The evening sun covered
with dark and cold
night...he took out his
sweater and looked at his
watch... "i slept for eight
hours..." he looked
around...there wasn't
anyone...
The train stopped at small
station...he looked outside
and thought of getting a
bottle of water, to his
surprise there wasn't a
single person on the lonely
station...there wasn't any
point of getting down the
train...he thought of waiting
till the next station...
he stepped inside the
train...when he heard a
sweet voice, he peeped out
to look... his eyes widened
at the beauty...she looked
like princess... "Please wait"
'...
he offered his hand to the
most beautiful girl to let her
in the train...the train
started moving slowly but he
managed to pull her in the
train "thanks" the sweet
voice made him smile...
"no problem" he responded
quickly...
there was a sparkle in her
eyes that made him gaze at
her while she adjusted her
silk white dupatta nicely
over her shoulder...
she sat on a opposite
seat...mesmerized with her
attractive eyes and fair
skin...he had never seen a
girl so beautiful before...
After few minutes...he
looked around "where is
your luggage"
she smiled at him "i don't
need to carry anything.."
astonished at her reply
"why??"
with a sweet smile "where
are you going??" she asked
him...
"Delhi" he replied happily
"oh..." she said with a sad
face.
"what happened '.why did
you make that sad face?" He
wondered at her
she looked at him carefully
"i am leaving at next
station..."
somehow he felt sad...only
in few minutes he felt closer
to her...he wanted her to
stay longer...
"so you live here??...i forgot
to ask you...what's your
name??"
while moving her hand out
of the window she said "you
can call me your highness"
he laughed a little "your
highness??? why??? are you
a princess of some place.??"
she didn't smile this
time...her face was
straight... "yes..."
slowly his laughter was
replaced by a small smile
"ok...ok your highness"
for some reason he felt
drowsy...he had good sleep
but his body felt tired as if
he had lifted something
heavier...
"you are sleeping" she
queried while looking
outside the window...
he never wanted to
sleep...how could he leave a
chance to talk to her
highness, he laughed but
then thought about her...she
looked so beautiful that he
was sure she must be a
princess '..but another
thought came over then why
the hell is she traveling by
train... he quickly asked her
"your highness...you don't
have a car??"
she didn't bother to answer
him... he gazed at her...
then asked another question
"hmmm and your highness
you don't have luggage, no
servants, not a single person
is here to look after
you...and at this hour you
are traveling from one
station to another..."
he kept quiet...he thought
over...he wondered over
what he has said... her
highness is traveling
alone...no luggage, no
people, nothing...and she's
not even bothered to answer
him...instead she's staring
outside the window...
his thoughts were
continuously flowing, one
after another... Its so cold
that he's freezing but her
highness seems to enjoy the
chilling winds... "aren't you
feeling cold??"
she turned around towards
him "no...it doesn't make
any difference to me..."
this was too much for
him...either she's enjoying
to scare him...or she's just
acting and pretending to do
this drama... "enough..." he
shouted... "stop fooling me"
he annoyingly looked at
her...while she smiled...
he stared at her from top to
bottom... her silk white
dress looked exquisite, and
made him think again about
her being some princess of
some tinsel town...
"i am in trouble" she said in
a low voice... "you can save
me"
he looked at her... "did you
say something??"
she started crying "i want
your help...please help
me..."
without even thinking he
responded "of course...but
what happened??"
with innocent eyes she
looked at him "i have lost
something..."
he was curious to know her
reason of being so weird
"your highness...what have
you lost???"
"i have lost myself on the
next station...can you help
me get in the train..." she
said seriously looking into
his eyes...
he was frightened '..if this
was a joke he wont leave
her...to hell with all his
kindness...he will forget that
she's a girl... "listen...i
don't want this rubbish
talks..."
she started humming a
song...
he was shocked...she came
closer to him... "are you
scared?? I was joking"
that was the level of his
patience...he had enough...
"last time...i am not going
to tolerate one more
nonsense talk form you"
she didn't say
anything...and adjusted her
dupatta...he looked at the
lovely figure...she was
perfectly made by God...her
features, her beauty, her
style...everything was more
than perfect...he lovingly
gazed at her...
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After some time...
the train stopped at the
next station...he opened his
eyes, and looked around for
her...she had left...he
smiled... and thought of
getting some water...
but to his surprise there
wasn't a single person
outside the station...it was
dark...with just one small
bulb that too was
flickering...
he stepped out and looked
around...there wasn't any
sign of her highness...she
must have left in her big
car... he thought and
stepped inside the train
when he heard the sweet
voice again...
he immediately looked
outside... it was her
highness... "please wait" she
shouted...while coming
towards him...
this time his senses worked
a little and he knew
something was wrong... he
didn't offered his hand...the
train started moving faster...
he stared at her... she was
running towards him...but
after few seconds she
stopped and smiled at
him... her smile was weird...
she stretched her arm but
the train moved faster...he
was shocked to see such a
long arm...he moved inside
the train and closed the
door... "oh no..." he
realized... she was a witch...
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trishnawaliya thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
andheri kali raate mein abhay ko mile ek chudail wo bhi sunder chudail... wow its exciting... sach mein dara diya rashi...

nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow dat was really amazing. So Abhay met a witch on deserted railway station.


@When u will be continuing ur "Pure Love" ff???
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh my poor Abhay ek chudali mil gayi...kya woh Panchi ki jaise dikhta hai๐Ÿ˜†?Edited by Abhiya_eternal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wohh , that was weird , who was the witch ji , plzz continue yaar , complete ke isse ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by withered - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..really nice os๐Ÿ‘..can u pls write a part 2..i'm really liking the concept ๐Ÿ˜ณ 
..juhi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
hawww pia was a witch...๐Ÿ˜ฒbechara abhay๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 10 years ago
abhiya os...pia n witch...poor abhay..plz cont.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Update but who was that witch and why only Abhay can see her waiting for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!!!
it was amazing story...
abhay met a witch lolsss... means pia was chudail in the story...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
really different one liked it dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