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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

wow when r u goin to post it today?
davia



In the next ten minutes...theek hai!!!😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hello friends...back with an update…sorry I take my time…had to pack away my pc due to building work. 😕 The last part got a little too steamy I take it!!! 😉 😳 Heheh…some will probably say not steamy enough…but friends bacche bhi yeh ff padh te hai…need to use them censor scissors somewhere!!! 😉
Thanx for all ur comments last time round. 😃
I hope u enjoy this part.

Taz 😊


Part 59 - Yaadein


The next day, Bani was up fairly early and was out in the garden once again. Picking up the glasses, off the table, she thought about last night and touched her neck gently bringing a smile on her face.

Jai: Bani!! Akele akele kis baat pe muskuraa rahi ho??

Bani turns around to find Jai, leaning against the door frame, arms folded smiling.

Bani (turns back, blushing 😳): Kuch bhi toh nahin…

Jai (comes up behind her and wraps his arms around her): Joothi…..oh god Bani…ur so hot!!! (comes up in front of her)

Bani (chuckles): Don't start that again!! 😆

Jai (touching her forehead): Nahin Bani..really…oh god…kal bearish ke wajahse… its all my fault…mein…

Bani: Relax will u I'm fine…bas slight fever lagta hai…theek ho jaaungi!

Jai: Ur not fine…bukhaar hai aur phir bhi nighty mein bahaar khadi ho…chalo andar.

Bani: Bola na theek hoon…(makes him sit down on the table)…ghabraana band kijiye…maine ek goli kha le hai…(kaunsi? Pyaar waali ya vitimain waali?? 😕 😆 )

Jai (pulls her close): I'm taking u to a doctor today...wanna make sure ur ok…

Bani: Nahin…hamaara aakri din hai yahaan…mein enjoy karna chahti hoon…doctor se nahin milna mujhe…waise bhi aapke saath doctor paas toh hagiz nahin jaaungi…kuch na kuch ulta seedha bol denge!! (yep..that we all know!! 😉 )

Jai: Bani…listen to me sweetheart…I'm taking u to a doctor wherether u like it or not… if he says ur fine then we will do whatever u want today ok?

Bani: Aap se argue karna bekaar hai…chaliye undar chaliye…mein breakfast tayaar karti hoon…(moves to walk away…but is pulled back)..Ab kya huaaaa??

Jai: U looked amazing last night u know that!! (Abhi bhi nasha nahin uthra shayad…I can sense all my readers shifting closer to the computer screen…😉 😳 for more on that front!! 😉)

Bani (looks down and fiddles with his night shirt): Hmmm…mein jaanti ti thi ke aap apne aap ko sambhaal nahin paaengi…even though u promised u'd behave…mujhe pata tha aap jooth bol rahe the!!! Kitni khatarnaak dress thi!! (deadly dress indeed!!!!)

Jai: Khaternaak indeed…mein toh tumhe uss mein dekh kar hi margaya!!! I knew I was gonna lose it when I asked u to wear it…lekin mein iss tarah se paagal ho jaaunga kabhi bhi nahin socha tha…(looks at her neck)…looks sore.

Bani (laughs a little): And u say I'm wild!!!

Jai: Ur just as wild when ur in one of ur moods…agar tum pregnant nahin hoti toh pata nahin mera kya karti..(Bani thumps him)…Owww….Okay…okay…I admit I got a bit too wild yesterday…(holds her face close to his) …if only u know what was going through my mind that moment when it started raining…

Bani: I think I know!! 😳 (mujhe bhi…but…I think we all would like some details here Jai! 😉 )

Jai: Believe u me sweetheart, u don't know anything!...(grins cheekily 😃…then whispers in Bani's ear) (Kya keh rahe ho Jai? …not fair…I wanna know!! 😔)

Bani (narrows her eyes, as she listens to what Jai is saying…then her eyes pop out): Mr. Walia!!!!!! 😳 (blushes then pushes him and runs back towards the house)
(Haila aisa kya boldiya isne…must have been something very naughty!! I wanna know!!!!! 😔 We all wanna don't we?? 😉 😆)

Jai: Sharma kyun ka rahi ho…maine toh sirf kaan mein bataya aur yeh haal hai…agar…. (laughs then runs after her in to the house again!!) (Haila Jai…u've left me and my readers puzzled today!!!! 😕 )

After having breakfast, Jai nagged and dragged Bani to the doctors surgery despite her saying she was absolutely fine. The doctor they met last time round was not available so had to see another, by the name of Dr. Jhunjhunwala. (Ab yeh doctor kam, joker zyaada hai!! Khusat sa bhudda type…but quite lovable!! 😆)

Jai: Doctor saab…meri wife ka checkup kijiye…pregnant hai aur aaj subah se bukhaar hai aur kehti hai ke woh theek hai…

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Beta…kyun chinta kar rahe ho…theek hogi…waise chehere se toh bilkul theek lagti hai…(watching Bani smile widely)…kitni pyaari gudiya jaise patni hai tumhaari!!! (gudiya..hehehe 😆 )

Jai: Doctor..meri wife pe nazar mat lagaye….check kijiye na…

Bani, stamps on hi foot!! 😡

Jai (lets out a small cry): Oww!!!

Doctor pulls out his stethoscope, gets up to check Bani.

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Bilkul theek ho beta…sab kuch normal lag raha hai…

Bani: Haan doctor…mein theek hoon…khamakha yeh meri chinta kar rahe hai!!! 😛

Jai: Kyun na karoon…meri wajahse tum bemaar pargayi…

Bani: Ab aap yahaan shuru mat hojaye…subah baat ki thi naa…its not ur fault!!

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Arre jhagar kyun rahe ho…kya baat hai??

Jai: Woh actually kal raat hum baahaar garden mein dinner kar rahe…isne ek red dress pheni thi…then…actually it started with her payal coming off and I put it back on…started raining…and …(Jai ab saari details iss doctor ko bataoge!! 🤣)

Bani: Mr. Walia!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡

Jai: What??? Doctor saab pooch rahe hai toh bata raha hoon!!! 😆

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Nahin…theek hai beta…aage mat bataao…mein samaj gaya…(starts singing)

"pyaar hua iqraar hua…pyaar se phir kyun darr ta hai dil" Kya romantic gaana tha na Raj Kapoor aur Nargis bearish mein….mujhe meri biwi ki yaad aagayi…usse bhi barish mein bheegna bahut pasand tha, pata nahin ab upar kiske saath romance kar rahi hogi!!! 😆

Jai: Great song doc!! 👏 But I would have sang… "zindigi bhar nahin ..bhoolenge woh barsaat ke raat" 😆 😳 (yes Jai I think a lot of us won't forget that night! 😳 😳)….Waise raat ko toh kuch aur hi gaana baj raha tha mere dimaag mein: "Tip Tip barsa paani…paani ne aag laagayi…"

Bani, gets up…pulls Jai up too….but he continues singing

Jai: "…aag lagi dil mein toh…."

Bani: Bye doctor!!

Jai: "Dil ko teri yaad aayi"

Dr. Jhunjhunwala 😆: Such a cute couple…

Bani (outside): Aakhir muh khol he diya na…chup chaap baith nahin sakte!!! (hands on her hips) 😡

Jai: Naraaz kyun hoti ho…woh doctor ne poocha isiliye…aur tumhe toh pata hai mein jooth nahin bolta! (Bahut honest and shareef hai humaara Jai!! 😉 😆)

Bani, folding her arms looks the other way!!

