Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 16)

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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blablabla_mo7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

I just read 28 & 29 in one go.. Omg awesome... Can't believe the story has progressed so fast in these 2 chapters but the main part is to come after this, Saddu Singh vs laddoo in one house and together... Can't wait!!!! It's been such cute 2 updates and 29 has been really funny at some parts with Arnav on his struggle with the sherwani n wedding rituals and laddo cooking. Can't wait for continuation

Thanks for the frequent update too ya,.

PS congrats for hitting thread 16!

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sugarbird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

awesome...👏👏
thoroughly enjoyed the update
atlast wedding happened successfully..

updates after wedding was hilarious... u hav brought out the humour and maturedness in ur writing.
appreciate ur work... can't wait to read more... ur updates makes us very curious to know what next...

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Parisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Mubarak Hoo Mubarak hooo

ArHI Vivaah Sampand hua :P lolz

Arnav's irritation with his outfit was so ASRish rofl ...
loved the update .. finally they are married and i think Khushi's halwa is just gonna be perfect as its his Mrs.Raizada who made it after all ;)

Congos for new thread

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1987Trisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

wow..wow...wow...AWESOME..

so finally our firang hero and desi heroin got married...😉😉

And Arnav has to eat the halwa cooked by Khushi...this a simply a torturer..poor Arnav😆😆

I loveddd the morning scene...the way you have described it...simply superb..

plzzz update next part soon...plzzz

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Really really nice n awesome update.

Yipeee finally Arnav n Khushi are married.

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Smiley1279

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

that was hilarious...cant wait to read what happens next

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namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Amazing. ...they got married. ...

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CRAZY4CARTOON

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

awesme
Firangi Raizada really
Poor Firangi Raizada not even
able to
save himself from his bride
cooking
lol

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Leena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Vats!! :)

Its always for your PM that you religiously send that i never had to stalk your threads!! Too busy to note the rest of the contents i simply dive into the update as soon as i spot the notification ... else i would noted the number of threads we have already made it to!! shucks! Seriously!? 16th thread!? whoa! Vats ... you sure are getting popular! *wiggling eyebrows* he he he

And now for the update!!

Loved the hatke description you decided upon for the marriage bit! I thought the entire scene will be showcased from Arnav and Khushi's aspect! But what turned out is much to my liking and not dragging the sequence!... :)

Aha! Finally He made Khushi 'his'! *wide grin* But wait i guess that is far from truth if you ask me...

After the entire Rishab fiasco... to expect things to go all lovey dovey between them will be foolish!! The story will live up to the title in true sense when he gets Khushi to really become his... heart and soul...

From how I see it... Khushi is just too overwhelmed abt the marriage for reason related to her Bade papa and Buaji still remaining with her for life! Never once i guess she must paid detailed attention to the prospects of she living with her husband... for her husband!!

The day this happens is when Arnav would have truly achieved his goal of 'Making Khushi Mine' :)

Vats ... amazing narration!

Bring it on! waiting for the next! :)