The Bride With A Doll...Epilogue UPDATED ON PAGE 9 :) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
A perfect ending to a beautiful journey...loved it so much.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Aww it was an amazing epilogue Jenny!! Loved it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
It was an absolutely beautiful epilogue to an amazingly beautiful love story.
I had tears in my eyes while reading the letters Arnav and Khushi wrote to their family.

I just loved it.
Thank you Jenny for this wonderful period love story.
No one could have written it better than you !!!

I love you for this Jenny... Hugs... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZL5mp9VMvls[/YOUTUBE]


Jenny, No end can be as good as this..loved it...You should write more..not only in IF..also professionally...You are a blessed writer..πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
One of the things I know and have come to love about your epilogues is that reality in which they are steeped. 
And true to your style this one too was just that...as realistic, as romantic and as poignant as it could be. 

I would like to begin with the family. Arnab's letter was heart breaking. Why is it that one never realizes the value family when they are around? Why is it we realize how precious their support was only when they are not around anymore. I guess that's human nature. 

I would like to tell Arnab... he is one of the really great guys. One with amazing values and wonderful heart. No, he is not a guy with million flaws. Yes, he is flawed just as most people but a million...no ...never.

Thammi's state brought tears to my eyes. being really close to my grandmother, it wrenched my heart to see her that way. But that is also the reason why i loved this epilogue. God compensated her loss of eye sight with the pleasure of holding her great grandson in her arms ...what a beautiful moment that was...the best.

Arnab and Khushi had to make some great changes but they survived. Their love flourished in ways that matters and their romance was beautiful. There is something special about love making scenes where the woman wears a sari...I love it. 

The ending...where Arnav remembers those memo nets with Khushi from the moment she steps into their house to the very end was heartfelt. The way she conveys her emotions and the way he understands was perfect. Just perfect. 

Thank you for this beautiful tale Jen. Keep writing. πŸ€— 
Edited by AquaSandhya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Awesome Update and perfect ending...

Beautifully described journey of 3 years...

Loved how Khushi got embarrassed by getting caught that she was playing with Arnav... That subject was really sensitive to khushi... But Arnav reply was awesome...

Loved the reunion of family... 

Will miss this story...😭

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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
That was an amazinggg update!!!

A perfect end to a beautiful story

And lil arjun was like cherry on the cake...now arshi are relli living a happily ever after with all contentment

Loved reading it to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Simply an awesome epilogue. Loved it Jenny.
Looking forward to read more from you.   Keep writing dear...

Viji
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
awrsome ending...
Such a lovely story..
Nice union...
Congrates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
awesome epilogue
finally khushi transfered from child to perfect woman 
everyone be back to normal and the family time  was so good
hope to see great stories like this