Jai: Bani…sorrryyyy…sweetheart…maaf kardo…pweeeeesssseeee…..look I'm making a really sweet face!!! 😊 😊 😊(Bani turns and looks at him…and just melts seeing that adorable face!!) (Haiiiiiiiiiii…I'm melting too…that adorable face!!! 😍 )

Bani: Maaf kiya…waise bhi aapse zyaada der naraaz nahin re sakti…and u know it too!!!

Jai 🤗: Awwww…thank u…thank u….mwah!!! ❤️….Accha Bani…bolo tumhe kahaan jaana tha aaj?

Bani: Urrmmmm…hum Nakki Lake chalte hai…kal aap mujhe Lake Pichola mein le gaye…toh aaj mein aap ko Lake Nakki ki ser kaarati hoon…theek haina..wahaan boating karenge…bahut log hote hai wahaan…fun atmosphere hai….aur

Jai (interrupts): Bahut log hai…damn!!! There I was thinking…ke tum mujhe koi sun saan jagah pe le jaogi…like that camping expedition!!! 😉 😳 (Jai control!!)

Bani: Ha!! Keep dreaming!!!

Jai: That I am 😍 😍….wow…Bani…my wild Bani…!! 😍

Bani: Chaliye yahaan se…hameha koi naya drama shuru kar dete hai!!!

Both get in their car and drive off towards Nakki Lake.

When they arrived at Nakki Lake, Jai glanced around and admired the beautiful hills and rock formations surrounding the lake.

Jai: Bani bahut khoosoorat jagah hai yeh…lake palace hotel jaise hi jagah…lekin yahaan log bahut hai…

Bani (excitedly 😃): Chaliye na boating karte hai…bahut dino baad yahaan aaye hoon…chaliye na...(dragging Jai along)

Jai: Aa raha hoon baba…calm down…itni jaldi kisilye!!!

They reach the lake, where Bani lets go of Jai's hand hurridly walks past, a couple who were about to get on a boat and gets on the boat before them. !!! (queue jumping!!!)

Women: Hey…we we're gonna get on that boat…we were next!!! 😡 😡

Bani (making herself comfy): Sorrryyy…too late….Mr. Walia…chaliye na…(extends her hand out… Jai walks pass the disgruntled couple)

Jai (shrugs his shoulders): Sorry guys…u really did miss the boat this time…😆…better luck next time!!! (gets onto the boat, sitting opposite Bani and starts rowing the boat out!)

Jai: Bani…u surprise me all the time…I can't believe u just did that…its not like u…tum toh hamesha doosron ke baare mein sochti ho…aaj kya hua.?? (yeahh even I would like to know!!)

Bani: Mr. Walia…yahaan aap pehli baar aaye hai issiliye aap ko nahin pata…bahut der wait karna parta humme…dekhiye na ...kitne boating kar rahe. phir humaara aakhri din hai. Pehle bhi mein Pia aur Rano yahaan pe aate the…toh aisa hi karte the…queue jump karlete the…😆

Jai (rowing out gently): Hmmm…bahut smart ho…

Bani (leaning over the edge of the boat…putting her hand in the water): Woh toh mein hoon…(splashing water over Jai!!!) 😆

Jai: Hey!!!!!

She does it again and laughs loudly!!! 😆

Jai: Bani!!! Stop that…poori shirt bheegon di… (haiiii…shirt sukhane ke liye hi sahi, utar do Jai…hum sab readers bade khush ho jaayenge!!) 😉 😳….yahaan boat mein nihlaane ka programme hai!??

Bani: Sorry...(hold hers ears sweetly…then moves close to Jai and wipes his face with her pallu)

Jai: Hmmmm…not that's better…😊(dropping the oars (not in the water thankfully…my Jai has brains!!)…grabs Bani!!)

Bani: Hatiye…boat mein yeh sab nahin chalega…(moves back to her orginal seat, but continues to romance with her eyes, making Jai blow kisses at her repeatedly) ❤️ ❤️ (accha nain mataka chal raha hai boat mein!! 😆

After enjoying their boating Jai and Bani, came back on land again and ate at a lakeside restaurante, after which they headed for the shopping centres located around the lake. All kinds of handicraft and handiloom products were on offer, from textiles to wood carvings to jewelery . But what really sent Bani in a shopping frenzy was the numerous bangles and silver jewelery shops.
Running upto a bangle shop…she looked at a number of new style bangles whilst Jai stopped at a jewellery shop alongside, spotting something for Bani.

Bani (to the shop owner): Suniye…mujhe yeh rang ki nayi chooriyan bataaye na…(pointing at her mint green saree!)

Vendor: Madamji….yeh rang ki toh bahut.. yeh dekhiye (pulls out a box)…yeh dekhiye…(pulls out another box)…yeh bahut acchi lagenge…har pal chamakti rahengi…

Bani, starts putting them on but was struggling …so the vendor decided to help. He takes her hand and help to put them on.

Meanwhile Jai, was busy deciding whether to purchase the pair of silver earrings he was looking at . He admired them for quite sometime until he glanced towards Bani to see that vendor holding her hand!!! (ag gaya kaam se!!) 😆

Jai (puts the earrings down that instant and says to the owner of that shop) : I'll be right back!!!! (storms towards Bani!!) 😡 😡 (Hailaaaaaaaaaa…My Mr. Terminator…😍 )

Vendor: Madamji…yeh chooriyan aapko aa jayenge…mein phena raha hoon na…

Bani: Ouch!! Thodi tight lagti hai…koi aur size nahin hai??

Vendor: Madamji…yeh chooriyan aaphi ki size hai…mujhe pata hai…

Jai: What the hell do u think u are doing??? 😡 (gripping him by the collar)

Vendor, sits there looking all puzzled ! (bechaare ko English samaj mein nahin aati!!!)

Jai: Meri Biwi ka haath chhodo!!!! Varna yeh sab choodiyan tumhaare haath mein phena doonga!!!! 😡 😡

Seeing the anger in Jai's eyes…he lets go of Bani's hand!

Bani: Mr. Walia plzz….chhodiye usse…(Jai lets go)

Jai: Bani…chalo yahaan se…

Bani: Lekin Mr. Walia…yeh chooriyan…mujhe pasand hai…mein…

Jai: Baaki ke main phena doonga!!

Jai (gives a dirty look): Hey…yeh baaki ki chooriyan mujhe do (snatches it off him)...aur yeh lo paise!! 😡

Poor vendor was so petrified, that as soon as Jai took Bani away, he pulled the shutter down of his shop!! (…bahut phatti hogi bechaare ki!! 😆)

Bani: Kya zaroorat thi is tarah hungama karne ki…chooriyon waalon kaam hai haathon mein chooriyan phena na…aisa karte hai kabhi. (yeh some do that I know!! 😆)…sab log kaise dekh rahe hai hamaari taraf.

