DARE TO DREAM-CHAPTER 32 ON PG 70 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
awesome...
read it in a go...
continue soon :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
superb but short update yar...
woah sam arjun already know about her but how????
ohh no poor girl.girl suffering from that disease...
shreetu were shocked to see her in the.list of accused...
precap is very interesting...
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
it was awesome update dear.
so samjun knows about riya.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
hey guys,
thanks for the responses for this update. this shows your appreciation which gives me confidence to continue writing. i know i have'nt been pming for the past couple of times but that was because i am a little busy in asli duniya. i will post the next update within 2-3 days. but guys, i have a question. i have noticed that for the past couple of times my other ff raaz has been getting less number of responses. is it because you are not aware of it? is it because something is wrong in that story, guys, it would really help to know if i am going wrong in my stories. so if u feel it is going to long or getting too complicated then please do tell me because then only i will be able to rectify it? although i have decided on the basic outline of both of the stories but i will discontinue raaz later on if i don't get responses. 

so please do tell me if you feel something is wrong in this or that story. i will pm when i post the next update of both the stories together.

abjeya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
nice but short ...!!!
so etf is now aware of riya..!!!
what will happen now?
continue soon..!!
P.S. your raaz story rocks...!! i totally love it...!! so don't you even think of discontinuing that one๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
teaser
"no, you all don't have any right over her. you all could'nt protect her before then how can you protect her now."
"enough" said a voice which stunned everyone.


he steathily approached her. she was busy in shifting the boxes. it had to be quick and silent. that was what the client demanded. he raised the plastic.

"what?when?"


update this week. pakka
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Nice teaser...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
the teaser is quite interesting...
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
OMG Samjun n Aisha knw about her...!!!!
Precap looks damn scary...!!!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Hey loved ur story
Plz update it
Add me in buddy list
Plz plz
Pm me plz