My first FF: "SOULMATES" CH: 4,part 2 PG 18 NEW updated - Page 13

Originally posted by: vivkriti

Lovely updates. You have written it fabulously. Loved Kittu - Shradha phone canvo. Their scenes are always amazing. Great work dear.👏

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf

Wow 😃 loved this chapter. 

I like how kunal came into Shraddha's dream as the shepherd. Had it pictured in my head.

I still enjoyed the chapter even if there weren't shranal or anki scenes. We had a kittu/shraddha scene though. I liked their chemistry your story. Their friendship is so beautiful. Even anand and shraddha's part was amazing. Such a contrast to what we saw in the show but I hope things will become better between them. 

Your such a good writer. Felt like I watched an episode.

Looking forward to the next part.

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

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Girl..u are a power house of talent!!👏👏

Completely god gifted & pro writer!!!⭐️⭐️

U rock dear!!!!👏👏

the update was very interesting & engaging!!!! i'm so hooked to ur story!!⭐️⭐️

It's an absolute treat reading your works & so proud to be your friend!!❤️

Originally posted by: niki_2293

Awww thanks a ton Rose dear...u are such a sweetheart!! Love u loads dear!!❤️

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

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Super se upar update...loved it ...loved it  to the core

Shraddhas thought process was explained really well...it was too real because many people(including me) think too much about the incidents happened in the whole day and analyse them too much 😆...i loved the way Shraddha was trying to distract herself...sheep count nd thinking about jaya 😆 but please please dont start Shranal lovetrack so soon as first i wanna see Shraddha as strong individual then lovetrack will be okay with me but at the same time i want Kunal to continue his naughty actions 😆...messages exchanged between Shraddha and Kittu were damn cute and their conversation just made me laugh...Kittu is really cute...Anand just smiled and she is so happy...what will happen when Anand will fall for him...i think im dreaming too much...just wondering how will Anand fall for kittu and how he will confess his feelings...please yaar fast track their story...sorry sorry for being too demanding...so coming back...i also loved how Shraddha was eating her breakfast at fasttrack...ditto me as im always late 😆...u rocked tht scene in ur writing...i also liked Anand nd Shraddha fighting scene...the way Shraddha sprayed air freshner...after this i was laughing too much tht everyone around me start giving me weired looks 😆...i fight with my brother like this...u might not believe but this is truth...i cant explain fights otherwise everyone will stop interacting with me...me and my brother love each other but fight like hooligans 😆...i loved the way Shraddha was chanting I will be dead today and Jaya coming there just made me laugh more harder...Shraddha rxn tht kunal is out for one week was out of world...but i really hope she is not safe 😆...oh god i again started demanding...sorry nikki its just tht im liking the story so much tht i cant wait to know what will happen next 😃...Nikki u are fab writer...just in love with ur writing...Hope we like it...aree i loved it...it was totally Happy reading...Honestly speaking nikki i didnt missed Anki nd Shranal as u write the scenes so well tht for me Anand and Kunal was present in Kittu nd Shraddhas thoughts...i dont know whether im able to explain my point or not but just wanna say it was so well written that i could actually imagine everything...a big thanks...as after reading this i feel tht MB is still there...thanks for making me smile...thanks for PM...eagerly waiting for next update...so sorry for delay yaar...i know as we wait for update u wait for everyones feedback and wait is most difficult thing to do...u make efforts nd we cant even comment on time..i know its unfair but from next time ill try to be on time 😊

Originally posted by: najialuv88

@niki so sorry dear but im very busy, currently packing and have not had time to settle down. I will read and comment once im available so sorry dear 🤗