Jai (fuming still 😡 ): Dekhne do…Hoga uska kaam chooriyan pehna ne ka…lekin woh tumhe chooriyan phena kyun raha tha? That's my job…damn him 😡…Bani agar tum beech mein nahin aati toh uska muh todh deta 😡 (I would have love to have seen that!! 😃)…kaise nazron se dekh raha tha tumhe…(takes Bani's left hand)…tumhe choone ka haq sirf mera hai…(puts the remaining bangles on Bani)

Bani: Mr. Walia…ab apna mood kharaab mat kijiye…plzzz…forget it….dekhiye kaise lag rahi hai…(shows both her wrists which donned the twinkly bangles)…acchi haina??? (smiling 😊)

Jai: Bani everything looks good on u…(taking hold of her wrists and kisses them.) ❤️

Bani (pulls her hands away): Mr. Walia… log humme abhi bhi dekh rahe hai…chaliye yahaan se…(drags him away)

Jai: Arre Bani…ek minute yaheen thero mein abhi aaya…mein apne glares wahaan dukaan pe bhool gaya…(dashes off, the comes back a few minutes later.) …sorry…okay…chale?

They continue walking around the lake, admiring the atmosphere, joking with one another enjoying their time together when Jai spots something.

Jai (looking at sign): Honeymoon point???

Bani: Wahaan se poora Mount Abu dikhay deta hai…wahaan pe bhi sunset ka nazaara bahut accha hai.

Jai: Shall we go??

Bani: Mr. Walia I'd love to…but it's quite a long walk and uphill…thak jaaoongi…I'm already feeling a little tired. 😕

Jai: U are??? Fikar not!!! (picks her up in his arms)…hum aise chalenge!! (Awwww….so nice of him!!!)

Bani: Mr. Walia...aap thak jaayenge…kaafi lamba raasta hai…

Jai: Anything for u…. besides u wanted me to get fit what better way!!! Haathon ke saath saath peron ki bhi exercise ho jaayegi…but u have to give me a little treats along the way to keep me going! 😉 (treats??? Well I think I know what they are!!) 😉

Bani: Treats? Such as???

Jai: Meri bholi bhaali Bani…ek aad baar gaal pe kiss karti rehna…toh hum jaldi us point tak ponch jayenge theek hai??

Bani: Aur…agar mein na karoon toh???

Jai: Toh….toh…mein raudonga 😭…udaas ho jaaunga 😔…kya tum apne Mr. Walia ko upset karogi?? (Arre tum kyun raune lagoge Jai…hum sab hai na…line se hum sab bhi kiss karte rahenge!!! 😳 😳 😉)

Bani, shakes her head.

Jai: Then shall we get going?? (moves his cheek forward)

Bani, kisses him gently.❤️

Jai: Now lets goooooo!!!! (starts running with her in his arms…making her laugh)

Around 20 mintues later, Jai and Bani finally reach Honeymoon Point. Completely exhausted, but making it out as if he wasn't, Jai gently settled Bani down on a wall and sat down next to her.

Bani (looking at him all worried): Bola tha na maine ke aap thak jaayenge.

Jai (breathing heavily): Nah..nahin…I'm fine….really….(taking her attention away from him)…Bani yahaan se Mount Abu kitna bada lagta hai…haina?

Bani: Haan….lekin Mr. Walia…aap…(still worried)

Jai: I'm fine Bani…just need to catch my breath and I'll be fine.

Bani: Aap thodi der araam kar lijiye…(takes his head and puts it in her lap)

Jai (smiles 😊): If u put it this way…araam karhi leta hoon...(closes his eyes)

Bani,wipes the sweat off his forehead then, soothingly runs her fingers through his hair.

Jai: Mmmmm….that's feels good…(takes her hand a kisses it) ❤️

Bani: Feeling better now?

Jai: Hmmm...hmmm…(opens his eyes and looks up at Bani)

Bani: Humme yahaan pe nahin aana tha…aap kitna thak gaye hai…aap ki tabyat kharaab ho gayi toh?

Jai: Bani…kuch nahin hoga mujhe…(holding her other hand and playing with her fingers)… besides…its our last day here…we need to enjoy ourselves…I love it up here…its so peaceful and secluded.

Bani: Toh aap isiliye yahaan pe le aaye mujhe?

Jai: Aur nahin toh kya…waise mujhe tumhe kuch batana bhi tha. (sits up again)

Bani: Kya? 😕

Jai: Bani, maine decide kiya hai ke jab hum wapas Mumbai ponchenge…main apni saari property, business tumhaare aur hamaare bacche ke naam kardoonga.

Bani: Lekin Mr. Walia…yeh sab karne ke zaroorat hai…sab aap hi ke naam pe rehne dijiye…mujhe toh in sab baaton se koi interest hai…aap ko toh pata hi hai…

Jai: Haan pata hai…lekin Bani…kal ko kya ho kisi ko kuch nahin pata…I need to think ahead. (haila Jai why u talking like this!!! Mere hote hue kuch nahin hoga!!! 😃)

Bani: Mr. Walia…aisi baatein karna band kijiye….mujhe kisi bhi cheez se koi matlab nahin…bas aap mere paas rahiye…aur kuch nahin chahiye mujhe…(hugs him tightly 🤗)

Jai: Bani, tum toh serious ho gayi…mein toh tumhaare saath hi rahunga na…bas yeh sab formalities poori karna chahta hoon…try to understand me….it necessary

Bani: Mr. Walia, (looks him in the eyes) Mein aapki baat samajti hoon…lekin

Jai: Lekin Kya?

Bani: Ghar mein aur log bhi hai…woh sab kya sochenge…mera matlab…

Jai: U mean Jigyaasa.

Bani, goes quiet.

Jai: Maana ke woh meri behn hai aur uska meri property pe bhi haq parta hai…I'm aware of that…but Bani…ur my wife…u have far more rights aur ab hamaara bachha bhi aane waala hai…I need to consider everything. Bani, tum Jigyaasa ki chinta mat karo… main hoon na, main usse samjhaunga…now smile.

Bani, gives a half hearted smile knowing that though this property thing seemed simple for Jai…she knew it wouldn't go down well with Jigyaasa.

Jai: Accha Bani…yeh dekho main tumhaare liye kya laya…(puts his hand in his pocket and pulls out a silver pair of drop earrings)

Bani (smiling widely 😊): Wow!!! Kitni khoobsoorat hai!!!

Jai: Pasand haina? Main yeh dekh raha tha jab woh chooriwaala tumhe…anyways… phir wapas mein lene gaya. Acchi lagi na?

Bani: Bahut!! 😊

Jai: Lao mein phena doon..(he takes off her earrings gently, putting them in his pocket…and puts the silver ones on…softly kissing her ear each time ❤️ ….the wind picks up a little blowing her hair around and making the the earrings sway gently and shimmer in the late evening sunshine)….. Perfect!!!

Bani: Thank you!!! (kissing him softly on the lips…then breaking away)…..Ab hum wapas chale? Agar sooraj dhalne tak rukenge toh wapas jaane mein mushkil hogi…bahut andhera hoga raaste mein…and I will walk down with u this time…theek hai?

Jai: Theek hai sweetheart…(pulls her up…start walking down)…Bani, hum yahaan Honeymoon point dekhne aye the…lekin hum toh ek doosron mein hi lage rahe…(chuckles)…waise ek baat poochu Bani…aise kaunsi jagah hai is duniya mein joh tum jaana chahti ho?

