GLUE. A one shot on Astha and Shlok. - Page 4 | Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon... Ek Baar Phir

naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: tibs09
Naina ..this is eerie just yesterday I was thinking about masterclass and thinking thst some one should write on these two also and here comes onr ofvmy favorite authors with her impeccable word weaves...loved it

Hey hey! I've just started watching this show and am intrigued now. I know I really ought to update masterclass but seem to be out of inspiration. Thank you for the support and encouragement.

Naina😳

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aashiqua
very well written... you are a
good writer... keep up your good
work... This is really awesome...

Thank you😳

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naina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ManrajT
Brilliantly written wow!!

Thank you😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Wow that was great thank you

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543412

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

awesome one shot...may be you would consider extend it into some more parts ;)

good luck...do keep writing, you are really good at it

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

👏👏👏 Edited by ArhiIPKKND - 10 years ago

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janestone6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

The confession.

Beautifully written. She knew how to push him. Bring in his past and he'll spill the beans in anger. 😆

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Oh. My. God. Naina!

This is the first time I think I've read anything from you before but I have to say - it is probably one of the best OS's I've read in my life!

Even though it was inspired by the show - the way you described it added a whole new dimension to the whole scene! Your writing skills are honestly phenomenal! Like maybe you should consider writing a book? 😆 I would buy it for sure. :)

The level of detail was wonderful - not too little and not so much that you get confused in the words. It was PERFECT!

And your extension to the scene was BEAUTIFUL!

Yep, the joke is on Shlok and his plan did royally backfire!

Honestly looking forward to read more from you. Hope you will write something more soon and when you do, please pm me! 😃

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