Bani: Mr. Walia…agar aap mere saath hai toh mein kaheen bhi jaana pasand karungi…(holds his hand tightly)

Jai: Phir bhi Bani…koi toh jagah hogi??

Bani: Urrmmm….i would like to go Paris one day.

Jai: Paris! I will keep that in mind now…after our baby is born I will take u both.

Bani: I would love that.

Both continue chatting to one another as they made their way down the hill.

They shopped a little more picking up a few gifts for the family members then dined near the lake again, before they made their way back home. They arrived back home around 11pm and Jai immediately fell on the bed in exhaustion.

Bani: Mr. Walia…aaj bahut thak gaye aap…mein aapke liye kuch garam drink laati hoon…(about to head off to the kitchen…but Jai stops her by holding her hand)

Jai: Rehne do…yahaan aao…(makes her lie down on the bed and snuggles upto her)…I love u Bani…I love this place Bani…I love everything here….I don't wanna go back to Mumbai!! (even I don't want u guys to go back!!! 😔 )

Bani: Aapse aur iss jagah se mujhe bhi bahut pyaar hai…magar ek na ek din toh wapas jaana hi tha…I will really miss this place.

Jai: Bani, shayad mein iss jagah ko tumse bhi zyaada miss karunga

Bani: Woh kyun?

Jai: Woh issliye kyunki yahaan aane ke baad hum dono ek doosren ke bahut zyaada kareeb aagaye…shayad Mumbai mein bhi hum itne kareeb nahin the…I feel I know u a lot more now.

Bani: Accha…kya jaana hai aapne mere baare mein??

Jai: Well for one ur not such a bholi bhaali ladki…(rubs his nose against hers…making her blush 😳)…masti mazaak karna tumhe bhi aata hai…aur tum mujhse bahuttttttttt pyaar karti ho…(hugs her tightly 🤗)…I will always cherish the moments we have spent here in Mount Abu….especially that camping trip. ❤️ ❤️

Bani: I knew u were coming to that!!! (even I did! 😉)

Jai (sniggers): Kya karoon…that was some experience 😳…okay u tell me what has been the highlight of this trip for u??

Bani: Sab hi pal aapke saath bahut enjoy kiya maine…woh Lake Palace Hotel mein sunset dekhna…camping ka trip…Udaipur….but…

Jai: But what?

Bani (looks up at Jai): The moment I will always remember…is that day in the lift!!! (haha!! 😆) Jab baby ne aapko muh me kick kiya….that's was soooo funny…starts laughing!! 😆 😆

Jai: Baniiiiiii!!!! (moves onto her and starts nuzzling her neck crazily)

Bani, giggling, pushes him away and gazes in his eyes.

Jai (softly): Love u!!!

Bani (softly too): Love u even more!!! (holds his face and both lock lips and kiss the night away!) ❤️ ❤️ ❤️


…to be cont!

Okay friends…sorry if I bored u with this part…was going in and out of my writing mood for this part…😕 plzzzzz do continue to leave ur comments…would love to hear ur thoughts. Sorry about any mistakes. Next part…JB leave Mount Abu and head back for Mumbai!!! 😉
Keep them comments coming!!! 😃

Taz! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

👏wow that was a wonderfull part.. iu enjoyed laughing it.... kya batahoon.. ur soo funny... jai and the doctor..... soo plss continue sooon... goin to miss mt.abu... now what will happen in mumbai.. 👏

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davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

👏wow that was a wonderfull part.. iu enjoyed laughing it.... kya batahoon.. ur soo funny... jai and the doctor..... soo plss continue sooon... goin to miss mt.abu... now what will happen in mumbai.. 👏

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davia



Davs...ur first today...yayyyyyy....😃

Awww...thanx for all the clapping...makes me feel good.😃 even i'm gonna miss Mount Abu😭...i've wrote so much on this honeymoon!!!!😆

As for what will happen in Mumbai...there will be some twists coming in the story!!!😉
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noo dont seperate them.......atleast not uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Originally posted by: davia389

noo dont seperate them.......atleast not uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
davia



haila...mein aisa kar sakti hoon?? Never!!! Chinta mat Karo!!!😉
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haila...mein aisa kar sakti hoon?? Never!!! Chinta mat Karo!!!😉

thnks for it...

davia

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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome-will also miss mount abu..please continue soon..hope we get to see krishna soon
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Originally posted by: ruma

awesome-will also miss mount abu..please continue soon..hope we get to see krishna soon



Hey ruma...thanx for commenting sweety...once we go back to Mumbai...story will shift a little...
if my readers continue to enjoy this ff...krishu will surely come!!!😊
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Originally posted by: Taz234

Hello friends...back with an update…sorry I take my time…had to pack away my pc due to building work. 😕 The last part got a little too steamy I take it!!! 😉 😳 Heheh…some will probably say not steamy enough…but friends bacche bhi yeh ff padh te hai…need to use them censor scissors somewhere!!! 😉
Thanx for all ur comments last time round. 😃
I hope u enjoy this part.

Taz 😊
Yeh kya museebat hai yaar, tell your builders to finish up fast....other wise their contract will be revoked.

Last part was so steamy, I thought I was sitting in the sauna...

Part 59 - Yaadein


The next day, Bani was up fairly early and was out in the garden once again. Picking up the glasses, off the table, she thought about last night and touched her neck gently bringing a smile on her face.

Jai: Bani!! Akele akele kis baat pe muskuraa rahi ho??
Bani, the man is right here, I betcha he will give the same treatment to the other side of your neck, what say you?

Bani turns around to find Jai, leaning against the door frame, arms folded smiling.

Bani (turns back, blushing 😳): Kuch bhi toh nahin…

Jai (comes up behind her and wraps his arms around her): Joothi…..oh god Bani…ur so hot!!! (comes up in front of her)

Yeh temperature bahut bad thi jaa raha hai!! 😉😉😉

Bani (chuckles): Don't start that again!! 😆

Jai (touching her forehead): Nahin Bani..really…oh god…kal bearish ke wajahse… its all my fault…mein…

Bani: Relax will u I'm fine…bas slight fever lagta hai…theek ho jaaungi!

Jai: Ur not fine…bukhaar hai aur phir bhi nighty mein bahaar khadi ho…chalo andar.

This is a different kind of fever Jai jaanu, the only person who can bring it down is you, Dr. Walia!! 😳😳😳

Bani: Bola na theek hoon…(makes him sit down on the table)…ghabraana band kijiye…maine ek goli kha le hai…(kaunsi? Pyaar waali ya vitimain waali?? 😕 😆 )

Jai (pulls her close): I'm taking u to a doctor today...wanna make sure ur ok…

Bani: Nahin…hamaara aakri din hai yahaan…mein enjoy karna chahti hoon…doctor se nahin milna mujhe…waise bhi aapke saath doctor paas toh hagiz nahin jaaungi…kuch na kuch ulta seedha bol denge!! (yep..that we all know!! 😉 )

Jai: Bani…listen to me sweetheart…I'm taking u to a doctor wherether u like it or not… if he says ur fine then we will do whatever u want today ok?

I wonder what he is gonna tell him about the baarish ki raat and the red dress, Bani dear, hold on tight, some very embarrassing moments coming up!! 😕

Bani: Aap se argue karna bekaar hai…chaliye undar chaliye…mein breakfast tayaar karti hoon…(moves to walk away…but is pulled back)..Ab kya huaaaa??

Jai: U looked amazing last night u know that!! (Abhi bhi nasha nahin uthra shayad…I can sense all my readers shifting closer to the computer screen…😉 😳 for more on that front!! 😉)

Am I seeing what I think I see
Or are my eyes playing tricks on me
'Cause what I see don't make no sense
Looking so good standing over that vent
Earth Venus in broad daylight
The Goddess of Love is in my sight
Gotta catch a hold of myself
'Cause if I don't I'll have nothing left

Imagine you're sitting at ring side
And I'm standing on the inside
And approaching is Miss Matador
I'm on the charge for

The woman in red
The woman in red
Like fine wine she's going straight to my head

The woman in red ( [Background] -The woman in red)
The woman in red (See the woman in red)
I'll settle for nothing less than her instead

M-M-Miss please pardon me
Now listen to me I can hardly speak
I haven't been this much confused
Since Daddy caught me trying on his shoes
Now, I'm too old to be acting like this
But there's something about her I just can't resist
My heart is beating like a big bass drum
And my mind is saying that girl's the one

Imagine you're sitting at ring side
And I'm standing on the inside
And approaching is Miss Matador
I'm on the charge for

The woman in red ( [Background] -The woman in red)
The woman in red (See the woman in red, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa)
Like fine wine she's going straight to my head

The woman in red (The woman in red)
The woman in red (See the woman in red)
I'll settle for nothing less than her instead
[Repeat 1 time]

[Background]
Pretty little woman in red
Pretty little woman in red
Pretty little wo
Pretty little wo
Pretty little
Pretty little woman in red
[Repeat 1 time]

The woman in red
See the woman in red, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa
The woman in red
See the woman in red

The woman in red ( [Backgrounds] -The woman in red)
The woman in red (See the woman in red, whoa, whoa,whoa, whoa, whoa)
Like fine wine she's going straight to my head

The woman in red (The woman in red)
The woman in red (See the woman in red)
I'll settle for nothing less than her instead
[Repeat-Including all backgrounds]


Bani (looks down and fiddles with his night shirt): Hmmm…mein jaanti ti thi ke aap apne aap ko sambhaal nahin paaengi…even though u promised u'd behave…mujhe pata tha aap jooth bol rahe the!!! Kitni khatarnaak dress thi!! (deadly dress indeed!!!!)

Jai: Khaternaak indeed…mein toh tumhe uss mein dekh kar hi margaya!!! I knew I was gonna lose it when I asked u to wear it…lekin mein iss tarah se paagal ho jaaunga kabhi bhi nahin socha tha…(looks at her neck)…looks sore.

-Macchar ki tarah kaat tha jata hai, aur phi kehta hai, it looks sore, Mr. Dracula😕

Bani (laughs a little): And u say I'm wild!!!

Jai: Ur just as wild when ur in one of ur moods…agar tum pregnant nahin hoti toh pata nahin mera kya karti..(Bani thumps him)…Owww….Okay…okay…I admit I got a bit too wild yesterday…(holds her face close to his) …if only u know what was going through my mind that moment when it started raining…

Bani: I think I know!! 😳 (mujhe bhi…but…I think we all would like some details here Jai! 😉 )

Yaar, I don't know why, but I couldn't help it, this song kept ringing in my head,

it's raining
, it's pouring;
The old man is snoring.
He went to bed
and he Bumped his head
And he couldn't get up in the morning
🤣

Jai: Believe u me sweetheart, u don't know anything!...(grins cheekily 😃…then whispers in Bani's ear) (Kya keh rahe ho Jai? …not fair…I wanna know!! 😔)

Bani (narrows her eyes, as she listens to what Jai is saying…then her eyes pop out): Mr. Walia!!!!!! 😳 (blushes then pushes him and runs back towards the house)
(Haila aisa kya boldiya isne…must have been something very naughty!! I wanna know!!!!! 😔 We all wanna don't we?? 😉 😆)

Jai: Sharma kyun ka rahi ho…maine toh sirf kaan mein bataya aur yeh haal hai…agar…. (laughs then runs after her in to the house again!!) (Haila Jai…u've left me and my readers puzzled today!!!! 😕 )

Me too, sweetie, can you whisper in my ears what he said, I too wanna know... 😔😔😔

After having breakfast, Jai nagged and dragged Bani to the doctors surgery despite her saying she was absolutely fine. The doctor they met last time round was not available so had to see another, by the name of Dr. Jhunjhunwala. (Ab yeh doctor kam, joker zyaada hai!! Khusat sa bhudda type…but quite lovable!! 😆)

I like his name already, Dr.Jhunjhunwala, I too know a doctor, he is a vet, Dr.Ghodewala😆😆😆

Jai: Doctor saab…meri wife ka checkup kijiye…pregnant hai aur aaj subah se bukhaar hai aur kehti hai ke woh theek hai…

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Beta…kyun chinta kar rahe ho…theek hogi…waise chehere se toh bilkul theek lagti hai…(watching Bani smile widely)…kitni pyaari gudiya jaise patni hai tumhaari!!! (gudiya..hehehe 😆 )

Oh Re Kanchi, Kaanch Ki Gudiya
Hothon Mein Baandhe, Prem Ki Pudhiya
Naa Unhe Khole, Na Moonh Se Bole
Palkon Pe Rakhke, Aankhon Se Tole


Jai: Doctor..meri wife pe nazar mat lagaye….check kijiye na…
,Lol, I am thinking that Jai should put his wife behind
a bedsheet and let the doctor check her up from behind
the purdah, he doesn't want the doctor's nazar on him!


Bani, stamps on hi foot!! 😡

Jai (lets out a small cry): Oww!!!

OWww, that hurts Bani, careful na?

Doctor pulls out his stethoscope, gets up to check Bani.

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Bilkul theek ho beta…sab kuch normal lag raha hai…

Bani: Haan doctor…mein theek hoon…khamakha yeh meri chinta kar rahe hai!!! 😛

Jai: Kyun na karoon…meri wajahse tum bemaar pargayi…

Bani: Ab aap yahaan shuru mat hojaye…subah baat ki thi naa…its not ur fault!!

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Arre jhagar kyun rahe ho…kya baat hai??

Jai, Bani ab bilkul theek hai, doctor certificate bhi mila, now bhaag
yaha se aur do some thing outside
!!
😉😉😉 Jai: Woh actually kal raat hum baahaar garden mein dinner kar rahe…isne ek red dress pheni thi…then…actually it started with her payal coming off and I put it back on…started raining…and …(Jai ab saari details iss doctor ko bataoge!! 🤣)

😆
Yeh Jai bhi na, aur kya hua Jai, after you took her into
the bedroom?

Bani: Mr. Walia!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡

Jai: What??? Doctor saab pooch rahe hai toh bata raha hoon!!! 😆

Dr. Jhunjhunwala: Nahin…theek hai beta…aage mat bataao…mein samaj gaya…(starts singing)

"pyaar hua iqraar hua…pyaar se phir kyun darr ta hai dil" Kya romantic gaana tha na Raj Kapoor aur Nargis bearish mein….mujhe meri biwi ki yaad aagayi…usse bhi barish mein bheegna bahut pasand tha, pata nahin ab upar kiske saath romance kar rahi hogi!!! 😆


Haila, yeh doctor bhi bahut romantic ban gaya, aaj!!

Jai: Great song doc!! 👏 But I would have sang… "zindigi bhar nahin ..bhoolenge woh barsaat ke raat" 😆 😳 (yes Jai I think a lot of us won't forget that night! 😳 😳)….Waise raat ko toh kuch aur hi gaana baj raha tha mere dimaag mein: "Tip Tip barsa paani…paani ne aag laagayi…"

Bani, gets up…pulls Jai up too….but he continues singing

Jai: "…aag lagi dil mein toh…."

Bani: Bye doctor!!

Jai: "Dil ko teri yaad aayi"

Jiya bequaraar hai, chhaayi bahaar hai,
aaja more baalma tera intezaar hai - 2
Jiya bequaraar hai
1 -- Ho... Suraj dekheN chanda dekheN,
sab dekheN hum tarseN ho, sab dekheN hum tarseN -- 2
Bahar kii barsaat balamva, dil mein aag lagaaye --2
Dil mein aag lagaye..Jiya bequaraar hai


Dr. Jhunjhunwala 😆: Such a cute couple…

Bani (outside): Aakhir muh khol he diya na…chup chaap baith nahin sakte!!! (hands on her hips) 😡

Jai: Naraaz kyun hoti ho…woh doctor ne poocha isiliye…aur tumhe toh pata hai mein jooth nahin bolta! (Bahut honest and shareef hai humaara Jai!! 😉 😆)

Phir shuru ho gaya, Jai you remind me of little Johnny (Taz, do you want me to send you little Johnny jokes?) -

Bani, folding her arms looks the other way!!

Jai: Bani…sorrryyyy…sweetheart…maaf kardo…pweeeeesssseeee…..look I'm making a really sweet face!!! 😊 😊 😊(Bani turns and looks at him…and just melts seeing that adorable face!!) (Haiiiiiiiiiii…I'm melting too…that adorable face!!! 😍 )
-Me too sweetheart, me too!!


Bani: Maaf kiya…waise bhi aapse zyaada der naraaz nahin re sakti…and u know it too!!!

Jai 🤗: Awwww…thank u…thank u….mwah!!! ❤️….Accha Bani…bolo tumhe kahaan jaana tha aaj?

Bani: Urrmmmm…hum Nakki Lake chalte hai…kal aap mujhe Lake Pichola mein le gaye…toh aaj mein aap ko Lake Nakki ki ser kaarati hoon…theek haina..wahaan boating karenge…bahut log hote hai wahaan…fun atmosphere hai….aur

Jai (interrupts): Bahut log hai…damn!!! There I was thinking…ke tum mujhe koi sun saan jagah pe le jaogi…like that camping expedition!!! 😉 😳 (Jai control!!)

- I like to see Jai outta control, not in control😉😉😉
Bani: Ha!! Keep dreaming!!!

Jai: That I am 😍 😍….wow…Bani…my wild Bani…!! 😍

Bani: Chaliye yahaan se…hameha koi naya drama shuru kar dete hai!!!

Both get in their car and drive off towards Nakki Lake.

When they arrived at Nakki Lake, Jai glanced around and admired the beautiful hills and rock formations surrounding the lake.

Jai: Bani bahut khoosoorat jagah hai yeh…lake palace hotel jaise hi jagah…lekin yahaan log bahut hai…

Bani (excitedly 😃): Chaliye na boating karte hai…bahut dino baad yahaan aaye hoon…chaliye na...(dragging Jai along)

Jai: Aa raha hoon baba…calm down…itni jaldi kisilye!!!
- Phir Khargosh ki tarah khood ke chal rahi hai, arre baba, she needs to be in control....pregnant hai, maa ban ne wali hai!! 😡😡

They reach the lake, where Bani lets go of Jai's hand hurridly walks past, a couple who were about to get on a boat and gets on the boat before them. !!! (queue jumping!!!)

Women: Hey…we we're gonna get on that boat…we were next!!! 😡 😡

Bani (making herself comfy): Sorrryyy…too late….Mr. Walia…chaliye na…(extends her hand out… Jai walks pass the disgruntled couple)

Jai (shrugs his shoulders): Sorry guys…u really did miss the boat this time…😆…better luck next time!!! (gets onto the boat, sitting opposite Bani and starts rowing the boat out!)
-😆 No pun intended, you missed the boat, what a comeback Jai dahling?

Jai: Bani…u surprise me all the time…I can't believe u just did that…its not like u…tum toh hamesha doosron ke baare mein sochti ho…aaj kya hua.?? (yeahh even I would like to know!!)

Bani: Mr. Walia…yahaan aap pehli baar aaye hai issiliye aap ko nahin pata…bahut der wait karna parta humme…dekhiye na ...kitne boating kar rahe. phir humaara aakhri din hai. Pehle bhi mein Pia aur Rano yahaan pe aate the…toh aisa hi karte the…queue jump karlete the…😆

Jai (rowing out gently): Hmmm…bahut smart ho…

- Especially this Pia, queue kat ne ki adat bahut hai, uss ko! 😡😡😡

Bani (leaning over the edge of the boat…putting her hand in the water): Woh toh mein hoon…(splashing water over Jai!!!) 😆

Jai: Hey!!!!!

She does it again and laughs loudly!!! 😆

Jai: Bani!!! Stop that…poori shirt bheegon di… (haiiii…shirt sukhane ke liye hi sahi, utar do Jai…hum sab readers bade khush ho jaayenge!!) 😉 😳….yahaan boat mein nihlaane ka programme hai!??

Bani: Sorry...(hold hers ears sweetly…then moves close to Jai and wipes his face with her pallu)
-Umm, so cute - I want to see the muscles ripping from the bheegi hui shirt, don't wipe, Bani - let me get my digital camera ready!! 😉😉😉

Jai: Hmmmm…not that's better…😊(dropping the oars (not in the water thankfully…my Jai has brains!!)…grabs Bani!!)

Bani: Hatiye…boat mein yeh sab nahin chalega…(moves back to her orginal seat, but continues to romance with her eyes, making Jai blow kisses at her repeatedly) ❤️ ❤️ (accha nain mataka chal raha hai boat mein!! 😆

- Boat mein bhi chal raha hai, haila, mein mar jawa!!

After enjoying their boating Jai and Bani, came back on land again and ate at a lakeside restaurante, after which they headed for the shopping centres located around the lake. All kinds of handicraft and handiloom products were on offer, from textiles to wood carvings to jewelery . But what really sent Bani in a shopping frenzy was the numerous bangles and silver jewelery shops.
Running upto a bangle shop…she looked at a number of new style bangles whilst Jai stopped at a jewellery shop alongside, spotting something for Bani.

Bani (to the shop owner): Suniye…mujhe yeh rang ki nayi chooriyan bataaye na…(pointing at her mint green saree!)

Vendor: Madamji….yeh rang ki toh bahut.. yeh dekhiye (pulls out a box)…yeh dekhiye…(pulls out another box)…yeh bahut acchi lagenge…har pal chamakti rahengi…

Bani, starts putting them on but was struggling …so the vendor decided to help. He takes her hand and help to put them on.

Meanwhile Jai, was busy deciding whether to purchase the pair of silver earrings he was looking at . He admired them for quite sometime until he glanced towards Bani to see that vendor holding her hand!!! (ag gaya kaam se!!) 😆

-Jai, control yourself buddy, he is only doing his job!! Don't make him eat the chooriyans!!

Jai (puts the earrings down that instant and says to the owner of that shop) : I'll be right back!!!! (storms towards Bani!!) 😡 😡 (Hailaaaaaaaaaa…My Mr. Terminator…😍 )

-Hasta la vista chooriya vendor!!😕😕

Vendor: Madamji…yeh chooriyan aapko aa jayenge…mein phena raha hoon na…

Bani: Ouch!! Thodi tight lagti hai…koi aur size nahin hai??

Vendor: Madamji…yeh chooriyan aaphi ki size hai…mujhe pata hai…

Jai: What the hell do u think u are doing??? 😡 (gripping him by the collar)

Vendor, sits there looking all puzzled ! (bechaare ko English samaj mein nahin aati!!!)

-Mein samjhaoon kya, vendor ji, yeh bol raha hai ki, "Kya narak, pata hai, tum kya kar rahe ho?" literal translation, babes!

Jai: Meri Biwi ka haath chhodo!!!! Varna yeh sab choodiyan tumhaare haath mein phena doonga!!!! 😡 😡

Seeing the anger in Jai's eyes…he lets go of Bani's hand!

Bani: Mr. Walia plzz….chhodiye usse…(Jai lets go)

Jai: Bani…chalo yahaan se…

Bani: Lekin Mr. Walia…yeh chooriyan…mujhe pasand hai…mein…

Jai: Baaki ke main phena doonga!!

Jai (gives a dirty look): Hey…yeh baaki ki chooriyan mujhe do (snatches it off him)...aur yeh lo paise!! 😡

- Poor chooriya walah, Jai bahut possessive ho, yaar!! Take it easy babe, otherwise your BP is going to go up!

Poor vendor was so petrified, that as soon as Jai took Bani away, he pulled the shutter down of his shop!! (…bahut phatti hogi bechaare ki!! 😆)

Bani: Kya zaroorat thi is tarah hungama karne ki…chooriyon waalon kaam hai haathon mein chooriyan phena na…aisa karte hai kabhi. (yeh some do that I know!! 😆)…sab log kaise dekh rahe hai hamaari taraf.

Jai (fuming still 😡 ): Dekhne do…Hoga uska kaam chooriyan pehna ne ka…lekin woh tumhe chooriyan phena kyun raha tha? That's my job…damn him 😡…Bani agar tum beech mein nahin aati toh uska muh todh deta 😡 (I would have love to have seen that!! 😃)…kaise nazron se dekh raha tha tumhe…(takes Bani's left hand)…tumhe choone ka haq sirf mera hai…(puts the remaining bangles on Bani)

-aww, choooooo chweeeeeeeeeett, Jai, you are sooooo macho!!

Bani: Mr. Walia…ab apna mood kharaab mat kijiye…plzzz…forget it….dekhiye kaise lag rahi hai…(shows both her wrists which donned the twinkly bangles)…acchi haina??? (smiling 😊)

Jai: Bani everything looks good on u…(taking hold of her wrists and kisses them.) ❤️

-Awww, 😳
Mere Nehar se aaj mujhey aaya
Yeh peela jora, yeh peela jora
Yeh hari hari chooriyan

-

Ab ke phooli basant meri abba ke ghar
Meri ammi ney aaj mujhey bheyja
Pyari amma ney aaj mujhey bheyja
Yeh peela jora, yeh peela jora
Yeh hari hari chooriyan

Bani (pulls her hands away): Mr. Walia… log humme abhi bhi dekh rahe hai…chaliye yahaan se…(drags him away)

Jai: Arre Bani…ek minute yaheen thero mein abhi aaya…mein apne glares wahaan dukaan pe bhool gaya…(dashes off, the comes back a few minutes later.) …sorry…okay…chale?

They continue walking around the lake, admiring the atmosphere, joking with one another enjoying their time together when Jai spots something.

Jai (looking at sign): Honeymoon point???

Bani: Wahaan se poora Mount Abu dikhay deta hai…wahaan pe bhi sunset ka nazaara bahut accha hai.

Jai: Shall we go??

Bani: Mr. Walia I'd love to…but it's quite a long walk and uphill…thak jaaoongi…I'm already feeling a little tired. 😕

Jai: U are??? Fikar not!!! (picks her up in his arms)…hum aise chalenge!! (Awwww….so nice of him!!!)

- Yes, dear - that's very nice of him!


Bani: Mr. Walia...aap thak jaayenge…kaafi lamba raasta hai…

Jai: Anything for u…. besides u wanted me to get fit what better way!!! Haathon ke saath saath peron ki bhi exercise ho jaayegi…but u have to give me a little treats along the way to keep me going! 😉 (treats??? Well I think I know what they are!!) 😉

Bani: Treats? Such as???

Jai: Meri bholi bhaali Bani…ek aad baar gaal pe kiss karti rehna…toh hum jaldi us point tak ponch jayenge theek hai??

Bani: Aur…agar mein na karoon toh???

Jai: Toh….toh…mein raudonga 😭…udaas ho jaaunga 😔…kya tum apne Mr. Walia ko upset karogi?? (Arre tum kyun raune lagoge Jai…hum sab hai na…line se hum sab bhi kiss karte rahenge!!! 😳 😳 😉)

Bani, shakes her head.

Jai: Then shall we get going?? (moves his cheek forward)

Bani, kisses him gently.❤️



Aaja maahi mere, aaja maahi mere
Aaja maahi mere aa
Aahista pukaaro, sab sun lenge
Bas labon se choo lo, lab sun lenge
Haan, aankh bhi kal se phadak rahi hai, aaja
Aaja maahiya, aaja maahiya, aaja

Aaja maahiya, ho, aaja maahiya
Jai: Now lets goooooo!!!! (starts running with her in his arms…making her laugh)

Around 20 mintues later, Jai and Bani finally reach Honeymoon Point. Completely exhausted, but making it out as if he wasn't, Jai gently settled Bani down on a wall and sat down next to her.

Bani (looking at him all worried): Bola tha na maine ke aap thak jaayenge.

Jai (breathing heavily): Nah..nahin…I'm fine….really….(taking her attention away from him)…Bani yahaan se Mount Abu kitna bada lagta hai…haina?

Bani: Haan….lekin Mr. Walia…aap…(still worried)

Jai: I'm fine Bani…just need to catch my breath and I'll be fine.

Bani: Aap thodi der araam kar lijiye…(takes his head and puts it in her lap)

Jai (smiles 😊): If u put it this way…araam karhi leta hoon...(closes his eyes)

- Bechara thak gaya!!


Bani,wipes the sweat off his forehead then, soothingly runs her fingers through his hair.

Jai: Mmmmm….that's feels good…(takes her hand a kisses it) ❤️

Bani: Feeling better now?

Jai: Hmmm...hmmm…(opens his eyes and looks up at Bani)

Bani: Humme yahaan pe nahin aana tha…aap kitna thak gaye hai…aap ki tabyat kharaab ho gayi toh?

Jai: Bani…kuch nahin hoga mujhe…(holding her other hand and playing with her fingers)… besides…its our last day here…we need to enjoy ourselves…I love it up here…its so peaceful and secluded.

Bani: Toh aap isiliye yahaan pe le aaye mujhe?

Always thinking about one thing, one track mind hai!!


Jai: Aur nahin toh kya…waise mujhe tumhe kuch batana bhi tha. (sits up again)

Bani: Kya? 😕

Jai: Bani, maine decide kiya hai ke jab hum wapas Mumbai ponchenge…main apni saari property, business tumhaare aur hamaare bacche ke naam kardoonga.

What, he is not planning on kicking the bucket so soon, is he?

Bani: Lekin Mr. Walia…yeh sab karne ke zaroorat hai…sab aap hi ke naam pe rehne dijiye…mujhe toh in sab baaton se koi interest hai…aap ko toh pata hi hai…

Jai: Haan pata hai…lekin Bani…kal ko kya ho kisi ko kuch nahin pata…I need to think ahead. (haila Jai why u talking like this!!! Mere hote hue kuch nahin hoga!!! 😃)

Bani: Mr. Walia…aisi baatein karna band kijiye….mujhe kisi bhi cheez se koi matlab nahin…bas aap mere paas rahiye…aur kuch nahin chahiye mujhe…(hugs him tightly 🤗)

Jai: Bani, tum toh serious ho gayi…mein toh tumhaare saath hi rahunga na…bas yeh sab formalities poori karna chahta hoon…try to understand me….it necessary

Bani: Mr. Walia, (looks him in the eyes) Mein aapki baat samajti hoon…lekin

Jai: Lekin Kya?

Bani: Ghar mein aur log bhi hai…woh sab kya sochenge…mera matlab…

Jai: U mean Jigyaasa.

- Darn, I had forgotten about her, I am going to kill her if she says anything to Bani!! 😡
Bani, goes quiet.

Jai: Maana ke woh meri behn hai aur uska meri property pe bhi haq parta hai…I'm aware of that…but Bani…ur my wife…u have far more rights aur ab hamaara bachha bhi aane waala hai…I need to consider everything. Bani, tum Jigyaasa ki chinta mat karo… main hoon na, main usse samjhaunga…now smile.

Bani, gives a half hearted smile knowing that though this property thing seemed simple for Jai…she knew it wouldn't go down well with Jigyaasa.

!! Aww, Bani - don't worry, everything will be all right - sweety pie..

Jai: Accha Bani…yeh dekho main tumhaare liye kya laya…(puts his hand in his pocket and pulls out a silver pair of drop earrings)

Bani (smiling widely 😊): Wow!!! Kitni khoobsoorat hai!!!

Jai: Pasand haina? Main yeh dekh raha tha jab woh chooriwaala tumhe…anyways… phir wapas mein lene gaya. Acchi lagi na?

Bani: Bahut!! 😊

Jai: Lao mein phena doon..(he takes off her earrings gently, putting them in his pocket…and puts the silver ones on…softly kissing her ear each time ❤️ ….the wind picks up a little blowing her hair around and making the the earrings sway gently and shimmer in the late evening sunshine)….. Perfect!!!

!!Chooo cute, Jai stop staring at her man!!
Bani: Thank you!!! (kissing him softly on the lips…then breaking away)…..Ab hum wapas chale? Agar sooraj dhalne tak rukenge toh wapas jaane mein mushkil hogi…bahut andhera hoga raaste mein…and I will walk down with u this time…theek hai?

Jai: Theek hai sweetheart…(pulls her up…start walking down)…Bani, hum yahaan Honeymoon point dekhne aye the…lekin hum toh ek doosron mein hi lage rahe…(chuckles)…waise ek baat poochu Bani…aise kaunsi jagah hai is duniya mein joh tum jaana chahti ho?

Bani: Mr. Walia…agar aap mere saath hai toh mein kaheen bhi jaana pasand karungi…(holds his hand tightly)
!! Any where with you, Jai - Mujhe bhi leke jao na?

Jai: Phir bhi Bani…koi toh jagah hogi??

Bani: Urrmmm….i would like to go Paris one day.

Jai: Paris! I will keep that in mind now…after our baby is born I will take u both.

Bani: I would love that.

!! I too loved it, Champs elysees, versailles palace,eiffel tower, I wanna go again...

Both continue chatting to one another as they made their way down the hill.

They shopped a little more picking up a few gifts for the family members then dined near the lake again, before they made their way back home. They arrived back home around 11pm and Jai immediately fell on the bed in exhaustion.

Bani: Mr. Walia…aaj bahut thak gaye aap…mein aapke liye kuch garam drink laati hoon…(about to head off to the kitchen…but Jai stops her by holding her hand)

Jai: Rehne do…yahaan aao…(makes her lie down on the bed and snuggles upto her)…I love u Bani…I love this place Bani…I love everything here….I don't wanna go back to Mumbai!! (even I don't want u guys to go back!!! 😔 )

Me too, don't let them go!! Let's go to Paris instead!



Bani: Aapse aur iss jagah se mujhe bhi bahut pyaar hai…magar ek na ek din toh wapas jaana hi tha…I will really miss this place.

Jai: Bani, shayad mein iss jagah ko tumse bhi zyaada miss karunga

Bani: Woh kyun?

Jai: Woh issliye kyunki yahaan aane ke baad hum dono ek doosren ke bahut zyaada kareeb aagaye…shayad Mumbai mein bhi hum itne kareeb nahin the…I feel I know u a lot more now.

Bani: Accha…kya jaana hai aapne mere baare mein??

Yes, dear - what do you know that you didn't in Mumbai?


Jai: Well for one ur not such a bholi bhaali ladki…(rubs his nose against hers…making her blush 😳)…masti mazaak karna tumhe bhi aata hai…aur tum mujhse bahuttttttttt pyaar karti ho…(hugs her tightly 🤗)…I will always cherish the moments we have spent here in Mount Abu….especially that camping trip. ❤️ ❤️

Bani: I knew u were coming to that!!! (even I did! 😉)

- Even I did 😉😉😉



Jai (sniggers): Kya karoon…that was some experience 😳…okay u tell me what has been the highlight of this trip for u??

Bani: Sab hi pal aapke saath bahut enjoy kiya maine…woh Lake Palace Hotel mein sunset dekhna…camping ka trip…Udaipur….but…

Jai: But what?

Bani (looks up at Jai): The moment I will always remember…is that day in the lift!!! (haha!! 😆) Jab baby ne aapko muh me kick kiya….that's was soooo funny…starts laughing!! 😆 😆

- It sure was funny!! 🤣🤣


Jai: Baniiiiiii!!!! (moves onto her and starts nuzzling her neck crazily)


Bani, giggling, pushes him away and gazes in his eyes.

Jai (softly): Love u!!!

Bani (softly too): Love u even more!!! (holds his face and both lock lips and kiss the night away!) ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

🤣Love you even more, I love you, I love you, I love you!

🤣


…to be cont!

Okay friends…sorry if I bored u with this part…was going in and out of my writing mood for this part…😕 plzzzzz do continue to leave ur comments…would love to hear ur thoughts. Sorry about any mistakes. Next part…JB leave Mount Abu and head back for Mumbai!!! 😉
Keep them comments coming!!! 😃

Taz! 😊


What you talking about lady, I loved it, I don't want them to go to Mumbai, I want them to go to Paris, please??

Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago

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